General Discussion Thread of DOOM

Discussion in 'General Discussion Forum' started by TorontRayne, Jan 3, 2015.

  1. Crni Vuk

    Crni Vuk M4A3 Oldfag oTO Orderite

    Nov 25, 2008
     
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  2. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005


    I need a thousand dollars. Paypal up soooooonnnnn.
     
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  3. Crni Vuk

    Crni Vuk M4A3 Oldfag oTO Orderite

    Nov 25, 2008
    You could always start a kickstarter/Patreon/gofund me thing.

    IMA DEVELOPER! BIGLY! DOOMZ MOD! FUND ME!
     
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  4. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005


    GOLIATH BITCH! Looks good.



    Saw this and it really bugs me how the nose is off.

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  5. Walpknut

    Walpknut This ghoul has seen it all

    Dec 30, 2010
    Had to do some Superhero designs for a Government agency.

    Colors haven't been chosen yet.

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  6. Atomkilla

    Atomkilla Hazel Hegemon oTO Orderite

    Dec 26, 2010
    Dude on the right has weird legs. Looks like an unnatural position.
     
  7. Crni Vuk

    Crni Vuk M4A3 Oldfag oTO Orderite

    Nov 25, 2008
    Maybe that's his super power?
     
  8. Walpknut

    Walpknut This ghoul has seen it all

    Dec 30, 2010
    Yeah the leg is kinda fucked. Will fix that later.

    Edit:
    Attempt 1

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    Better? Worse? The same?
     
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  9. Atomkilla

    Atomkilla Hazel Hegemon oTO Orderite

    Dec 26, 2010
    Better, but still weird. His upper thorax is leaning forward to one side, whereas his legs, particularly his right leg, are kind of unnatural positioned. Doesn't look comfortable.
    I get it's in the middle of the action scene, but that doesn't look like healthy running or jumping tbh.

    Also, chick on the left has her femur maybe a bit too short, but I'm not sure on that one.
     
  10. Hassknecht

    Hassknecht For hate's sake Admin Orderite

    Aug 16, 2010
    He looks like a footballer attempting a kick.
     
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  11. zegh8578

    zegh8578 Keeper of the trout Orderite

    Mar 11, 2012
    The running guy back-kicking leg would look better if the knee was facing straight down and not out to the side. Ideally there should be no reason for a leg/thigh to wheel sideways during a run. Possibly, the foot and heel could be entirely obscured behind his thigh, from this angle

    I like the angles of the punchy guys punchy hands, but his crotch bothers me
    I think in cases like these, you're gonna have to face the dilemma: Give him really tight pants - and a big manly balls-and-penis-shaped bulge - or not give him tight pants at all. I was never a fan of the whole castrato style often seen in superhero comics etc, that's just my personal taste though. I always opt for baggier pants in these cases, because I'm not too keen on detailing the otherwise resulting man-bulges.
     
  12. Hassknecht

    Hassknecht For hate's sake Admin Orderite

    Aug 16, 2010
    I mean, still more anatomically correct than Rob Liefeld.
     
  13. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005
    Actually he kinda runs like me which is to say like a huge faggot sadly so if that was your goal then well done. I suggest Fagula for a possible hero name.
     
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  14. Walpknut

    Walpknut This ghoul has seen it all

    Dec 30, 2010
    I can't detail a bulge with balls and dick for an Agency's campaign guys. But I'll keep the other observations in mind. I will correct some of it while vectorizing the characters.
     
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  15. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005
    They did it for Alice in Wonderland. We believe in you.

    Edit: Check fire: Ariel/Little Mermaid. Mixing up my princesses.
     
  16. MutantScalper

    MutantScalper Dark side in da houssah

    Nov 22, 2009
    Sometimes people kinda 'rag doll' into some really weird body positions where you think "the bones in that dude are broken" but then they're fine afterwards.
     
  17. Aaron819

    Aaron819 First time out of the vault

    May 17, 2018
    Came to this thread to talk about DOOM, slightly disappointed.
     
  18. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005
  19. Walpknut

    Walpknut This ghoul has seen it all

    Dec 30, 2010
    I did this one for fun.

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  20. TorontRayne

    TorontRayne YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND THIS TITLE Staff Member Moderator Orderite

    Apr 1, 2005
    Very SMT-esque. Well done. Imitating a slightly more abstract form works best with your style imo. You have a firm grasp of color theory already so you are good on that front. The only part you need to work on is liking Pokemon so much. It's unnatural.

    :razz: