Fallout Fan Fiction: A HoloDisk Tale.

7ycell

First time out of the vault
Fallout Fan Fiction: A HoloDisk Tale.

[Thanks to “DarkLegacy” for the original concept and idea.]

==HoloDisk Entry – 11th October, 2242. Time: 1343.

<Recording starts> Eight fucking hours in this Virtibird, eight long slow hours, and for what? Our mission was classified as being “Top Priority” by the brass. En route to the mission the Commander dropped us a few hints, he always liked to play mind games with the squad, telling us little snippets of information, not enough to get the whole picture but enough to know a little bit more on why we were doing what we were doing.

“We’re collecting the rest of the Vault 13 Survivors.” He had said, this instantly set my mind working; I had been there when they had opened the vault, we had captured or ‘pacified’ everyone there so how there could be more survivors I don’t know. Perhaps there was a back door to the vault we didn’t find? The only logical conclusion I could come up with is- *muttering in the back round* …Wha? Broken free? Godda-<Recording stops>

<Recording starts> Damn fool Smith didn’t even attach the cuffs properly. Where was I… Oh yes. The only logical conclusion I could come up with is that some of the vault dwellers had left the vault prior to our arrival. I was right in thinking so, when we got to our destination the back cargo door swung down, I held my Laser Rifle ready to kick ass. Then the commander went all serious, as he does, when he’s giving us our orders.
“Kill anything that fights back, capture as many as possible.” I was looking forward to the action after the eight hour flight, the squad piled out of the craft, all of us ready for action and a good fight, we could have a raider camp, or even a larger gang. I was hoping for some real action, like a group of bandits that had got there hands on some energy weapons that might actually be able to hurt us. But no, I step off the ramp and take my first look at our objective, fucking ‘tribals’. I was gutted, nothing they could do could possible even scratch advanced power armour and worse still, they didn’t know it. I made my way into the center of the village, Airoya or Arayo I think it was called, some stupid tribal gibberish, anyway. I walked right into the village, hoping that at least one of them might have a small firearm or at least a cruddy pipe rifle, nope. A hail of rocks began bouncing off my chest plate. One particularly stupid tribal rushed me with a spear raised above he head. He lunged at me, I swung my arm once and the spear broke from his grip, swinging back again I broke his neck with the force of the blow. To my amazement the rest of the tribe followed in his example, even though they saw the consequences. Most of the grunts of the tribe began rushing at my squad with spears and the occasional knife. It was almost fun at first to kick and punch them so hard they flew through the air. Then the commander gave us shit over the radio, saying we were to capture as many as possible. They didn’t hold out long, we killed a few more of them, I personally got my kicks by stamping by armored foot through one of there chests, his ribs caved in under the weight and force of my foot. Watching him cough up blood all over his own face made me smile. Its almost scary that such graphic violence gives me kicks like that but I guess its just what the Enclave has evolved to be. Anyway we loaded up most of the Tribals into the Vertibirds, cuffed and unconscious, the Commander ordered the knockout gas released because these damn fool club thumpers just wouldn’t lie down. What a boring mission, thinking about it now its still a mystery to me why the brass would order such a resource consuming mission for a bunch of fucking tribals! Apparently there village was founded by some of the Vault 13 personnel and the science team want to do tests on them. To hell if I care, I don’t know why the Brass doesn’t just release that poison gas they got stored up right now, anything that survives the gas won’t survive out laser shots. Well… no the brass probably knows what they are doing they have been doing it far many more years than me, me being only 21. Born and raised on the Enclave Oil Rig. It’s a good job the Brass knows what there doing because the President can’t tell his arse from his elbow… < Recording stops>



