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I have tried to add some action but it is stil wery emotion/talking based and slinky if you shall ad this to your site, run a spelling check i can't get one in a while.
anway here is part two try to dig trough my bad spelling and grammar.
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Then we went out on the waiting room and we were about to go out when the secretary told us to wait.
“Did I earn good now?” I asked, not knowing anything about the outside world.
“Nah, that deppends on how You look at it.”then he spitted on the floor.
“If you decide to live on that only you have earned bad, but if you starts with robbing you will do fine and your salary will rise.”
Robbing? Did he mean stealing from junktown guard and how would that raise my salary?
Before I could ask the secretary sent out a”Hrrrm” and looked at us.
Steven got upp and, picked upp the two cards and two bags.
The he turned to me and gave me one of the cards and one of the bags.
“Your ID and your first pay.”
I locked facinated at the card. It was a peace of paper covered with plastic, and with my name on it and my number 7659 pluss the words “Junktown armed forces.”.
It was signed by the loutenant.
When I turned it around I saw the number for my barrack.
When we got out I was still looking at the card, then suddenly Steven hit me in the face.
“Ehyy what was that for?” I asked him.
“Put the card away, ready your rifle and get that dumb expresion of your face!” he said.
“Ehyy why?”
“Do you remeber the fact that you nearly got killed half an hour ago?”
“Yhea and..?”
“Do you want that to happen?”
“What?”
Then he stopped and looked at me “What?” I said. Then he punched me inn the face so I fell over.
Then he helped me upp, tock my card and put it inn my pocket, and continued talking.
“Now, do I have your atention?”
“Yes, but why did you hit me?”
“Because you were stupid. In the future i will hit you every time you are stupid.”
“Ehh.... why?..........Auchhh.”
Then he ligthed a smoke started walking again.
“From now on I will like you to use your brain, to think with. Think about what you are saying, before you say it and when you walk in the street try to stay alert and prepared for an attack from...”
Then another addict got upp inn front off uss and again i did not manage to think before two shoths was fired and it all was over.
“Yes, I think that is a good eksample.” He said.
Then he holstered his gun and we contiued to walk.
“So what did I just say?”
“Ehh.........Yes that is a good eksample?”
“Good, stay that allert all the time.”
After a while I Had to oppen my mouth.
“Ehh don’t hit me but....”
“What is it?”
“You metioned robbing?”
“Ahh, yes you don’t earn much money in this town from only using your salary. So we found a solution on this, and by: “we” I mean the mercs here in town.”
“What solution?”
“We take the guns from the dead raiders and mercs that attack the town and sell them to a weapon shop.”
“Cool.”
“Mhhm I don’t know about that.” He said and stopped to look upp.
We had gotten to ouer barrack and we went inn.trough the inner wall into the defensive area.
Then we got into ouer barrack and found ouer beds.
“Is there a 7658 and a 7659 here?” a woice said.
We turned to see a man had arrived, “Yea, that us?” Steven said before i could answer.
“Try to get some sleep there will probably be an attack tonight.” He said and left after telling Steven were we should be posted.
It was dark and we could not see much outside the walls as we were standing having guard duty.
“Why? Well the reason is money like anyplace else if the raiders attack with great strenght and qouikly they will be able to knok trought the deffences and steal, for around on or two million dollars.”
“Okey” I said looking out in the dark
Sudenly i thought i saw movment out in the dark.”Ehh I thought I saw something move out there” I said to Steven.
He Looked at me and out in the dark, and asked “Wher did you see that?”
“Right there in front off us.” I said and pointed out in the dark.
Then he yealled out “Who’s there friend or foe?”
Sudenly hell broke lose and bullets flew around us.”Shot” Steven yelled next to me and started shoting out in the dark.
I got upp an fired some shots out there, did not aim for anything particular.
Steven bumped me and eylled “Aim.” While changing an ammoclip.
What to aim for? I thought and looked out in the dark when i saw the fires from the guns.
So I aimed and fired several shots at the fires but I probably did not hit anything either.
Sudenly several raiders ran out off the dark but got driven back by fire from the other soldiers.
Then they came again and I saw one raider that would be a nice target.
I remeberd what Steven had said about trying to get two hits to the chest to kill a person so I aimed for the chest.
Then everything happened in slow motion I saw that the raider was probably not much older than me. With a ordinary face, he did not look that evil as i had dreamed about.
Then I fired the first shot aimed and fired the next wich was a miss and hit him in the sthumach.
He fell over on the ground and tried to creep over to the darkness, wounded but still alive.
I got upp maiking a an easy target but i did not care “You can do it” I wisphered for myself hopping that he would get to safty.I who had never killed before saw that this person was crawlong for his life to get to safty.
Why would not anyone helpe him then he stopped and lay still for a moment then he strted to shacke violently.
Steven trew himself over me and pressed me down “What are you doing man? You were a sitting duck out there.”
I did not care, I had the image off the raider crawling for his life fresh in my memory and when i thought off him shaking i just had to wommit i could not ceep it innside.
