The rebirth of "The battle"

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RE: The confrentation

OOC: Your ideas are so good, I don't know what to write.
 
RE: The confrentation

"Ahh!!! God damn...how could it be Neo'z...zizter!?" stammered Insane, startled at what he had saw.

POW!POW!

"Commander! Your 4WD's ready! Can I come in?" shouted one of Santa Anna's troops, powunding on the door.

"Ahh holy shit...I better think of a way fazt or I'll be dead..." said Insane to himself.

"Hey commander? Are you ok?"

A bulb suddendly lit up in Insane's mind. He quickly ripped the power armor off Neo's sister and wear it.

"I'm almost done! Now go get me a 7.62 firing unit and a power fizt! Then put that traitor'z corpze and the ztuffz I needed into my 4WD!" shouted Insane.

"Yes commander!"

"Tezting! Tezting! Fang do you hear me?" shouted Insane, over the power armor's radio.

"Insane! You still inside the vault? Get here quick!! We're pinned down!"

"What!? Fuck it! Well, I've got good and bad newz, which you want to hear firzt?"

"As you wish!"

"Lizten carefully! The good newz that I've got Santa Anna'z zecond...err...woman."

"A woman!?"

"Yez and it'z Neo'z zizter! Bad newz that another zquad of troopz are now moving out from the vault and I'm with them! I'm in a 4WD zo don't fire at it! Over and out!"

Insane then carried Neo's sister and rushed to the garage.

"Commander! Your order's done! But who that you carrying?"

"None of your buzinezz! It'z the Holy One'z order! Gentlemen, ztart your enginez!"

Leaded by Insane'z 4WD, four pre-war police car followed. All cars, including Insane's 4WD had got a M60 turret controlled by the driver from inside. The vehicles are all desert-camoed.
 
RE: The confrentation

Neo was in the truck Santa Anna's vehicle. He was bound with rope, blindfolded, and gagged. All that he knew was that after the guards had figured out had figured out that he (Neo) wasn't dead, they had tied him up and carried him where ever Santa Anna went. For the past few minutes he had been bouncing up and down in the truck of Santa Anna's vehicle. A few bullets had whizzed in the truck. He knew that they couldn't have drove too far, because south of "Alamo" was just ocean. Santa Anna would have to stop soon... this part of Mexico was known to have cliffs on it's coastline.

OOC: I hope you have a good idea why Neo's sister would be on Santa Anna's side.
 
A little help arrives...

* After Greven had finally managed to convince the Rangers to help guard the border, Greven decided to assemble a strike force, and go on a little hunting mission. Only recently, Texas had sent a large flying ship into space, using old pre-war tech plans, and had commandeered what the 'ancients' called a spy satellite. The government had been using it to try and track down mutant activity, but it had spotted something odd just minutes before. A large amount of vehicles had been spotted driving along a dirt path, shooting at each other. Greven had quickly assembled a 'chopper/hummer force and gave the order to converge on their position. Odd as it may seem, the 'street battle' was occuring less then 20 miles away from Greven's current military base.*
OOC) Ok, I hope this doesn't hurt the story too much, my coming in and attempting to save the day. [again] :) ALSO : I currently own part of a site containing Starcraft, Earthbound, and yes, a small Fallout section headed by me. Currently its all just a bunch of boards, but it'll soon be a site, check it out, and I may just decide to force the site owner to give ya a position -mod/admin/help me build my part o the site-
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RE: A little help arrives...

Fang knew that he needed to bring the vehicle to a stop before Santa Anna reached the mutants base. According to the GPS they were getting near now. Fang looked round, there were enemy reinforcements approaching from behind

What was that? Fang thought, There was a couple of Brotherhood vertibirds. Fang looked back. One was already in bad condition thanks to the high number of Santa Anna's tanks attacking them. At least the BOS were providing a distraction while they could focus on Santa Anna's vehicle

Fang ordered the driver to hit the acceleration like crazy. The vehicle shot ahead and approached Santa Anna and his remaining escort from the side. Fang considered jumping but it seeme a little too much of a risk.

There was another vehicle approaching from the side and a town or city coming into view ahead. As the vehicle shot onwards Fang could see the city. It was almost completly destroyed. Halves of buildings had been ripped off and it looked like only a few of the buildings were still used. Fang checked it on the GPS system. This was close to the Mutant base.

This open land car chase had just turned into a chase through the destroyed city. This would give them an advantage as those trying to escape.

Fang shot wildy out of the vehicle until they actually reached the city. Most of the remaining vehicles were damged including their own as numerous bullets had hit it. As the group swerved the vehicle to enter the city a shot hit there engine. They screeched to a halt.

"A cable broke," Somebody shouted putting it back together.

