Tales from the wasteland

Sebastian

It Wandered In From the Wastes
Hi everyone... :D i was thinking about the wasteland and the many storys that happen there... and i thought that it would be nice to create one... i also want to give an idea :idea: ... what about if everyone hwo wants post his/her tale... the idea is to make a compilation of tales and put it into the web, so everyone hwo likes can read it... it will also be a good help for DM`s to meke random encounters or quests for the palyers :wink: ... well is just an idea... tell me what you think.
Here´s a tale of my own, im sorry if my english is not to good i´m from Argentina and we speak spanish. :?


"Poet`s Cave"

Mark was 65, he never thought he could live so long, never a human had. And thats why he decided to go. Since he started writing and became a poet he listened storys about the "Poet`s cave".
The story was about a cave, where all the poets go to die, and as a last mark for the prosperity they write their last words on the wallls. Mark allways thought it was a legend until that day, when he foun it.
He spent all night awake thinking about what to write on the wall
and when the sun rised the words came to him... "The only thing that split us from beasts, is the fact that we can think and choose how we die".
- Now`s the time- He thought. Mark walked inside the cave, the first inscription said, "We are weak in knowledge", he thought -Why someone hwo spent all his life to archive and share his knowdlege whit other people, whould write something like that?... it`s stupid!- . He walked a few meters and a second inscription was in the wall, "we are just a jewel on a giant jewlery", Mark thought that this inscription mus be made by someone hwo, in the moment of death, must be found something new or somethin he doesn`t knew before that moment.
He walked abou 20 minutes without reading anything, when something surprised him, an iscription that said " We are just food for those more evolutioned than us"- What`s the meaning of that?- He didn`t stop to think about it to long but those words, "We are just food..." hit him like a bomb.
Two monts before a wolf bited his leg when he was asleep, he woke up and shot the animal, and for his surprise the wolf spoken
- Don`t fight it, soon or late you`ll be in my dinner.- Mark killed the talking beast whit s shot in he head but he never stopped thinking abuot those words...
He kept walking until the last inscription appeared, it said "Dont run, is usless"... he sacred, but he decided to stay. He saw a spraycan on the floor and started writing, but his falshlight started to blink so he finished in the dark. Whe he finished a voice said. -Are you sure?- Mark went speakless, the voice was strong but gentle, he aimed his 14mm pistol to the dark but a second voice, a womman`s said -Please low your weapon, we just want to speak.- Mark turned but nothing was there, only darkness. He said -Am I crazy?.-
- No, you are not crazy, buy please low your weapon.- Mark did, and in that moment a torch lighted. Mark found himself rounded by four deathclaws, he loked for his weapon but the oldest deathclaw took it before he could even try it.
-Please calm down, we just want you to understand- the old deathclaw said.
Mark closed his eyes and thought,-"Don`t run, is usless"... how right those words are- he opened his eyes and looked into the deathclaws eyes and said -Ok, let me see, you hunt the people hwo come here to die, you are beasts you are disgusting.-
The deathclaws watched each other and after a moment the oldest said
-We are not only beasts, beast can´t talk, learn or teach.-
-speaking dón´t make you human, and thres noting you can teach me!.- he shouted
-Then what mekes you human?.-
-Humans don´t hunt old people, humans dont eat other intelligent beings.-
-You really think intelligence is a matter of knowdlege?.-
-It is!, if you can´t understand what´s around you, you are a beast,and you four can´t understand how is it feels deciding where and how to die, you just decide hwo die and how, you are nothing but fucking animals.-
-Ok, i get your point, so killing makes you an animal?.-
-If theres no reason it does.-
-You use a gun, ahve you ever used it against someone or something?.-
-Only in self defense, only with animals that attacked me.-
-They attacked you for food, right?.-
-I gess.-
-So you just "gess" something and shot?.-
- Well... I....I...-
-You say that killing without a reason makes you a beast, and that speaking don´t makes you human,so whay you are?.-
Mark went wordless, he thought a long time, took the spraycan and wrote under his escription, "But when we choose how other creature die, we are nothing but beasts, and such as beasts, we are nothing but food for the stronger one".
-So you understood- the old deathclaw said.
-I did, now im ready.- Mark felt the strike, he looked his chest but there was no blood. Between the claw and his chest he felt something, his 14mm pistol. Mark took it, putted into his head and said. - Thanks for teaching me, old poet, now i know we are nothing but animals.-
He pulled the trigger.

THE END

Hope you liked it, and please send your tales to make the compliation.

Long life to the Brotherhood of Steel!!!
 
it's not that bad. Usually I don't have the will or strength to read through the fan fic's but I found this one entertaining enough to finish it. It gets a little cheesy at some points with all the poetic stuff but I guess that's what you wanted to mediate.

Keep it up, it's nice to see a story that diverge from the standard plots.
 
WolfV6 said:
Fixyour spelling and some grammer and itll be good.

I accept i have some problems with english, but i would like to know if you agree with the idea of making a compilation of tales based on fallout... and if you are, i also want you to send your own tales.
Anyways, i`m looking to get this started, cause not only drawing is a kind of art, and theres many people drawing, making comics, and movies, but not many writers. And I belive this can be usefull not only a fun, it can be used by fallour RPG masters and palyers.

