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Deathclaw Chameleon
Look, Ma! Two Heads!
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 Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 17:08 Post subject: Fate's Lullaby |
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This is only for myself and Sin Angel to write in.
It was dark, and Cornelius set his eyes under his dark hat at the brahmin in front of him. Two indivuduals occupied it, and Darkhound was on a mission to capture them; dead or alive. He readied his holster, and muttered under his breath.
"Let's see how you escape me this time, punks."
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alec
Poète maudit oTO
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It's "individuals", not "indivuduals".
Also: how does one "mutter under his breath"? It's a little weird, no?
Alsoplustoo: this is a forum. This means that threads are open to everyone. If you want something special just for you and Sin Angel, why don't you two PM each other, eh?
Just saying, dude.
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verevoof
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Agreed. PM each other, review the end result, getting rid of mistakes, clichés, and whatever may not make sense. And then share it with everyone.
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Sin Lucifel Angel
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That's what I thought we were gonna do to tell truth
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Whatever floats your stinking pretty little boat. ~By Me!
I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it. ~By Anon
The penguins stole my sanity... ~ By Anon
I'm waaaay off the boarder line of sanity. ~By Anon
Hehehe I'm the Queen of Crazy Town and Ya'll're mah citizens. ~By Me
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Deathclaw Chameleon
Look, Ma! Two Heads!
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