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The Slave Masters.

The clouded horizon, smog ridden and rusty almost looks unhealthy to even glance at. The post-nuclear smog parts as the hum-vee drags itself and it's crew towards the clouded outpost. The outpost is very porcupine, there's antennas littering higher levels of the military-made buildings. The hum-vee pulls itself through into the facility as the intimidating black steel doors slam behind the stump vehicle.
No one walks the dusty streets during the night except these individuals. Tall and dark they marched to one of the hanger-like buildings.
The re-enforced door slammed almost to attention as the party of five rangers all adorning green assault armour and carrying H&K P90c's entered.
The lead man threw down his weapon but it was cushioned by the nearby clattered office desk. After pinning in some digits in his Pip-boy he removed his helmet. His brown hair was long and scraggy after being clambered into the visored assault helmet.
The other four men seemed to be hero-entranced as if this ranger was their idol. He had all the marks of an experienced outdoors man, he had the stamina and the agility of a well-tuned athlete and his expression was of a watchful nature, he was also an intellect and judging from the books littering his desk labelled "Ranger Ulrich Cougar", Cougar was a lover of literature from before the war.
The other desks that were just as cluttered were labelled in the same manner, "Ranger Conrad Epsilon", "Ranger Joshua Cobalt", "Medic Carlson ‘Glass Jaw' Ferric" and "Ranger Louis Dawson".
Cobalt was rich-chocolate skinned and his dread locked hair ran down his back like a tar waterfall. He looked like he could stop a train with his arms while Glass Jaw was the complete opposite, he was the weedy intellect of the group, his short cut hair and small specs indicated that he would be the perfect role as a doctor for the five men strong ranger party.
Epsilon looked tall and skinny yet his amazing luck and agility had got the team out of some sticky situations in the past. Dawson was the teams search coordinator, it was his job to make sure the team gets to their mission check points, he wasn't their commander but he was a good public speaker, a diplomat. All in all this ranger party was family, their job was to stop the mass of slave traders in east America, their headquarter's a secret to only but a few and their strength, feared by the slavers.
They also tackled raider problems and have casually helped caravan merchants travel from place to place.
It was morning now and the furious smog storm had finally settled. Cougar was outstretched at his desk while Cobalt was piecing together his H&K P90c, his favourite past time was to take apart his weapons and time himself putting them back together again.
Cougar looked up as Dawson clomped into the office.
"You look like a mole-rat's bit you on the ass, Louis!" joke Cougar as he bellowed.
Cobalt had finally finished and watched Dawson pace the room.
"The damn New Reno delivery is late!" He shouted in worry. It was obvious that this man was well-organised, the sort of person who would always carry a pen.
"Give a day or two and they'll be here." Calmed the deep voice of Cobalt.
"It is unlike them I suppose?" questioned Cougar.
Dawson looked more worried by Cougar's remark.
Like a week of Sundays, the days that past were tiresome and uneventful. The truth was that the New Reno delivery was needed for the rangers to continue their work, they had minimal supplies and even minimal patience.
Dawson gathered the team round the conference-like table, himself was seated at the front like a true commander. Glass Jaw was round back refilling empty stimpacs with his own make-shift serum.
"The New Reno delivery has now been four days late and with them..." Dawson puffed, "Without them we're helpless, we're running low on 10mm's and stimpacs." He looked at the rangers as if he needed inspiration to finish his sentence. "So I suggest he travel along the caravan route and hopefully find out what's happened to the missing caravans."
Cougar loaded his bulky pistol with his rationed 10mm's as the rest of the rangers loaded themselves into their 20th Century vehicle in the hope of finding the lost caravans.
 
Somewere in the eastern mountines......

A man cames walking in the hot and dusty desert.
Vind is quite hard so the sight is near zero and the dust is everyvere inside hes chlotes.... but soon he would be down from the damn rocks and down in the caravan desert maybee he could get a ride somewere then....

He gets down the hillside and the sight gets better as the wind doesnt throw upp as much dust......

He sees somthing a bit away. He gets closer and sees it looks like a few caravan vagoons but where is the brahim and the guards..... As he gets closer he notices many dead bodies they look verry horrible, the days in the sun and the creatures of night have made the whole plase look like a slaughterhouse. And there have also been a combat.... days ago.....

Reptile: *thinks* What the hell have happened here, and whats that sound??? *he takes the assult rifle from his back. It is a piece of art the rifle has a fitted 10x scope and the in the magasíne every second round is AP or JHP ammo and the grip is made personaly for him....* it sounds like a engine. In the middle of the desert???

And down the hilside there comes a Big green car.. it must be a jeep and some figures in it too.....

Reptile: Wonder who that will be....
 
Bad Luck: You can join at anytime.

"Smoke!" yelled Epsilon in awe as the dark grey clouds clawed into the atmosphere.
Dawson who had been driving made a sudden stop, he gestured to Cobalt to reach for his binoculars.
The late afternoon sun burned prickly heat onto Dawson's face as he exited the vehicle. Removing his helmet and peering through the two eyepieces he's jaw dropped.
The hum-vee's wheels swirled with tremendous speed as it ate at the wasteland dirt.
"Hey, Dawson... ain't there some guy over there? He sure doesn't look like part of the caravan?" Bellowed Cobalt in his deep voice.
The vehicle came to a sudden halt sever yards away from the lone figure and cascade of debris, dirt and dead.
Cougar with no second thought lept from the vehicle and with crimson face points his H&K P90c at the lone figure.
"Ulrich!" shout's Dawson as the others just watch the well-built long-haired man as he rushes the lone figure.
"Who the hell are you!" Forcefully interrogates Cougar.

