I'm sorry but I check this site ones a month; this was very good written piece; and I got the same opinion on comies, nazis and muslims all dreak; there's entire forum of like minded people google JTF Forum (not the game ) you shoud check; In any case I'm lookin' forward for more updates.
Its a truly awesome work of fiction Shiozaki, nice to see an author (or future author?) on NMA.
I've only just started reading it though, so I won't comment much so far on the story, just thought I might post up and say how much I enjoy seeing some creative talent. (and I know from personal experience that authors tend to have a slight neurotic tendencies.)
Keep up the effort. Looking forward to reading more.