Wasteland [fan art]

Muhol

First time out of the vault
I had my finger twisted badly so i cudnt draw.
but now i can . 8)
u all know my sketchy style.
wasteland.jpg

im not very happy with it , i must improve in coloring .
 
It's made in photoshop with a tablet, Schuln00ben.

On topic, it would look better if you actually, y'know, defined shapes and "built" the thing instead of just making a sketchy mess. There's way too much useless lines, they don't really add much to your drawing. Instead, they make the thing look messy, as they're all the same intensity as the important lines, such as the head contour, the shape of the rag, etc.

Focus a bit more on your drawing's important lines, and less on "artistic" effects. Working on the pose wouldn't hurt, either.
 
Have to admit i agree with Wooz, it's not quite there yet.

Still, it does have it's natural, radioactive charm. Kinda like it. ;)

Hm. It would look better with a more distinguishable face on the character and a more atmospheric background (usual cliche would do, i guess, dark mountains or a ruined city).

Good job anyway.
 
Vox said:
Sort of remids me of:

What noob drew that shit?

It's full of sketchy lines and what's that swirly stuff at the top supposed to be? Acid rainbows?

Pfft.
 
Chill out doods!
I was crippled on my hand so this is my first painting
after a while . More will be coming ! :)
 
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