Bourgeoisie Progress Report

[Silencer]

Intoxicate posted a report on their work:<blockquote>I'd like to inform you that we've finished our work on the Southern Zone, which amounts to a 1/6 of the whole game area of Bourgeoisie. A separate section called World/South on our site has been opened. Kilan, proved to ba a great coordinator for the work, proving that he can manage the efforts of several people fantastically. The concepts are nearly ready, thanks to our graphic artists very little remains to be done in this part of the world, props to Kubek, Cerebrate, Onebadmotha, Katsumoto, GifteD & Suder. The Concepts, has been updated with a few graphics from the South.
The ChickenHead Team has been joined by a few persons of late, the full list of members can bee seen at the site.</blockquote>Also, the English version of the site is being prepared, we have all the sections translated we're only waiting for the Administrator to finish writing the NewsSystem.

Source: Bourgeoisie: Pearl of the Wastes.

 

[intoxicate]

If someone want to know what our engine can do go here:
http://www.burzuj.svx.pl/index.php?showtopic=1796

(some screenshots and movies)

Now we are working on GER and Russian version of our site.

Can you guys test our translation?
Will be gratefull for that:

Prologue:
http://www.innyswiat.pl/?sekcja,18,7

Russia Zone:
http://www.innyswiat.pl/?sekcja,18,8

Radioactive Swamps:
http://www.innyswiat.pl/?sekcja,18,9

Mutant Liberation Front:
http://www.innyswiat.pl/?sekcja,18,14


Want to know if we can open our eng ver site.

So please, read that and comment, if you have some free time

 

[master_of_flamaster]

It would help us much if some "native speakers" would be kind enough to read those articles/stories and give me some feedback (PM or e-mail).
Remember - if they suck, blame me

 

[Silencer]

I give them the Seal of Approval:

Although it could be polished up, there's just a few fragments that need revision:

Then by the power vested in me by the leader of The Defenders Of Faith, the merciful OW666, I hereby sentence you to die by the hands of one of the chosen gods. May his fury be a cleansing to you and a redemption of your sins!
The city's inhabitant straightened up, showing himself in full to the convict. Six metal arms ended with razor sharp blades half a meter long. It held them like a fan attached to its body. Four legs slowly bending, preparing for a fast sprint. It's armored metal body with strange markings on its chest leaned forward, ready to attack, ready for anything. If this abomination were to have a head, it would surely be looking greedily at its prey, but it had no head at all. In a split second it let out a terrible, loud screech that filled the area, a warning for all intruders. The thing furiously charged with great speed, thrusting its two lower blades in the man's abdomen. The man screamed of terrible pain as the metal horror lifted him up and cut of his legs and arms with one swing its blades. The man's mad screams were silenced with a thrust of all six blades to his chest which changed the convict into a few lumps of bloody flesh. Another cry of pain has been ended and once more silence came to the New City.
The two guards were a long way from the New City's borders when they heard the screams.

 

[intoxicate]

Thanks Silencer , i will send that to MoF.