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  1. The Dutch Ghost

    Fallout: Sunshine Waste - Stop This Crazy Thing! (A Vault Archives PnP Adventure)

    I have to say that your write it down very nicely, not wasting too much time on fluff like I tend to do as I want to give my ideas as miuch details as possible as Hardboiled Android can attest. Its mostly because I one day hope to make something of my ideas like a source book with a complete...
  2. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    I just updated entry four with some changes and additions. Going through this text again shows me how this is a learning experience for me as I seek to recognize where I need to add more or need to reduce but also how I need to make my sentences better, my use of grammar. I think the audience...
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    As soon as I have some more build and the means to make nice photos of them I will show all of...

    As soon as I have some more build and the means to make nice photos of them I will show all of you some of my gunpla models. Its a nice hobby to do as it keeps my mind of what happened to me four weeks ago.
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    Thanks need to go to a Dutch gunpla fan group on which I met a gunpla builder in my home city...

    Thanks need to go to a Dutch gunpla fan group on which I met a gunpla builder in my home city that showed me the basics of how to build a gunplan and get rid of nobs and attachment points.
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    I finished my first gunpla a couple of days ago, well a mini gunpla. I am quite proud of having...

    I finished my first gunpla a couple of days ago, well a mini gunpla. I am quite proud of having accomplished this.
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    Dutch Ghost final post

    I am definitely working towards that, TheKingofVault14 Fortunately the Netherlands has a lot of support organizations for people with psychological ailments who need short term or long term support because they need some extra help to keep their minds and their lives in order.
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    Dutch Ghost final post

    Hello people, I have a question. Shall I tell you what has happened three weeks ago or do you feel that I best keep that private and just tell how I have been doing since. For example I am now entering my second week that I am home again, and do thinks like cooking for myself and getting...
  8. The Dutch Ghost

    Terminator: Resistance - Now with Annihilation Line DLC

    Maybe after finishing this game and its DLC, you could also check out Robocop Rogue City as in many ways it is very similar. I know what you mean, there used to be a lot of AA games between the main big blockbuster titles. These were often more average but would make good fill in games while...
  9. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    4. Now Ira and Misha’s first stop would be the news agency that Jeffrey Eiley had been working for while he was investigating his current story about a large number of people that had gone missing over the last couple of months. Jeffrey had noticed a lot of people considered to be ‘invisible’...
  10. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    I still feel I have a lot to learn about writing a story but I will let this go on for now I just changed chapter 3 as I felt I needed to introduce a plot device that plays a big role earlier in the story.
  11. The Dutch Ghost

    Dutch Ghost final post

    It is the most surreal thing you can experience. Like suddenly being in one of those fictional game scenarios like a Sims game but you are at war with the player who tries to send you through the trip of hell. That is how I describe it, an evil Sims player trying to take control of you. I try...
  12. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    3. Paul Robertson was in the middle of a meeting with several higher ups in the government circles when the phone call came in. He may have ignored the phone call as the discussion was very important for the upcoming review board until he saw what the number was. He immediately excused himself...
  13. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    2. Again he saw the strange alien skies, worlds with more than one moon in the sky and colors that just did not seem to make sense. They were so strange that they defied any description. It was as if he did not have the right eyes to look at them, the right senses to comprehend them. And then...
  14. The Dutch Ghost

    Dutch Ghost final post

    And I will continue on it but I also have more ideas on my mind that I also wish to share with all of you. I will reply to you all individually later one. Sorry for shocking people so much.
  15. The Dutch Ghost

    Dutch Ghost final post

    Hello all I am not gone completely but I need to work through some issue at the moment. I am currently staying at a mental health clinic after I sufferered a mental breakdown and experienced a psychotic episode during which I heavily hallicucinated people contacting me from other times. Please...
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    Dutch Ghost final post

    I wish to anounce that I am leaving the forrum of as if now for personal reason Sorry I will not be back I can not explain
  17. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    Please post any feedback you have for me on my story so far. I would love to hear from people.
  18. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    1. The man named Jeffrey Eiley woke up from unconsciousness, and found himself bloodied and beaten, he recalled being stopped by the military vehicles on the road when he rushed back to his editor to share the incredible discovery he had made regarding the missing people and this unknown...
  19. The Dutch Ghost

    Presenting my original story; The Dark Side

    Hello all, This is the first draft of an original science fiction/dark fantasy story that I am working on, the Dark Side There will probably be needed some editing, maybe even additional material in the future, so for now I ask that people understand that there may be flaws in this that need...
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