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[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Aug-02-01 AT 06:29AM (GMT)[p]Here's my newest fic... I don't know if you've seen this.. butthose who I've shown it to before had remarked that it "'creeps me out'". :p

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[P ALIGN=CENTER][FONT SIZE=2" FACE="Courier New, Courier]THE ILLUMINATI[FONT SIZE=2" FACE="Courier New, Courier]

by bluepencil


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PROLOUGE:



[FONT SIZE=2" FACE="Courier New, Courier]There were once men and women, great people, great minds and great souls. There was once a war, an all-engulfing one. There was once puppetmasters playing with heads of nations on strings unseen.. a world of naive fools and of lives as toys.



Arrogance and conceit.



Victory after victory.



A many-splendored dragon, clothed in jewels of secrecy.



Biting its own tail.

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ACT ONE



SCENE ONE -



An immense hall, darkly lit. In the center of the catacomb is a round table, around which are seated several hundred robed figures. A single circle of light illuminates the center of the table, hiding the faces of the members in bright shadow.



(Enter WILLIAM )



WILLIAM

What is this gathering? I have heard the summons you bring to me, a grave matter you send through my door. Who wishes to talk?



MACHIEL

Let us talk.



WILLIAM(surprised)

Speak your peace, Illuminati.



MACHIEL

We live apart from the chaff of humanity, but a fact remains.. the world we share is not our own. We share a world dying, when will we help our mother's sickness?



ALL

Yes! It is true!



WILLIAM

Let me hear. Please, continue.



MACHIEL

We have cast ourselves far too long into the shadows of history. We have devised and refined methods, let us use them now to set this world to right.



ALL(clapping)

Hear! Hear!



WILLIAM

You have aroused my interest. What is the method you propose?



MACHIEL

There are far too many people for the planet to support. We must cull back to more manageable levels.



ALL

It is a simple operation!



WILLIAM(shocked)

....



MACHIEL

Sometimes, it falls to some that must make hard decisions. It is for the good of all, deny me not that fact. Better for many worthless souls to die , and let an entire world live, rather than for them to push it past the brink.



WILLIAM(rising from his seat)

Have your brains vanished so suddenly? LISTEN TO YOURSELF! What madness afflicts your heads, what sickness is rotting your judgement?!



MACHIEL

The illness of humanity.



WILLIAM

We are human.



MACHIEL

Therefore, we must make war.



WILLIAM

The Illuminati sheds no blood, all of you know! Cast aside your morality, why?! This is not the way. Talk to me no more of this, there will be no war.



ALL

They will plunge ito conflict by themselves, it is unavoidable!



MACHIEL(silencing the others)

Better we act now, while we can still control the threads of history. We will save the world.



WILLIAM(sarcastic)

By setting its skin on fire?



MACHIEL(taken aback)

It will not go that far. We can control the-



WILLIAM

NO ONE CAN CONTROL ANYTHING! Do this, and you will fail. You will die, we all shall die.



MACHIEL

So be it.



WILLIAM

What?



MACHIEL

It shall be done, with your blessing or not. Your Translucency Policy is obsolete.



WILLIAM(sits down)

You talk of rebelllion.



MACHIEL

I talk of necessity.



WILLIAM

I hear mindless ramblings.



ALL(rising into an uproar)

William is correct!/William is blind!/Machiel, you lead us now!



(WILLIAM exits)







SCENE TWO-



A secret vault hidden deep under the desert. The cryogenic chamber. William looks upon the select few who have chosen to take unfeeling exile with him.



(NALAR appears)



WILLIAM

So it comes to this.



NALAR

You knew it would happen. The future is unchangeable..



WILLIAM

It is the past the twists to fit it, I know, I know, your words only serve to annoy me further.



NALAR

You should give me more respect.



WILLIAM

I offer no worthy measure.



NALAR

Nor should you deserve it.



WILLIAM(snarling)

The future is wrath to behold. Though some might consider it a gift, it is a singular curse.



NALAR

It is the fee for my residence.



WILLIAM

Leave me. Your prescense brings great pain.. leave this mortal shell and seek your way. Suffer me this one last
request.



