A webcomic in the making by me.

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Quoth

First time out of the vault
I hesitated before posting this, I was going to post it on the off topic forum but I thought it would be out of place.

This is a webcomic i am promoting by word of mouth only. I don't think I will ever make money out of this so I'll do it while it's fun.

http://blogolotron.6x.to

It has nothing to do with fallout but its art, sort of.

Tell me what you think.
 
Its quite good though I prefer a bit more detailed comics, and one little thing somehow I feel it would be better with only black and white colors. About the text and short stories they are okay
 
Did you really have to rub that in twice, Jotisz? ;)

It's pretty entertaining actually, but the main problem about these sort of comics is that I have seen them before, done by others - if you know what I mean. These sort of graphics are pretty common on the internet.

Still: just do your thing and in a year or so you might not even recognize this old style as yours anymore. You'll make incredible progress if you keep doing these.

alec's verdict: :ok:
 
He'll make incredible progress if he actually tries to make his art better. He can't just keep drawing the same shit and expect results; he'll turn in Tim Buckley not progress artistically for years. Or ever.

It's pretty cute. Your robots are cute. people somewhat, maybe not so much. Work on your style, add some next/previous buttons. Always make an attempt to cut down on dialog, because comics need to know and remember "Show, not tell."

Vote; Good for now, but you can always improve.
 
If you take a good look my people drawings are a cheap rip off from the zero punctuation people that yahtzee draws.

but shh.
 
Keep doing what you are doing. You're heading forward and forward might lead to interesting places.
 
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