==HoloDisk Entry – 12th October, 2242. Time: 0821

<Recording starts> Well we spent the night at Navarro, this place is heaven compared to the Rig and it’s a damn nice change of scenery, fair enough that all there is around for miles is an old Gas station and a radiated forest but it’s a damn sight better that the steel walls of the Rig. As soon as we landed the commander gave to order to leave the prisoners where they were, our squad got off the Virtibird and another squad instantly got on. Moments later they took off, from the direction they were heading I can only assume they were heading to the rig. The Brass must really want those club thumpers bad. Apparently we stay here another night and then we get new orders. We have each been designated quarters and have all been issued with standard Combat Armour fatigues for when we are off duty. The Sergeant of this base is a right hard ass, ‘Yes sir, No sir, three bags full sir’ all day long while we stand at our posts making sure no one is going to steal the Vertibirds parked right in front of us… We’re in the middle of no where, the chance that anyone is going to find this base let alone someone who can pilot a chopper is so- RAAH, I hate the damn babysitting jobs. I guess the Enclave have to protect there assets but I say the turrets on the outer perimeter can do that! Damn, I have patrol again in five minuets, I better get ready.. <Recording stops>


==HoloDisk Entry – 13th October, 2242. Time: 0943

<Recording starts> I don’t believe it, we have to stay here, at Navarro for another week! The commander broke the news this morning at squad-brief. It may look a lot better that the Rig but its boring here… there’s no gym, no bar, there’s barley a kitchen for fuck sake. And the chef, granted he tries his best, can’t make much out of dead rat and mole rat. If were lucky we get the specialty of recycled ration packs. I suppose on the upside the social life is better, on the Rig it gets a bit claustrophobic sometime but out here there’s space, and if you want you can volunteer for a perimeter patrol, it’s good to have a walk now and then, clear the mind in the musty dull air of the wastes. The wasteland air almost seems comforting after breathing nothing but regulated air most of your life. Plus there’s this damn cute girl posted outside the mainframe area… I think she’s dating one of the egg heads though. Snookie, or something like that, is the nickname he has for her, I was in there the other day, getting the latest Virtibird upgrades from the mainframe, I noticed that was the password he used to login with, what a fucktard, anyone on the base could hack into the main Enclave network, the first thing they are going to think of is his bitches nick name, him being the head technician and all. I have a close combat training regime with the Quartermaster in fifteen minuets, I’m a Close Combat Specialist Level 7 at the moment, the highest in my squad by far, the Quartermaster is level 8, I think that’s why I have been posted to this training session, I think he wants to try me out, me being ‘fresh blood’ and all. That should be a laugh and I need something to lift my spirits at the moment…*click*………*shuffling of clothing*……......Oop, still on are we. <Recording stops>

==HoloDisk Entry – 14th October, 2242. Time: 1245

<Recording starts>Wow what a fun day I had yesterday, the Quartermaster was a damn good fighter, I could see why he had advanced to Level 8 so quickly, we had a good time tossing and tumbling in the training room, we even got a little crowd gather around and it was all in good spirits, I got a few bumps, cuts and bruises but I dished out a few as well… good news, He has promoted me to Level 8 as well! Wo-hoo! Now I have the base qualifications to apply to be one of Frank Horrigan’s special agent sidemen, working with Sergeant Stone and such. It gets better, there’s a party tonight in the mess… apparently it’s the base commanders Birthday *laughter in the background* as you can hear spirits are high, there’s going to be booze and women a plenty tonight in the mess. *general male chatter and joking in the back ground* Oh yea- Woops, I’m gonna have to make this a qu-ick one, the battery is alm-mos-st ou-t *static* th-ere it go-<Recording stops>

==HoloDisk Entry – 15th October, 2242. Time: 0823

<Recording starts> Ooooh.. my head, I am so hung over, what an amazing night, what worries me is that I work up lying next to the base commander! I swear I didn’t know it was here before she took me to her quarters. She had me sneak out in the morning and said that if I told anyone she would bust me down to her personal foot stool. What a DAMN good lay though, hooo, man she certainly has some assets. The party was amazing, the commander really got hammered I think she’s going to spend most of today in her quarters resting it off. Lucky for her, I have patrol now, I have to walk about 10 miles hung over.. I am not going to enjoy this. <Recording Stops>
 
Not bad. There were a few errors here and there, but nothing you can't fix. You might explain why he enjoys the violence so much. The description of the air outside the base as 'musty' doesn't fit. Overall you did a pretty good job of describing the life of a young soldier. It is boring most of the time. If you really want to increase the realism don't forget to include cleaning weapons and performing maintenance tasks. Maybe capture a conversation between the squad members bitching about someone or something while they are performing one of these tasks. Don't give up, this really wasn't bad. It should be interesting to see what happens once the Chosen One arrives.
 
