Mutant Hunter- Slaughter

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Okay my first part was a bit short so I'll ake this one a bit longer and better spelling.
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The four Mutants gathered round the warm fire in the cold desert night, eating the remains of several charred geckos and talking about what to do next.
"Where shall we go now?"Said one with a plasa rifle.
"we go back west, show norie scum what plasma like." Said a mutant with a tiny cranium, waving his weapon around.
"You fool, The Brotherhood Knights are protecting the entire area and some are still attacking!If we go west the Normie's will melt us." Said a huge Mutant with Large metallic armour on his chest.
"Set up a base here. When Brotherhood soldiers come, we be ready and kill them."Said a mutant with an M-16 on his back.
"That good idea! We kill Brothers! Hey! You my brothers? Me kill you?" Said the stupid mutant.
"No, We kill the Metal men, not each other. The Metal men with the big guns, rememer?" Said the one with the plasma rifle.
"Very well then, we will begin construction in the morning. Gail,you're on guard." Said the one in the etal aror to the one with the M-16.
"So be it," Said Gail.
Later on in the night Gail heard a noise. He reached for his M-16. It wasnt there.
"What the..." Were his last words as a on-Slaught of bullets penitrated his skull and his lip body fell to the ground with Hank standing over it with a smoking M-16 in his hands. The noise from the weapon awoke the other Mutants.
"Normie! I kill normie!" screeched the stupid Mutant grabbing his Laser rifle. Hank fired a ultitude of bullets into the Mutants chest and proceeded to fire on the Mutant with a plasma rifle, turning him into a bullet ridden corpse.
The Mutant in metal armour reached for his Minigun, only to have his right hand blasted off.
"Human Scum! I will tear off your...AHHH!" Cried out the Mutant as his legs were crippled.
"Shut your filthy Mouth, you Mutant scum." Said Hank with a look of hate in his eyes."
"I will rip...AHHH!" Shouted the Mutant as Hank blasted open the Mutants guts.
"If you don't shut your outhe I'll shut it for you." Said Hank to the corpse and shut the Mutants mouth. Hank quickly raided the bodies for ammo,a plasma rifle and the geckos.
He sat down on a copse and chewed on the gecko. He finished the gecko and looked around. He could see a team of large figures approaching him from the south-west.
More for him to kill.
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Well that's Mutant Hunter part 2. Hope you like it!
 
You still got a great idea but it's a bit short compared to some of the other stories on the board. You could still use a little more description however.

Keep it comin'.

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Like I said I'm using Soemone else's Internet. It cost them, But next time I write the story up elsewhere and copy/paste it here.
 
Ok i'm continuing work on my website. Which like Slinky's is (at least partially) A fan Fic archive. Do you want yours added. I'll put it on but contact me if you don't want it there.

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Thanks!
I think I'll start work on a MUCH longer next chapter. What is your website? I've seen Slinky's but not yours.
 
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