Art... more or less...

[Scrapper]

I'm slowly but steadily building up enough practical talent to start work on a pulp comic series; these are my early prototypes for the main character.

 

[Deticui]

pretty good, he kinda looks like the main char from 'they live'

crits, first pic, his gun arm should get a little bigger as it comes closer to the camera. perspective being what it is, and all. and he's missing a belly button and has a ginormous 8 pack. good job on the wrinkles though. the belt is lacking a buckle, but thats just nitpicking, really. i cant really tell the detail on the gun, but since i can tell that it IS a gun, thats really all you need. details are nice, but if you can get your point across, they really doesnt matter.

i dont see mich wrong with the second pic, just style issues, but since your style is pretty diff from mine i cant really say that its wrong, just different.

good job on both pics tho, hope to see more.

 

[Scrapper]

Thanks. It was "your" since you were indicating ownership of the style.

And he does have a bellybutton, you're just not looking hard enough.

 

[Spookyfish]

I think his feet look a bit super-mutated on the last picture, otherwise pretty good.

 

[[Rusty Chopper]]

Spookyfish, a full collection of mutated toes! Horrigan, prepare to die...

The pics are good, just one detail that looks doubtful -- the thumb of the left arm, holding the gun (Deagle?) can't be that long.l