Thanks for the crit, heres the next installment, please point out mistaked if you see them in this version so I will know what to correct. By the way I am using English Spelling (not American) if that is the cause of the errors of which you speak.



<Recording starts>The patrol helped me get over my hangover, when I got back to base I must have drank at least two liters of water, I’ve got the rest of the day off, seems the Base Commander decided to pull a few strings to make my life easier, probably to make sure I keep my mouth shut about last night. Heard the strangest report today, apparently at around about 2 weeks ago a Virtibird Assault team was dispatched deep into the mainland, someone has discovered a working Posidon terminal and had started getting all cocky with a communications tech on the Rig! What a breach of security, with the right tools whoever it was could have hacked into the whole Rig system via the Sat Uplink. Unfortunately as soon as the Assault team got within twenty miles of the location the radiation levels shot right up and they lost the signal, they searched the area for an hour but still didn’t find anything, all the technicians in our base are now collaborating with the Rig techs to try and see if anyone could of faked the location. …I have to log off now, nearly time to hit the sack and I want to perform a full maintenance on my Plasma Rifle before I sleep… that reminds me I have to get some new Plasma-Coils… I’ll do that now. <Recording stops>

==HoloDisk Entry – 16th October, 2242. Time: 1302

<Recording starts>What a dull day, again the Base Commander has got me the day doing nothing, well a few minor jobs so that no one gets suspicious… clean the vents, a quick patrol of all the base doors to make sure the locks are working- Gah! I would rather be out on patrol or doing my usual duties, none of this lounge around bullshit. I like violence, and I like the feeling of power I get when I beat a tribal to death in my power armour, I don’t know why… I think its just the way I was brought up… being on the Rig and all… Never got told who my mum was and my dad died in a coolant leak four years ago. I was raised by the military… and I live for the military… lounging around the base in my Combat Armour Fatigues is not my idea of a relaxing day.. You know I ha- *alarms can be heard in the back ground* What the!? -*an announcement system starts to talk* ‘Intruder detected in Area 3, Intruder detected in area 3, all personnel to your posts, all personnel to you-<Recording stops>

<Recording starts>*the sound of fire crackling in the back ground and a low tone emergency siren going off* *cough cough* Where is it?! …*cough*… There! *cough* <Recording stops>

<Recording Starts> Jesus, Jesus Christ! …I don’t know how… how the hell… The whole base is on fire! …I don’t… I couldn’t do anything… Oh god… there all dead… *cough cough* …*there is a large pause of silnce where all you can hear is panting, fire in the back ground and the occasional coughing fit* …This… This is the recording of Enclave Trooper H-33-56-62, Navarro… was attacked… I was in my quarters when the genral alarm went off… I was only wearing my combat fatigues, I grabed my Laser Pistol and headed for the source of the gunfire that had broken out, I would of taken my Plasma rifle but it was in pieces at the time, I was doing maintenance on it….*cough-cough-cough* … I think I have inhaled too much smoke… *cough cough* I ran down the hallway, heading for the Mainframe computer room, When the door opened a figure in power armour walked through, I was only in my combat fatigues, the guy in the suit picked me up with one hand and threw me against the wall, the blow was so hard it knocked me for six… as I lay there I watched him blast his way through the base, he didn’t seem to know where he was going which leads me to believe that it was an outsider who had gotten there hands on a suit of Power Armour… He had a small, high caliber pistol… I have never seen one like it… It looked like a cut down hunting rifle, he made short work of the base personnel, what a warrior he was, if he got knocked down he would just get up again and if he took a hit he would fight back with twice as much rage… I have no idea who he was. I only just managed to escape through the ventilation outlet access tunnel, the room where that crazy scientist was keeping a death claw was empty and the door was unlocked, I crawled out of the smoke and out of the main vent just in time to see a car drive away. It must have been him as I have been topside since then and no one else has come past, when I regain my strength and the flames die down a bit I am going to head back towards the base and see if anyone else survived, I only just managed to grab my Holo-recorder and a few spare clips for my Laser Pistol… *cough… cough* …<Recording stops>