Bad Luck: Thanks Reptile, I thought for a second that no one would be interested with a story by some one new. You've proved me wrong. I have many plans for this story, hopefully I will be able to introduce the 5 Slave Masters in my next post, and the death of one of the Rangers!!!. Hope you and anyone else likes them.
 
Bad Luck Ranger, I like your story, but just not am going to post becasue I'm already in another story. If I write for two stories, I'll sometimes get confused and won't be able to give it 100 percent. Most of the (few) people at this board are already in the story "South of the Border".

If you noticed there were a few other stories (What Happened Then, The Great Search, A figure on a hilltop) that tried to start while South of the Border was going steady. They all never got going or got boring because there weren't enough people. With a small amount of people, less ideas get extanged thus causeing a less intresting story. South of the Border worked because it had the most amount of people. If someone had run out of ideas, at least someone in the large group had created another.

That's why I suggested you enter that story so you don't get just a couple people to join you and it falls apart. You have a lot of talent in your writing so that's why I'm trying to explain this to you.

I suggest you keep up your story, it may become as good as "South of the Border" or an "Invansion of Texas". What ever happens I wish you best of luck.
 
I won't be able to post until "South of the Border" is over. I created it, and have worked real hard on it with Squigee, Reptile, and Fang, and I will be too busy with it to post on two stories at once, unfortunately. But when it is done, I will take a break from creating new stories, and post on yours.
 
Thanks people, I might have a go a South of the Border... probably as a different character, I have plans for the Rangers and it just wouldn't make sense if they all went to Mexico.
probably as a brand new character.
 
Just a question....this story happen after or before "South of the border"?
 
I'm not quite sure (that's the reason why I choose to come in as a different character in South of the Border), New Reno's in this story so it's either just before or just after Fallout2.
When is South of the Border set by the way?
 
OOC: It's set just before. I'm not sure how long before though.

"It seems that while some can heed the call and rise above it all most just run away, but no matter how many rise above the masses will always destroy them right.-Marcus Fallout 2
 
I haven't got a direct date set but I'm sure it'll have to be set before Fallout2 cos the damn Chosen One kills all the interesting Slavers and Raiders!! (Kharn's, Metzger etc.)
 
I hope loads of people will be interested in joining, my whole idea for this story is quite epic even though it'll only have mostly human enemies.
 
Only human enemys -> well i dont care too much bout that... i mean whats the difference in killing a supermutan or a strongly armed human.... And the begginging was good enough to get me to join right after i read it....
 
Cool, like I've said a thousand times, I have plans for this and as you've seen in "The Battle" I'm trying to edge people into my post when the battle's over.
 
Under a pile of ugly brahmin and human cropse climbs out a figure, with blood all over her.
"Hey you! Freeze! yells Cougar.
"Don't shoot! I mean no harm!"
 
[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Dec-23-00 AT 09:39AM (GMT)[p]The rest of the Ranger's scrambled out of the hum-vee, Dawson instantly strode over to Cougar who's aim was moving from left to right, the bloodied women and the other man.
"Ulrich, lower your gun, man." Yelled Dawson.
Glass Jaw ran to the women, "Are you hurt? Are you okay?" He yelped in his doctor-like tounge.
Epsilon and Cobalt stayed near the hum-vee they kept an observant watchout. Cobalt sniffed the air, "Burnt Brahmin, smells like a goddamn barbeque?" Epsilon snorted with laughter, "Damn right, I smell the work of goddamn slavers, those slavers are gonna die for this!" He laughed.
Cougar lowered his gun and wiped the bead of sweat from his forehead, he then replaced his helmet.
"You're lucky to be alive." Called Cougar to the blood covered women.

Bad Luck: Thanx Insane.
 
"Ranger Ulrich Cougar", Cougar was a lover of literature from before the war.
The other desks that were just as cluttered were labelled in the same manner, "Ranger Conrad Epsilon", "Ranger Joshua Cobalt", "Medic Carlson ‘Glass Jaw' Ferric" and "Ranger Louis Dawson".
"I'm fine thank you. My name's Norika, Norika Moonlight. And your's?"
"I'm Glass Jaw, medic of the team. That guy who pointed at you is Cougar, he's the leader....." The introduction goes on for about 5 mins......
"And the mister over there is....." asked Glass Jaw.
"Reptile."
"Ok whatever."
 
OCC: I think i did get lost somewere here..... but its ok it is natural that a attractive woman draws more attention then a Warrior covered whit dust......

Reptile: Nice to meet You miss Moonlight, And you guys are rangers then or.....

Cougar: Yes We are on a mission up here...

Reptile: Great do u care for a helping hand...

Glass: and why would u like to join us

Reptile: Cause i would like to joion the Rangers... I tried to join once but i alone cant free the slaves in NCR... So i think this might help the situation out a little....

Cougar: Ok you look like a trusty person....
 
"Can you count me in too?" asked Norika.
"Well Miss Moonlight I afraid not.....this is a dangerous mission and....."
"What!? I can easily blast your head off in 150 meters with THIS!" yells Norika, pulling out a G34 pistol from her leg at the same time.
"Hey calm down! You can tag along but just don't give us any trouble, okay?" replies Cougar.
"We surely don't want trouble. And call me Norika, I don't really like being "Miss"ed hehe."
"So when do we get going?" asks Reptile.
"Now."
OOC: Err sorry if I offened you Reptile......
 
no i wasnt offended at all..... it was ment to be ironical.. ;-)
Hey this Nikita seems to be a carismatich type.....
 
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