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Discussion in 'General Discussion Forum' started by TorontRayne, Jan 3, 2015.
I need a thousand dollars. Paypal up soooooonnnnn.
You could always start a kickstarter/Patreon/gofund me thing.
IMA DEVELOPER! BIGLY! DOOMZ MOD! FUND ME!
GOLIATH BITCH! Looks good.
Saw this and it really bugs me how the nose is off.
Had to do some Superhero designs for a Government agency.
Colors haven't been chosen yet.
Dude on the right has weird legs. Looks like an unnatural position.
Maybe that's his super power?
Yeah the leg is kinda fucked. Will fix that later.
Better? Worse? The same?
Better, but still weird. His upper thorax is leaning forward to one side, whereas his legs, particularly his right leg, are kind of unnatural positioned. Doesn't look comfortable.
I get it's in the middle of the action scene, but that doesn't look like healthy running or jumping tbh.
Also, chick on the left has her femur maybe a bit too short, but I'm not sure on that one.
He looks like a footballer attempting a kick.
The running guy back-kicking leg would look better if the knee was facing straight down and not out to the side. Ideally there should be no reason for a leg/thigh to wheel sideways during a run. Possibly, the foot and heel could be entirely obscured behind his thigh, from this angle
I like the angles of the punchy guys punchy hands, but his crotch bothers me
I think in cases like these, you're gonna have to face the dilemma: Give him really tight pants - and a big manly balls-and-penis-shaped bulge - or not give him tight pants at all. I was never a fan of the whole castrato style often seen in superhero comics etc, that's just my personal taste though. I always opt for baggier pants in these cases, because I'm not too keen on detailing the otherwise resulting man-bulges.
I mean, still more anatomically correct than Rob Liefeld.
Actually he kinda runs like me which is to say like a huge faggot sadly so if that was your goal then well done. I suggest Fagula for a possible hero name.
I can't detail a bulge with balls and dick for an Agency's campaign guys. But I'll keep the other observations in mind. I will correct some of it while vectorizing the characters.
They did it for Alice in Wonderland. We believe in you.
Edit: Check fire: Ariel/Little Mermaid. Mixing up my princesses.
Sometimes people kinda 'rag doll' into some really weird body positions where you think "the bones in that dude are broken" but then they're fine afterwards.
Came to this thread to talk about DOOM, slightly disappointed.
I did this one for fun.
Very SMT-esque. Well done. Imitating a slightly more abstract form works best with your style imo. You have a firm grasp of color theory already so you are good on that front. The only part you need to work on is liking Pokemon so much. It's unnatural.