<Recording starts> …Well… I got my strength back and headed back into the base after most of the flames had died down… there isn’t much left… a burnt out shell of where the communications tower used to be… I had hoped that re enforcements or a rescue team would be here now from the Rig but it looks like no one managed to get out a warning signal before “HE” shot the place up. I haven’t seen any other survivors and I… I passed out for a while… the fire hadn’t left much when I woke up… I managed to collect some water and food from Chris’s shack… and there were a few spare ‘Small Energy Cell’s left lying around the floor outside next to the corpses, looks like most of the heavy weaponry was taken away… I did manage to salvage a moderately damaged Plasma rifle… I should be able to fix it with the right tools. So… all I have left are these half burnt combat fatigues, a laser pistol with about 6 clips of ammo, some minor food and water supplies and a non functioning Plasma Rifle… None of the Power Armour left on the dead would have been any use… they were far too badly damaged… I am going to wait here the night… the Enclave should send a rescue party or a scout or something when they realize they have lost all contact with the base. …this is Enclave Trooper H-33-56-62, signing off. <Recording Stops>


==HoloDisk Entry – 20th October, 2242. Time: 0723

<Recording starts>I have been waiting here for four days… still no sign of a rescue team… my food and water have nearly run out… and there isn’t any civilization that I can walk to with what supplies and strength I have… I fear I will not last much more a day or two more…*sob* …*clears throat* …*sniff* umm… *deep breath* ….When I get my hands on the son ova bitch who pulled this off I am gonna tear out his fucking lungs and strangle him with them! Mother fucker thinks he can come on to my base and pull this shit off is going to have to think fucking twice! <Recording stops>

A small red light came up on the Holo-Recorder and a female computer voice says;

“Holo-Disk full, please insert replacement disk to continue recording.” My anger peaked and my heart fell.

“Well that’s just GREEEAAAT!” I threw the Holo-disk recorder across the room. I had been staying in Chris’s shack since the fire, my supplies nearly depleted even with military rationing and no hope left of a rescue team I curled up on the bed and tried to sleep.

My best luck to date, I had decided to make a break for the nearest town, I didn’t know what direction or distance that was so I had just started walking into the wastes… after three days my water and food gone I collapsed on the sun baked cracked dirt… I though my time had come and made my peace. I considered taking my own life with my Laser Pistol but decided to do the only honorable thing and let my body dehydrate to the point of coma and eventual death. I was so close to passing out when I heard a voice calling out. I couldn’t make out what it was at first but as I looked up I could clearly see a man in rags accompanied by several large men with metal armour, they gave me water and some food and then they loaded my onto a two headed cow driven cart. I was unconscious for most of the journey and I was far too weak to attempt to talk. When I work up one of the guards in metal armour was sat next to me on a wooden box, I was lying on a bed of rags and rotten mattresses piled on top of each other, I suddenly realized I was indoors. He noticed I was awake and looked down at me; he smiled in a calm way.

“You had a bit of a rough journey from what I heard mate.” I tried to sit up but I was still far too weak.

“No, no, no. you lie down there son, you don’t have to worry about a thing, the caravan driver is a good man, he’ll make sure your ok and you don’t owe him a thing, your in New Reno now so I would watch your step, when you start taking them again. Rest for now, all your stuff is lying on the bed next to you.” A wave of relief swept over me and I allowed my head to collapse back onto the pillow and I fell asleep.
 
Ah...the story is really opening up now. There is a lot going on in New Reno. This could be very interesting...
 
Gets picked up by a caravan, wakes up and someone tells him the caravan master is a good man and that they're headed for New Reno?


......sounds to me like he'll end up as someone's gimp.
 
Maybe the guy 'is' lying to him. Maybe not... There are good people in the world, but not many would go to New Reno, I agree. A crusader might or a fool.
 
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