Recent content by malaise_chalk

(from FCTom.msg) I realize now there's more to this than just the mine administrator quest to repair the machine. When you return to Villa, the repair of the machine triggers the resolution of the Villa–Flagstaff tensions on the theory that the mine labour is now "automated". (At least, I...

:). It jumped out at me as non-spanish speaker (albeit, I live somewhere with lots of spanish speakers so it's common to have a familiarization with the pronunciation). Got it! I haven't made it to the Pier yet but I can target the Rangers next. Re: editorially: I agree. This pass I'm...

FInishing off Flagstaff. As always, there are very few typos or much to quibble with. I think it'll take me quite a while to get through the whole game (I also haven't played through the whole thing either). Are there any areas you think could use attention more than others?

Yeah, this one seemed odd to me since the caravan has no destination/route with no current customer or even prospects. I agree it's not critical to change. Fair. Now that I'm familiar with the idiom, I completely agree. It's my natural assumption that awkward phrasing or odd idioms come from...

Another chunk of Flagstaff reviews, including Madre and Mrs. Brandley.

Nice. I like it. (And of course, I meant "Faber" when I said "Kagan". My mind mixes up the two names since they are pretty similar in mouthfeel.)

Starting a dialog-by-dialog review for Flagstaff. This one's pretty long but covers some of the major characters (Kagan, bartender, Administrator, Preacher), . I'll start putting the reviews in spoiler tags to avoid spamming this thread too badly.

This makes a lot of sense to me. Almost certainly the biggest obstacle to getting people to try it is how finicky it is to get running. It's not super complicated, but dragging things into the right folders and downloading from sketchy-seeming russian sites is a bit much for most. Happy to...

Perhaps! It kinda of works too—he's mad, but not inherently violent, and doesn't have the stomach for violence. Unfortunately this just means that they chase each other around the map until you decide to kill one of them (that works though). I think that could work. So if you haven't spoken...

A few more observations from the playthrough Phoenix PCMerkBs.msg {424}{}{Yes. I'm here to claim the bounty Eydie Gorme} {429}{}{Eydie Gorme is dead. Unfortunately, I left her head somewhere out in the wasteland.} PSMerkAd.msg {238}{}{Aidy Gorme.} {239}{}{[Crossed out] Aidy Gorme.}...

I just loaded an old save to verify, and that's exactly the right name. Nice fixes overall! Interesting… you normally wouldn't say "Salute!" in english unless you were speaking very idiosyncractically or demanding that your interlocutor should salute _you_, so I had assumed this was an...

@OnlyALad What's your opinion on this one? On Garage City's fate On reputation: In my playthrough (Sonora 1.15 + Dayglow, F2CE, Sonora + Dayglow DLC + Script Patch 1.04), my reputation per city on the character sheet is often nutty. Sometimes "Neutral" for all towns. Sometimes swinging...

Here's one more batch, which completes Garage City. GCGate.msg: Gatekeeper {273}{}{Yeah, I heard. Turns out, you're not as bad as we thought. Looks like your makin' some friends in Garage City.} {1273}{}{Yeah, I heard. Turns out, you're not as bad as we thought. Looks like your makin' some...

Yeah, I couldn't figure this one out either. I don't remember encountering it in the game. That's why I took at approach of trying to rewrite it to keep a similar meaning while sounding less awkward. {270}{}{Tell me, did a slave convoy pass through here?} {271}{}{Yeah, there was one. But I...

The farther I play into the game, the more true this seems. The writing definitely improves as the game progresses.