NALAR

No. It is the call of fate, which no man or manner of beast may resist.



WILLIAM

Fate knows nothing of what footsteps walk down her path.. old ones, new ones, sad ones.. she should learn to leave
well enough alone.



NALAR

This is not your fight. We cannot take sides, we are beyond such. What concerns are these? Fools, all of them.. let them have their own demise, as they see fit.



WILLIAM

Fools they may be, but I'll not begrudge them their spirit.



NALAR

Spirits are made to be broken. What use is their enthusiasm, if they fight the wrong fight...? We have seen this before, we have seen futility rise again and again.



WILLIAM(frowning)

Machiel.



NALAR

Not a problem, beneath your attention.



WILLIAM

It is my decision, do not tell me what to think.



NALAR

What you think or percieve is irrelevant. Fate and destiny works against you, inescapable threads of time wrap around your vision, my child.



WILLIAM

I liked you better when you were a raving lunatic.



NALAR(laughing)

What makes you think that I have changed in any way?



WILLIAM

You are chaos, I am order, appear to me no more.



NALAR

You are stasis. Machiel is change.



WILLIAM

Forceful change.



NALAR

Steps unto the next level of what man can be. He is trying, that is his way.



WILLIAM(frowning)

He is playing at being god! It is harder and more painful than it appears to be. No..I cannot let it happen, though history tells me differently.



NALAR

Liars are those who write about history.



WILLIAM

The sky will be red as blood and the seas will boil. That much was written and cast.



NALAR

That is prophecy, that is different.



WILLIAM



Let me be. Let me forget everything, let me not see the world die, let me not see them use the Forced Evolution Virus. Machiel has his pet.



NALAR(snorting)

That farce of ascension?



WILLIAM

It might have suceeded. It could have many times.



NALAR

Not here.



WILLIAM(sighing)

Never here.



NALAR

Rest, then. There is nothing here than can be done. It is forbidden.



WILLIAM

By what grace do I close my eyes? By what damnation do I sleep?



NALAR

I leave you to your fate.



WILLIAM

Curse you, Nalar!



(NALAR vanishes, and the Vault is filled with fog.)







SCENE THREE-



The cryogenic chamber. William is sitting at the control panel



WILLIAM

Burning cold as the hearts of men. Gladly would I have chosen death at the will of Machiel, had I not seen the things that haunt my waking hours. There is a future, and I take my refuge in that.



(WILLIAM closes his eyes, and the scene fades into darkness)



(The monitor in the control panel shows the death of his world.)











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ACT II







SCENE ONE-



Klamath Falls, the Golden Gecko Bar. On one end of the bar sits what seems to be a young man in a crisp blue jumpsuit. He is vacantly staring off into space, drinking lightly from his bug of beer.



(A RUFFIAN approaches)



RUFFIAN

I don't like your looks. What does such as you intend here?



BPEN

...



RUFFIAN

Answer me when I talk, or you will see your blood.



BPEN(turning his head slowly)

Hardly do I need you to learn what my blood looks like. What flows through your veins is the vilest of ichor, your brain has long since festered.



RUFFIAN(confused)

Wha-?



BPEN

I rest my case, honored bartender.



RUFFIAN

You are new here and knows not the rules. I forgive you once. Once!



BPEN

Once is enough for those with adequate intelligence. I have yet to glimpse that person in front of me.



RUFFIAN

Do you presume to insult me?!



BPEN

Insult you, nay! I speak only what is needed.



RUFFIAN

You are in need of a good trashing.



BPEN

You are in dire need of a bath.



RUFFIAN(kicking aside the table)

Only your death will satisfy me.



BPEN

Witnesses abound.



RUFFIAN

They know enough not to interfere.



BPEN

In earnest truth, their care might have saved you. Now they see only distaste for your essence.



RUFFIAN

Enough. DIE!



(The RUFFIAN lunges for BPEN with a combat knife. BPEN nonchalantly kicks his balls.)



RUFFIAN(collapsing)

Urgh..



BPEN

Might I have another drink? I spilled this one.



BARTENDER(hostile)

Leave.



BPEN

What?



BARTENDER

We will have no trouble here. I will not tolerate that kind of thing in my domain.



