Story.

[Xavierblazer]

well

 

[Pirengle]

Very first thing: Spellcheck is your best friend.

Its starting to feel a little too randomized with all my jumbled ideas in a less than half-coherent story.

I agree. And it has nothing to do with Fallout or the apocalypse, so honestly, I'm hard-pressed to care.

It may not be as fallout-y as some of you like it because its not really a big scale thing. The secondary title really says it all, it is the destruction of the womans mind, in a very nuclear way.

...but not Fallout or apocalyptic. It's a woman whose brain is turning to Cheez Whiz. Next.