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This is the first story i wrote for this board, i'm reposting it because it was back in the day when nobody really posted it and i wanna know what more ppl think
Lonely he walks through the wastelands, confused in his life, wondering what he should do or where he should be. He is a mutant, as with other mutants he hates humans, once a slave in the masters army; however with the destruction of the Masters Army he is free, free to do as he chooses. He chose solitude, wandering the wastes he finds a deserted home north of Klamath. The interior is decade yet he finds it pleasing and decides to stay.
After clearing out the rubble and setting up, what he calls home, he realizes that he is tired and hungry from all the work that he has done and sets out to find some food. "Stupid geko's are never around when you need one..." he grumbles as continues to search. Hours pass and no food is to be found he starts to head home when he hears a groan. In a small dense dead forest he finds a slain gecko, no one is around yet the wound is fresh. Looking around seeing nothing he picks up the dead gecko and heads home. "Finaly something to eat, now to get you on a fire!" a small smile appears on his face. Finally he makes it home, he starts a fire, and cooks the gecko. Twenty minutes later, dinner is done, the ravaged, charred carcase is tossed away and he goes to sleep. During the middle of the night he is awoken by the sound of rummaging. The mutant gets out of his broken down bed, which is made of four crates, a board, and a ripped apart mattress, walks into the living room to find a human searching around. "What the hell do you think you are doing filthy human, i will rip you to shreds and feed upon your corpse for days!!" the mutant snarls "WHOA! calm down i just need a place to stay for the night, i'm weak and tired, please let me be!" The mutant approaches the human, grabbing him by the scruff of his neck "I could break you this instant" choking out a gasp a plee the human realizes that his life is over...
"But I will not, instead I will allow you to live throughout the night, but when i awake in the morining I shall kill you, that is if you are still here" and with that the mutant lets the human go. "Thank you" the human mutters as he lays on the cold hard floor "By the way my name is Dreth, like it means anything though" and he closes his eyes. "Why are you trying to be nice to me human? you know I will kill you when I wake in the morning" "Death really means nothing to me, the wastes are harsh, and I am nothing but an outcast to the world. So if you wish to kill me then do so now, i shall not think bad towards you either way" he passes out. The mutant, confused, goes to bed aswell.
The sun rises to a new day. The mutant awakens to find Dreth cooking a golden gecko over a fire. Death holds out a leg to the mutant "I made breakfast, do you want some?" startled the mutant cautiously accepts the leg and sits down. The whole time they eat, there is nothing but silence, they do not look at each other, just stare at the fire. "Why did you not leave?" the mutant asks "Because I have nowhere else to go" "There are plenty of human villages!!" the mutant roars. "yes I know, but like I said last night, I am an outcast, such as you." Silence fills the two outcasts for a moment. "Are you still goin to kill me mutant?" Dreth says with a calm look. "No, I won't, you have been kind to me, why? I don't know, but i do know its not just because I am also an outcast." The two continue to talk for hours, when they hear the sound of gunfire outside the house, yelling, screaming, and death. The mutant looks out the window to see a fellow mutant being attacked by some humans. He runs outside to help the mutant. He grabs the closest human by the shoulder and slams him to the ground, breaking his back. The other mutant runs towards the other human, slamming his shoulder into the humans chest, crushing his ribs into his heart and lungs. The mutant looks at the other, smiling he says "Are you OK?" the other mutant brushesh himself off, looks at him and says "Yeah, just dandy, names Frakkath, and you are?" frowning the mutant says "I have no name" laughing Frakkath says "Then I shall name you...ummmm how about...Beregost?" "Sounds good" they both laugh, not knowing that Dreth is watching them both with terror in his eyes. Dreth walks outside, looks at the two mutants "I'm leaving, nothing good will come if I stay, good-bye." Dreth walks over to the corpse of a human, picks up a desert eagle, and walks off.
Days go by and the two mutants have become good friends. "Hey Beregost, who was that human that was here the day we met?" "Him? I really don't know, i was gonna kill him, but he was kind and I decided to spare his life, I actually thought of becoming his friend, then you showed up" he laughs for a second "Me and a human, it would have never worked, oh well, hey i'll be right back, i gotta take a leack" Beregost stands up and goes outside, does his business, and returns to find Frakkoth dead, his head removed and Dreth standing above him with a katana in his hand. "What did you do!?!?!" Beregost screams "I did what i had to do, now i shall finish" Pulling out the desert eagle he empties the clip into Beregost's chest... "W.wh..why?" gasps Beregost "Because, you would have done the same to me if I had stayed...filthy mutant....good-bye" Dreth turns around and walks out the door. Suddenly he just drops to the ground, laying in a pool of his own blood. Falling to the ground dead, the mutants life over, he realizes that he was never free.