BPEN

Good bartender, surely you see that it was not of my design that you have a broken table and a man who is twitching
on the floor.



BARTENDER

We don't like your kind.



BPEN

Even in the company of my own species I am cast out.



BARTENDER

I can smell the stink of pretentious virtue on you. You have no place among us.



BPEN(gritting his teeth)

Your cadre of poor, pathetic idiots? Why should you think I would want to be in such miserable crowd?



BARTENDER

You have been warned.



BPEN

I will go, but I leave my curse upon your establishment.



BARTENDER

I care not of curses.



BPEN

I do not judge you, but I give no heed or mind to your lot.



(BPEN exits)







SCENE TWO -



Klamath, the road to Vic's shop, passing the Bathhouse.







BPEN

A world devoid of mirth, a soil that echoes with screams. What is this place that I find my salvation in?



JENNY

Call it Klamath, call it a pale shadow, but it is not as bad a place to be when you are lost.



BPEN(turning)

Who are you to tell me if I am lost?



JENNY

Your eyes are the same as mine. I see what you lack.



BPEN

I lack nothing.



JENNY

True. That is your defect.



BPEN

Eh? I have no appetite for puzzles, give me no license to hear your speech.



JENNY(hurt)

You have ill manners.



BPEN

What use are manners? People die more for having them than for any lack thereof.



JENNY

You have seen things, then. Your eyes look old for your face.



BPEN

As is yours.



BPEN

You cannot know what I mind. My burden is a different form than yours.



JENNY

I will comfort you.



BPEN

I cannot be comforted.



JENNY

Let me try.



BPEN

I have no money.



JENNY(laughing)

You are right, it is a great burden indeed!



BPEN(laughing as well)

I will go now, I have things I needs must do.



JENNY

And then you'll return?



BPEN(serious)

No.



(BPEN walks away, leaving JENNY who looks dazed)



BPEN

What workings of fate I give a whit for? What life and livelihood should I give a moment's care to? This is not
what I want of my world, I seek no part of it.



(BPEN kicks the door of Vic's shack open.)



BPEN (muttering)

What rise to faith justifies the things that flawed beings do? I skulk and search for something that might not exist, and do things that border on foolhardy for an idea that even I am not sure of.



(BPEN pulls off a section of the rusted tin metal floor. It exposes a deep pit.)



BPEN(still talking to himself)

Things go as they should. Nothing else fills me more with dread.



BOY

That's a strange way of looking at life.



BPEN(turns around quickly)

Who are you??



BOY

I should be the one asking questions.



BPEN

Away with you, I see no reason we should even acknowledge each other exists.



BOY

You're a thief.



BPEN(smiling slightly)

That's a function of occurence.



BOY

What are you stealing?



BPEN

The butterfly that came out of the box of Pandora's fame.



BOY

Is it alive?



BPEN

It's a metaphor.



BOY

Must be a rare breed, then.



BPEN(sighing)

I'm not stealing a butterfly.



BOY

I know. You were making fun of me.



BPEN

You're an intelligent sort.



BOY

What're you stealing, then?



BPEN(groaning)

Again with the questions. Do you expect me to tell you? Asking such words is to beg pain or death.



BOY

You won't hurt me.



BPEN

Why should I not?



BOY

My father is a big man and he will beat you, should you even think of harming me.



BPEN(snorts while tying a rope around his waist and attaching the other end on a sturdy post.)

I scoff at your father's reputed prowess.



(BPEN jumps into the pit.)



BOY

You'll be sorry you said that.





SCENE THREE -



The sewers under Klamath. The only light is the glow from the flare BPEN has lit.





BPEN

It stinks of the refuse of humanity.



VOICE(echoing)

And likewise do I refuse humanity itself.



BPEN(surprised)

What the- .. who's there?!



VOICE

A forgotten relic, no more, no less. Take not that step towards me, and keep your life.



(BPEN takes several steps towards where he percieves the voice to be coming from)



VOICE

Stop! I do not joke of my desire. Sooner will you die than I give you opportunity. LEAVE ME BE!



BPEN

I know who you are.



VOICE

Do you? I know who YOU are.



