The Mutant Master
- Thread starter dopefish
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very nice, I like it.
Señor DeLuxe
First time out of the vault
Nice rendering! There are maybe two points that could use some attention, if you don´t mind: The bloodstains are unnaturally red IMO and the room looks pretty well cleaned up. Some rubbish and debris, maybe a broken lamp, generally some irregularity in things might convey a sicker, more chaotic atmosphere...
Another thing that I found a little confusing at first is the perspective. The camera/observer seems to be just underneath the ceiling, making everything look rather small (most obvious in the computerterminals I think). A lower viewpoint might make the scene more menacing and intimidating. Might be just a matter of taste though.
Other than that, great work!
Another thing that I found a little confusing at first is the perspective. The camera/observer seems to be just underneath the ceiling, making everything look rather small (most obvious in the computerterminals I think). A lower viewpoint might make the scene more menacing and intimidating. Might be just a matter of taste though.
Other than that, great work!
he looks a little small at first, until you spot the computers, then he looks huge. ^^
hell, then the bots even look huge.
hell, then the bots even look huge.
RUN_LIKE_HELL
Still Mildly Glowing
Meh, looks more like doom to me.
It needs a lot of creepy psychic flesh/goo coming out of the walls (or maybe coming out of everything).
Also, the end of the hall and The Master both look sorta smudged or out of focus.
Other than that, I like. Keep it up.
Also, the end of the hall and The Master both look sorta smudged or out of focus.
Other than that, I like. Keep it up.
Slaughter Manslaught
Vault Senior Citizen
I like it, you got some real potential. Add some goo pretty much around everywhere, the tendrils of the Master going all around the room, make the chair a little bigger and a little deeper, the bots a little smaler, fix the camera like that guy above said... and man, it's one of the greatest works of art ever!
Nice work. 
But: Look at the upper part of the tower. It is to big and I also thougth, there is a kind of glass dom about the master self.
I couldn't find a screenshot, so take a look at this bad scan.
But: Look at the upper part of the tower. It is to big and I also thougth, there is a kind of glass dom about the master self.
I couldn't find a screenshot, so take a look at this bad scan.
