welsh
Junkmaster
BK, normally I am not in the business of extensive editing.
But I will give you a few tips.
(1) Good writing counts. Bad writing turns off fellow posters and if they don't want to write with you because your writing sucks, well then the thread dies. YOur writing is seriously in need of work. I am not going to begrudge you your age. I am guessing that either English is a second language or you have yet to reach 15.
But, since this is my thread and since I am the admin here, if your writing continues to suck I will have to kill you again.
(2) Don't try to dominate a story. A story takes off as it will. Take the initiative to move the story around, but not in large sweeping moves. A bit of development in a post is usually better than a big change, ie.
(3) Be courteous to others. Since this is a cooperative exercise it's important to work together. SO, for example, post your character on the character thread if you want to develop a character. Then post in the thread when the others have approved it. Usually they will.
(4) Good writing counts. Take pride in your work. Don't think of this as pen and pencil role play done on line. That doesn't happen effectively. Rather, think of this as a novel in which you participate as a writer.
(5) Listen to criticism seriously.
So, first post your character and then we will see.
And finally
(6) Don't expect me to edit your work. I have better things to do with my time than play repairman. The more of that I do, the more I am prone to kill you.
Now, reading this you might think, "Damn Welsh, you are a power mad Nazi motherfucker."
To which my response is simple, "Yes, when the need arises."
But I will give you a few tips.
(1) Good writing counts. Bad writing turns off fellow posters and if they don't want to write with you because your writing sucks, well then the thread dies. YOur writing is seriously in need of work. I am not going to begrudge you your age. I am guessing that either English is a second language or you have yet to reach 15.
But, since this is my thread and since I am the admin here, if your writing continues to suck I will have to kill you again.
(2) Don't try to dominate a story. A story takes off as it will. Take the initiative to move the story around, but not in large sweeping moves. A bit of development in a post is usually better than a big change, ie.
(3) Be courteous to others. Since this is a cooperative exercise it's important to work together. SO, for example, post your character on the character thread if you want to develop a character. Then post in the thread when the others have approved it. Usually they will.
(4) Good writing counts. Take pride in your work. Don't think of this as pen and pencil role play done on line. That doesn't happen effectively. Rather, think of this as a novel in which you participate as a writer.
(5) Listen to criticism seriously.
So, first post your character and then we will see.
And finally
(6) Don't expect me to edit your work. I have better things to do with my time than play repairman. The more of that I do, the more I am prone to kill you.
Now, reading this you might think, "Damn Welsh, you are a power mad Nazi motherfucker."
To which my response is simple, "Yes, when the need arises."