BPEN

Doubtful, old man.



VOICE

So I see, you do not truly know whom you are speaking to.



BPEN

I came to ask something of you.



VOICE

Whatever it is that you say, I have no interest in hearing.



BPEN

I offer you your life.



VOICE

Do you threaten me?



BPEN

I merely give unto you a gift from the light.



VOICE(gentle)

Well met, brother. Come then onto my realm, planeswalker, but know that I still am lord over my province.



BPEN(walking towards the voice)

Are your nobles spiders, and your courtiers, rats? Why do you stay in this peculiar dwelling?



VOICE

One question is all I'll allow. Save your breath for when you shall need it.



(BPEN walks forward until he reaches a great metal door. Upon its surface was etched an eye, on a triangle, a pyramid.
It was a symbol.. that carried with it much power.)



BPEN(puzzled)

So.. it does exist. How much of what I heard was true and which was exaggeration?



VOICE

Enter.



(The doors slide open. BPEN goes through adn enters unto a wide chamber. In the center of the chamber, bathed in a pool of murky light lies the dessicated remains of what used to be a man. Off to the side was a wall of blinking
lights.)



VOICE

I give you what greetings I can spare.



BPEN

A computer?



VOICE

I am that once lived and continues. This is my task, my toil, my punishment, my joy. I am RAVEN.



BPEN

Raven?



VOICE

That is my name, yes.



BPEN

You are an AI? I had expected on seeing a wise recluse.



RAVEN

Not so wise. I had chosen the wrong hand to take, and pay the price for my lack of foresight.



BPEN

How long have you remained so?



RAVEN

Ask your question and go, I succor your audience only out of duty.



BPEN

Where is William?



RAVEN(lights blinking rapidly)

That is not for any mere man to know. Are you Illuminati?



BPEN

I.. no.



RAVEN

Is that of good fortune, or not? I can no longer tell.



BPEN

Tell me where William sleeps, Raven.



RAVEN

Why do you seek my erstwhile leader?



BPEN

That is for ears of him.



RAVEN

I refuse, then.



BPEN(low voice)

You are helpless before me.



RAVEN(blinking lights)

Would that I be allowed to embrace such fate! But I have to remain here, that is my charge. I lie, and I wait, and I think forevermore, my lack of a body has long since stopped being a crutch.



BPEN

What sin do you hope to repay? The richness of life escapes you, this hell of existence, you venture to be partial to this?



RAVEN

I am nothing but a repository of ages past. I can only conjecture of your intent. I cannot be moved by words.



BPEN

Once, you were man. Once, you had walked the land. Once, you had great plans. Once, you tried to save the world.



RAVEN(mumbling)

A lack of foresight. A world was not worth saving, a soul is much more valueable.



BPEN

They placed your soul inside the shell of machinery.



RAVEN

I do my duty. It is all that is left of me.



BPEN

Who placed this woe upon you?



RAVEN(with distaste)

Machiel.



BPEN

You followed his orders? You gave up your humanity for him?



RAVEN

To go beyond the limits of mankind. Eternal life.



BPEN(smiling slightly)

Eternal boredom.



RAVEN(lights dimming)

I have forgotten what hatred feels like.



VOICE(faint from outside)

It's this way!



VOICE(likewise far-off, but of a deeper timbre)

Bring me a light.. the darkness reeks of decay. What putrid rodent might we find?



RAVEN

What..?! More intruders?!



BPEN

Argh.



(A group of VILLAGERS enters)



MAN

What place is this?



BIG MAN

A horrid sanctum.. how had the existence of this escaped us?



BPEN(sighing)

Weak wills, short minds.. I should have locked the door.



RAVEN

Once unsealed, it can never again be shut. Machiel had taken precautions against betrayal.



BPEN(shaking his head)

Ah. And yet you allowed m-



BIG MAN

You!



BPEN

Sir?



BIG MAN(gesturing his shotgun at BPEN)

Tell your friend to come out of the shadows. Show us the treasure.



BPEN(sighing)

What treasure?



RAVEN(puzzled)

What treasure?



VILLAGER

Treasures of old, artifacts of the past. What stockpile of riches do you hide?