Plz tell me what you think of the story. I purposly left out what Dreth was killed with, so you could add a little bit of your own imagination to the story ^_^
This is the first story i wrote for this board, i'm reposting it because it was back in the day when nobody really posted it and i wanna know what more ppl think Lonely he walks through the wastelands, confused in his life, wondering what he should do or where he should be. He is a mutant, as with other mutants he hates humans, once a slave in the masters army; however with the destruction of the Masters Army he is free, free to do as he chooses. He chose solitude, wandering the wastes he finds a deserted home north of Klamath. The interior is decade yet he finds it pleasing and decides to stay.
After clearing out the rubble and setting up, what he calls home, he realizes that he is tired and hungry from all the work that he has done and sets out to find some food. "Stupid geko's are never around when you need one..." he grumbles as continues to search. Hours pass and no food is to be found he starts to head home when he hears a groan. In a small dense dead forest he finds a slain gecko, no one is around yet the wound is fresh. Looking around seeing nothing he picks up the dead gecko and heads home. "Finaly something to eat, now to get you on a fire!" a small smile appears on his face. Finally he makes it home, he starts a fire, and cooks the gecko. Twenty minutes later, dinner is done, the ravaged, charred carcase is tossed away and he goes to sleep. During the middle of the night he is awoken by the sound of rummaging. The mutant gets out of his broken down bed, which is made of four crates, a board, and a ripped apart mattress, walks into the living room to find a human searching around. "What the hell do you think you are doing filthy human, i will rip you to shreds and feed upon your corpse for days!!" the mutant snarls "WHOA! calm down i just need a place to stay for the night, i'm weak and tired, please let me be!" The mutant approaches the human, grabbing him by the scruff of his neck "I could break you this instant" choking out a gasp a plee the human realizes that his life is over...
"But I will not, instead I will allow you to live throughout the night, but when i awake in the morining I shall kill you, that is if you are still here" and with that the mutant lets the human go. "Thank you" the human mutters as he lays on the cold hard floor "By the way my name is Dreth, like it means anything though" and he closes his eyes. "Why are you trying to be nice to me human? you know I will kill you when I wake in the morning" "Death really means nothing to me, the wastes are harsh, and I am nothing but an outcast to the world. So if you wish to kill me then do so now, i shall not think bad towards you either way" he passes out. The mutant, confused, goes to bed aswell.
The sun rises to a new day. The mutant awakens to find Dreth cooking a golden gecko over a fire. Death holds out a leg to the mutant "I made breakfast, do you want some?" startled the mutant cautiously accepts the leg and sits down. The whole time they eat, there is nothing but silence, they do not look at each other, just stare at the fire. "Why did you not leave?" the mutant asks "Because I have nowhere else to go" "There are plenty of human villages!!" the mutant roars. "yes I know, but like I said last night, I am an outcast, such as you." Silence fills the two outcasts for a moment. "Are you still goin to kill me mutant?" Dreth says with a calm look. "No, I won't, you have been kind to me, why? I don't know, but i do know its not just because I am also an outcast." The two continue to talk for hours, when they hear the sound of gunfire outside the house, yelling, screaming, and death. The mutant looks out the window to see a fellow mutant being attacked by some humans. He runs outside to help the mutant. He grabs the closest human by the shoulder and slams him to the ground, breaking his back. The other mutant runs towards the other human, slamming his shoulder into the humans chest, crushing his ribs into his heart and lungs. The mutant looks at the other, smiling he says "Are you OK?" the other mutant brushesh himself off, looks at him and says "Yeah, just dandy, names Frakkath, and you are?" frowning the mutant says "I have no name" laughing Frakkath says "Then I shall name you...ummmm how about...Beregost?" "Sounds good" they both laugh, not knowing that Dreth is watching them both with terror in his eyes. Dreth walks outside, looks at the two mutants "I'm leaving, nothing good will come if I stay, good-bye." Dreth walks over to the corpse of a human, picks up a desert eagle, and walks off.
Days go by and the two mutants have become good friends. "Hey Beregost, who was that human that was here the day we met?" "Him? I really don't know, i was gonna kill him, but he was kind and I decided to spare his life, I actually thought of becoming his friend, then you showed up" he laughs for a second "Me and a human, it would have never worked, oh well, hey i'll be right back, i gotta take a leack" Beregost stands up and goes outside, does his business, and returns to find Frakkoth dead, his head removed and Dreth standing above him with a katana in his hand. "What did you do!?!?!" Beregost screams "I did what i had to do, now i shall finish" Pulling out the desert eagle he empties the clip into Beregost's chest... "W.wh..why?" gasps Beregost "Because, you would have done the same to me if I had stayed...filthy mutant....good-bye" Dreth turns around and walks out the door. Suddenly he just drops to the ground, laying in a pool of his own blood. Falling to the ground dead, the mutants life over, he realizes that he was never free.
Plz tell me what you think of the story. I purposly left out what Dreth was killed with, so you could add a little bit of your own imagination to the story ^_^
