The Fall explained to kids
- Thread starter MrBumble
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Nice.
Make the text less blurry, remove the white outline around the mantis and correct the mantis' antenna and the highlights on the mantis' abdomen. They seem to not fit.
And something is wrong with the background. The trees look like parts of them would be floating in the air. It contradicts a little with the sharpnes of Vault Boy and the mantis, even if Vault Boy seems to be a little bit too transparent.
But still well done.
7/10 because of some flaws.
Make the text less blurry, remove the white outline around the mantis and correct the mantis' antenna and the highlights on the mantis' abdomen. They seem to not fit.
And something is wrong with the background. The trees look like parts of them would be floating in the air. It contradicts a little with the sharpnes of Vault Boy and the mantis, even if Vault Boy seems to be a little bit too transparent.
But still well done.
7/10 because of some flaws.
The Lone Locust of the Apocalypse approves.
hahaha this one made me laugh!
I like the style but some things catches the eye and could be improved. The boy needs some shadows and the same goes for the mantis. The mantis and the boy are facing the same way, yet the mantis is nearly completely dark (unlike the boy who's more visible).
I really like the composition though, nice and original
keep posting
I like the style but some things catches the eye and could be improved. The boy needs some shadows and the same goes for the mantis. The mantis and the boy are facing the same way, yet the mantis is nearly completely dark (unlike the boy who's more visible).
I really like the composition though, nice and original
keep posting