Wasteland Daycare: part 6

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Ward felt lucky... he had woken up around noon, and the sun was beginning to melt the snow. Through the thinning, wet snow, Ward saw three black prongs poking though just in front of his face. He rolled over painfully and carefully, seeing the blood on the snow under him. He winced, aware of the pain for the first time. He had a small wound just below his left kidney; again he was lucky; whatever passed through him didn't puncture any of his organs. He looked at the wreckage of the overturned ATV that lay in the snow a few feet away and saw that it was full of small holes. He had run over a claymore, an anti-personnel mine that exploded like a shotgun, sending buckshot in all directions. He was lucky that it wasn't anti-vehicle, and he was also lucky that the ATV stopped any of the metal balls from hitting him in a vital area.
Ward stood very carefully, looking around for any more mines that had been revealed. He clutched his side as a little more blood soaked through his white coat. Ward fell to his knees; he had never felt such intense pain, and it was doubled by the urge to urinate. He wasn't shot through the kidney, but his side burned. He had to relieve himself in the middle of the minefield.
He slowly stood and unbuckled his belt. He was going to use his urine to melt the snow and check for more mines, but the pain multiplied tenfold and he noticed blood coming out. He gritted his teeth, trying his hardest to avoid crying out, and finished up. He then sank to his knees again, quickly pulled off his ski mask, doubled over and vomited.
Maybe he wasn't so lucky after all, he thought ruefully, noting that there was some blood in his vomit. Using the white mask as a makeshift dressing for his wound, Ward carefully walked to the wrecked ATV and picked up his M-16, which was thankfully undamaged.
Making his way through the minefield was a slow, painstaking process. He had attached his bayonet and probed the snow in front of him before taking a step. After an hour and one hundred feet of slow travel, Ward was satisfied that he had cleared the minefield.
Looking to the west to get his bearing on the mountains, Ward started toward the slightly revealed bit of asphalt that was I-25.
By the end of the day, Ward was tired, bleeding and despaired. He had no supplies left save what he carried; some flares, two field rations, and his weapon with two extra clips. The last bit of sunlight disappeared over the mountains, leaving Ward in the dark and the cold. He ate little, and later vomited it up. He tried looking for wood to build a fire with, but found none. He tried to figure out what had happened to give him so much pain in his left side, aside from the wound, and settled that he had driven a rib into his kidney when he fell. It didn't matter much what had happened, the only thing that mattered was living, but that was becoming a quickly fading possibility.
Finally, still bleeding and half frozen, Ward lay down in the snow to die. It seemed that his luck had run out.
 
*looks for someone to act as his second*

Hey.. ain't nanybody going to help me? I'm going to commit seppuku, dammit!

*yawns* How many times have you killed youself? Hell.. you've been ressurrected more times than Kenny! Why must you do this each time you feel the need to attract attention?!

Shut up. I have valid reason this time.

Oh? Really?

MadDonkey just broke my record... the Mass Production Perk is now his..*sob*sob*

*groans* Not again... each time a better writer comes along, this happens. Grab a backbone, you blubbering, idiot!!

Even mu subconcious bullies me.. I am so pathetic.. I am so overwhelmed with delight at seeing this new fic, I can't find words to nitpick with.

That does it.. I'm outta here.

............​

On a more serious note.. let me just say that this is a very good chapter... it expounds upon the characters and the situation, the Fallout-y feel is perfect. The 'snow' actually serves to amplify this..

 
BAH!!

Get a hold of yourself man!! I thought I was the only one with voices....

I can't really call it mass production because my stories have declined dramatically in quantity. That last four parts should have been one, but my creative battery can't handle the strain of writing as much in one night.
Oh yeah, no I'm not drafting them.... Mostly because I A) don't have time and B) my friend wants to draw WD as a graphic novel </fancy term for comic book> so I have to oversee the drawings and such, and edit the content accordingly.
Now if only I could get my scanner to work....

Mad Ass
 
Yes, a comic book

Uhm.... it probably won't be done for a while. I have to change some things about the beginning to make the story flow better, and the other artist went off to college.... That kinda complicates things. Oh well, school starts in one day so that'll give me plenty of time to write, draw and sleep. Yeeha.

THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU!! Oh, wait, it's Windows that's screwing it up... go figure.

Mad Ass
 
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