Then I cried. Did not care for the battle did not hear the battle, I could only think off the raider shaking as life floded out off him.
anway here is part two try to dig trough my bad spelling and grammar.
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Then we went out on the waiting room and we were about to go out when the secretary told us to wait.
“Did I earn good now?” I asked, not knowing anything about the outside world.
“Nah, that deppends on how You look at it.”then he spitted on the floor.
“If you decide to live on that only you have earned bad, but if you starts with robbing you will do fine and your salary will rise.”
Robbing? Did he mean stealing from junktown guard and how would that raise my salary?
Before I could ask the secretary sent out a”Hrrrm” and looked at us.
Steven got upp and, picked upp the two cards and two bags.
The he turned to me and gave me one of the cards and one of the bags.
“Your ID and your first pay.”
I locked facinated at the card. It was a peace of paper covered with plastic, and with my name on it and my number 7659 pluss the words “Junktown armed forces.”.
It was signed by the loutenant.
When I turned it around I saw the number for my barrack.
When we got out I was still looking at the card, then suddenly Steven hit me in the face.
“Ehyy what was that for?” I asked him.
“Put the card away, ready your rifle and get that dumb expresion of your face!” he said.
“Ehyy why?”
“Do you remeber the fact that you nearly got killed half an hour ago?”
“Yhea and..?”
“Do you want that to happen?”
“What?”
Then he stopped and looked at me “What?” I said. Then he punched me inn the face so I fell over.
Then he helped me upp, tock my card and put it inn my pocket, and continued talking.
“Now, do I have your atention?”
“Yes, but why did you hit me?”
“Because you were stupid. In the future i will hit you every time you are stupid.”
“Ehh.... why?..........Auchhh.”
Then he ligthed a smoke started walking again.
“From now on I will like you to use your brain, to think with. Think about what you are saying, before you say it and when you walk in the street try to stay alert and prepared for an attack from...”
Then another addict got upp inn front off uss and again i did not manage to think before two shoths was fired and it all was over.
“Yes, I think that is a good eksample.” He said.
Then he holstered his gun and we contiued to walk.
“So what did I just say?”
“Ehh.........Yes that is a good eksample?”
“Good, stay that allert all the time.”
After a while I Had to oppen my mouth.
“Ehh don’t hit me but....”
“What is it?”
“You metioned robbing?”
“Ahh, yes you don’t earn much money in this town from only using your salary. So we found a solution on this, and by: “we” I mean the mercs here in town.”
“What solution?”
“We take the guns from the dead raiders and mercs that attack the town and sell them to a weapon shop.”
“Cool.”
“Mhhm I don’t know about that.” He said and stopped to look upp.
We had gotten to ouer barrack and we went inn.trough the inner wall into the defensive area.
Then we got into ouer barrack and found ouer beds.
“Is there a 7658 and a 7659 here?” a woice said.
We turned to see a man had arrived, “Yea, that us?” Steven said before i could answer.
“Try to get some sleep there will probably be an attack tonight.” He said and left after telling Steven were we should be posted.
It was dark and we could not see much outside the walls as we were standing having guard duty.
“Why? Well the reason is money like anyplace else if the raiders attack with great strenght and qouikly they will be able to knok trought the deffences and steal, for around on or two million dollars.”
“Okey” I said looking out in the dark
Sudenly i thought i saw movment out in the dark.”Ehh I thought I saw something move out there” I said to Steven.
He Looked at me and out in the dark, and asked “Wher did you see that?”
“Right there in front off us.” I said and pointed out in the dark.
Then he yealled out “Who’s there friend or foe?”
Sudenly hell broke lose and bullets flew around us.”Shot” Steven yelled next to me and started shoting out in the dark.
I got upp an fired some shots out there, did not aim for anything particular.
Steven bumped me and eylled “Aim.” While changing an ammoclip.
What to aim for? I thought and looked out in the dark when i saw the fires from the guns.
So I aimed and fired several shots at the fires but I probably did not hit anything either.
Sudenly several raiders ran out off the dark but got driven back by fire from the other soldiers.
Then they came again and I saw one raider that would be a nice target.
I remeberd what Steven had said about trying to get two hits to the chest to kill a person so I aimed for the chest.
Then everything happened in slow motion I saw that the raider was probably not much older than me. With a ordinary face, he did not look that evil as i had dreamed about.
Then I fired the first shot aimed and fired the next wich was a miss and hit him in the sthumach.
He fell over on the ground and tried to creep over to the darkness, wounded but still alive.
I got upp maiking a an easy target but i did not care “You can do it” I wisphered for myself hopping that he would get to safty.I who had never killed before saw that this person was crawlong for his life to get to safty.
Why would not anyone helpe him then he stopped and lay still for a moment then he strted to shacke violently.
Steven trew himself over me and pressed me down “What are you doing man? You were a sitting duck out there.”
I did not care, I had the image off the raider crawling for his life fresh in my memory and when i thought off him shaking i just had to wommit i could not ceep it innside.
Then I cried. Did not care for the battle did not hear the battle, I could only think off the raider shaking as life floded out off him.