Prologue for Mutants Rising mod

[Dove]

I'm working on the Mutants Rising mod and have written the prologue.

*edit* (prologue was here, now it's gone)

 

[Daemon Spawn]

Way to spoil the surprise.

 

[Dove]

Spoil it how? This is just the opening prologue

So, no suggestions...

Ok, it's gone then.

 

[Ozrat]

/wanders in mystified as to what's going on.

Please add some content to this thread or I'll lock/vat/whatever it for being pointless.

 

[Dove]

Vat away.

I posted something to get input from the community, and didn't get anything.

 

[Sander]

Ehh...you waited a whole 17 hours?? Wow, how about giving people a CHANCE to comment on it.

 

[Dove]

If you want to see it contact me through aim, msn, or send me a pm. I don't really want to post it in a public forum now...

 

[Daemon Spawn]

Here is my feedback: It was well written, and had little or no grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors.

For the content: it was clear enough, but the transitions between the ideas maybe a little more work? but since it doesnt need to be a work of literature, hell, it's fine.

 

[EyeMaster7]

(prologue was here, now it's gone)

Great.

Put that on your new page.

 

[Snake]

(prologue was here, now it's gone)

Great.

Put that on your new page.

I dont think so.
what's next? full previews of the maps? err...NO!