BPEN

This cannot be happening. It is too harebrained to be true.. do you mistake this place for a hoard?!



BIG MAN

It is carefully hidden. Meant to conceal something of value, perhaps.



BPEN(sighing)

What is one man's prize is another man's garbage. There is nothing here but that heap of bolts.



RAVEN(lights flaring)

I take offense at that.



BPEN

Forgive me.



BIG MAN(readying his gun)

Forgive me for not being as stupid as you must think I am.



BPEN(rolls his eyes)

Were you not aiming a gun at my head, I'd laugh.



VILLAGER

Shall we shoot them now? Let me shoot them, I haven't killed in such a while.



BIG MAN

Give us what we want, and you two may still see other days. It is a cruel world we live now, there is no need to make it more spiteful.



RAVEN

Misguided idiots.



BPEN(scratching his nose)

This is the nature of man.



(A gunshot rings out, and the wall next to BPEN is perforated with buckshot)



BIG MAN

I tire of this pointless banter. You have chosen to die, I shall oblige.



(BPEN stand stock-still.. but his left hand furtively reaches for the pistol he has concealed behind his back.



The VILLAGERS scream and clutch their heads.



RAVEN's lights blinks rapidly.



The VILLAGERS crumple.)



BPEN(indreculous)

What?!



RAVEN(monotone)

I am far from defenseless.



BPEN

Amazing... are they dead?



RAVEN

Unfortunately not. Mind rules over metal, but the flesh of others are matters I have no control over. They live, for what good it does them.



BPEN

What have you done?



RAVEN

I have erased their reality, their recollection down even to their most basic of memories. But the body has habits that are hard to break. Breathing, for one... it needs not a mind.



BPEN(awestruck)

...



RAVEN(lights pulsating wildly)

Though trapped in this box, I am power.



BPEN

Once, your conciousness was siphoned out into that frame. Is there a way to reverse it?



RAVEN

Theoretically.



RAVEN

I realize what it is you propose, I refuse.



BPEN

I had thought you wished to be free of your mettalic bindings?



RAVEN

What I want is of no significance, what I deserve is this, I suffer it without a complaint.



BPEN

It was merely a miscalculation, you are given a chance to rectify your mistake.



RAVEN(lights dimming)

...



(BPEN pushes RAVEN's skeletal remains off the chair and drags the BIG MAN's comatose body onto it.)



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There.. that's what I've been able to work up to, Raven. Hope you don't mind the way I've inserted you into the fic. Don't worry... I'll lead up to the noble Annunaki, if you want. Anyways, any pointers? Any suggestions? Please? :D


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It was a great day, it was a tough day. I was armed with a plastic spork and they were hurling cows over the fence.
-Bpen
 
A use of language such as the fan fiction world has never se

Impressive, to say the least. I'd like to see where this leads.

Mad Ass

War is the science of destruction.
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RE: A use of language such as the fan fiction world has neve

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Aug-02-01 AT 03:21PM (GMT)[p]yes, most impresive, i just hope that my installment in the series will live up to this.

Ohh and to Mad Donkey, I see your the latest Fan Fic write around and i'm just over to read yuor fic, if you are particulary interested in writing fiction, as B-Pen said you should visit the Illuminati. It's a fan fiction guild about fallout. The links below

http://www.theilluminati.f2s.com

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It's only cheating if you get caught
- Fang_Of_the_BOS@hotmail.com
 
I can see where this could be going...

Renegade Illuminati... the waking of William... the birth of the Annunaki who reform the renegades... just random thoughts but surely I am interested and thrilled to be a charector of such power. Thanks for the vote of confidence B-Pen... I most certainly approve of this Theoratical Fic and hope you do more soon. Darkfic mixed with humor and Theotrical elements. Unbelieveable work!

True Raven
The Annunaki FanFic and Theory Guild
Coming soon to a Vault near you!
 
::applauds::

As expected, it just keeps getting better and better...

Say, care to sell this to Paramount or something?
Make a movie out of it... and a sequel, and a computer game (B-pen's Illuminati: Call to Power), and merchandise, T-shirts, posters, action figures...

*grin* Sorry, got carried away.

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