Well, thats all.
 
Omg, I cant belive i made a spelling mistake in a post telling someone to fix their spelling. Im considering posting a tale soon, id be glad to add it to your compilation.
 
Well i`m back... i have another story...hope you like it

The law of the wasteland

Bob was tired,he walked all week without finding any signs of civilization, but that afternoon his luck changed.when he first saw it he though "its an illusion" but it was real.
The "Burning feet motel" was the largest building on the little town, in front of it there was a shop called "Charly`s Junkworld". Bob went to the shop, he saw all kind of stuff, weapons, chems an armors hanging from the wall and a los of boxes with dry food and RotGut.
Behind the exibhition desk, there was a a man,when he saw Bob he smiles and got up.
- Hi traveler, I`m Charly, how can i help you ?- he happly said
- Good day, my name is Bob and i need some water, a bedroll and food-
-Dont problem, let me see.- Charly opened a box and started looking for Bob`s stuff
While Charly was occupied a ghoul entered the shop, it stared at Bob and he felt a shiver, suddenly the ghoul took a .223 gun from the wall and ran away
- Hey You! Asshole!.- Bob screamed, Cahrly turned back
- What happened?.-
- A guy stolen a gun from the wall.-
- Damn addicts, they steal my stuff to get more jet.-
- Why don you do something?.-
- He`ll die in a week, maybe in a gang fight, and then ill get my gun.-
- How?.-
- I`ll buy it from the sheriff`s evidence room.-
- Oh i get it.-
Charly kept searching for a while, finally he gave the stuff to Bob
- Ok, its 300 caps.-
- Here you are- Bob handled the caps to Charly.- Og, i got a question, do you know if there`s still room at the inn?.-
- No I doubt it, and if it is i recommend you not to sleep there, you can be sure you wont be sleeping alone, if you know what i mean.-
- Yeah, ok , ill find somewhere else, good day.-
-Have a nice day.-
Bob went out the shop and started walking down the street looking for an inn or something, when someone called him
- Hey you!.- Bob turned and saw the ghoul that stolen the gun he aimed his gauss pistol to the creature
- are you talking to me?.-
- Do you see someone else?.- the ghoul said looking around
- why do you want?.-
- I just wanna help you-
- you?.- Bob laughted.- How?
- I know a good place to stay- Bob didn`t felt pretty sure about the reason of that ghoul to be helping him.
- where is it and how much is gonna cos me?.-
-nothing my friend.-
- YOU ARE NOT MY FIREND YOU zombie FREAK!!!.- bob aimed his gun to the ghoul again
- Hey!, no need to be rude, im just trying to help you.-
- Ok tell me.- bob took a cap a trew it to the feets of the ghoul.- Where is that place?.-
The ghoul took the cap
- Outside the town, to the north, theres a cave, some travelers sleep there some times.-
- Ok now get the fuck out of my face you hideous freak from the nature.-
- Ok, be quiet, i`m leaving.- the ghoul walked inside the alley and disappeared in the dark, Bob aimed his gun to the ghoul till he disappeared.
He putted down his pistol and started walkin to the north, indeed there was a cave, and there was signs of other people hwo passed over there, he entered the cave, the smell was terrible " a Muttie farte here" he thougt. but he had slept i whorse condittons so he decided to sleep there.
In the morning he woke up very exalted, a noise woke him up. He looked for his backpack but it wasn`t there. "I hate when this happen" he thought.
He walked outside the cave and there was his backpack, under it it was a letter, he took it and started reading.

"Hi my name is Thomas Wilkinson, all my life i thougt that the law of the wasteland was " strongest eats weaker" but i was wrong
When i were sleeping i`ve heard a noise and got up, my stuff was disappeared, but there was a letter i`ve started reading it, but in the middle i`ve found out that the letter was talking about me, then i heard a "click" behind me. Thats when i`ve realized that the law of the wasteland was a little more complicated "Stronger eats Weaker, but Smarter east Stronger" then i`ve took my sight from the letter and saw a shadow behind me. the last thing i`ve heard it was a shot.
Bob heard a "click" behind him, he felt a shiver and raised his sight from the letter, he saw the shadow, "oh God" he thougt.
-Sorry big guy.- the ghoul sadi behind him.- its the law of the wasteland.

"boom"
 
Nice idea but if you want to be taken seriously please for the love of god proof read your work.

"Behind the exibhition desk, there was a a man,when he saw Bob he smiles and got up."

Now with firefox it has a spell checker in the writing box! Are you seriously that lazy?

Whilst I liked the final part I though the start was particularly poor.
Oh a mirage - what a cliche.
What weak dialogue.
What an unbelievably stupid main character - how did an idiot like that get a gauss gun?

Rewrite it into something resembling English and it might be good.
 
Hotel California said:
What an unbelievably stupid main character - how did an idiot like that get a gauss gun?
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He`s just a big guy, a strong guy that walk around looking for problems. I think that`s clear. When he speak with the ghoul he`s rude and racist. And as far as i know, you just need some money to get a gauss gun in San Francisco. I`m I wrong?
 
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