The vehicle shot back into action but it was too late to reach Santa Anna. It appeared that they had lost the chase.

Suddenly a vehicle came into view. It was Santa Anna's. It was still and not moving. The driver was just able to stop before it but everybody lept out just in case. It was a good thing they did because Santa Anna's vehicle exploded as they approached it. There's was destroyed.

"It was a trap," Fang yelled "But the target must be here somewhere"

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It's only cheating if you get caught
- Fang_Of_the_BOS@hotmail.com
 
RE: A little help arrives...

Fang knew that he needed to bring the vehicle to a stop before Santa Anna reached the mutants base. According to the GPS they were getting near now. Fang looked round, there were enemy reinforcements approaching from behind

What was that? Fang thought, There was a couple of Brotherhood vertibirds. Fang looked back. One was already in bad condition thanks to the high number of Santa Anna's tanks attacking them. At least the BOS were providing a distraction while they could focus on Santa Anna's vehicle

Fang ordered the driver to hit the acceleration like crazy. The vehicle shot ahead and approached Santa Anna and his remaining escort from the side. Fang considered jumping but it seeme a little too much of a risk.

There was another vehicle approaching from the side and a town or city coming into view ahead. As the vehicle shot onwards Fang could see the city. It was almost completly destroyed. Halves of buildings had been ripped off and it looked like only a few of the buildings were still used. Fang checked it on the GPS system. This was close to the Mutant base.

This open land car chase had just turned into a chase through the destroyed city. This would give them an advantage as those trying to escape.

Fang shot wildy out of the vehicle until they actually reached the city. Most of the remaining vehicles were damged including their own as numerous bullets had hit it. As the group swerved the vehicle to enter the city a shot hit there engine. They screeched to a halt.

"A cable broke," Somebody shouted putting it back together.

The vehicle shot back into action but it was too late to reach Santa Anna. It appeared that they had lost the chase.

Suddenly a vehicle came into view. It was Santa Anna's. It was still and not moving. The driver was just able to stop before it but everybody lept out just in case. It was a good thing they did because Santa Anna's vehicle exploded as they approached it. There's was destroyed.

"It was a trap," Fang yelled "But the target must be here somewhere"

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- Fang_Of_the_BOS@hotmail.com
 
RE: A little help arrives...

Fang knew that he needed to bring the vehicle to a stop before Santa Anna reached the mutants base. According to the GPS they were getting near now. Fang looked round, there were enemy reinforcements approaching from behind

What was that? Fang thought, There was a couple of Brotherhood vertibirds. Fang looked back. One was already in bad condition thanks to the high number of Santa Anna's tanks attacking them. At least the BOS were providing a distraction while they could focus on Santa Anna's vehicle

Fang ordered the driver to hit the acceleration like crazy. The vehicle shot ahead and approached Santa Anna and his remaining escort from the side. Fang considered jumping but it seeme a little too much of a risk.

There was another vehicle approaching from the side and a town or city coming into view ahead. As the vehicle shot onwards Fang could see the city. It was almost completly destroyed. Halves of buildings had been ripped off and it looked like only a few of the buildings were still used. Fang checked it on the GPS system. This was close to the Mutant base.

This open land car chase had just turned into a chase through the destroyed city. This would give them an advantage as those trying to escape.

Fang shot wildy out of the vehicle until they actually reached the city. Most of the remaining vehicles were damged including their own as numerous bullets had hit it. As the group swerved the vehicle to enter the city a shot hit there engine. They screeched to a halt.

"A cable broke," Somebody shouted putting it back together.

The vehicle shot back into action but it was too late to reach Santa Anna. It appeared that they had lost the chase.

Suddenly a vehicle came into view. It was Santa Anna's. It was still and not moving. The driver was just able to stop before it but everybody lept out just in case. It was a good thing they did because Santa Anna's vehicle exploded as they approached it. There's was destroyed.

"It was a trap," Fang yelled "But the target must be here somewhere"

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- Fang_Of_the_BOS@hotmail.com
 
Thanks Fang

OOC: Hey Fang, I appreciate you writing this ending. I have been revising South of the Border everyday I come home since forever. I have added a lot of extra scenes, battles, and emotions. I can never write car chase scenes though, that is why I need you. When I finish, he total story is gonna be better than "East Coast" and "---" (the story that Slinky did) combined. When it is all finished, I am going to send the story to the Illuminati and say it is my resume for joining. They will be shocked, at someone they have no idea about will be coming out with this masterpiece. And don't worry I'll give all the guys that worked on this, lots of credit. Don't tell the illuminati though. I want it to be a surprise. I can't till i join and meet blupencil, William, Slinky, and the gang! And <u> trust me </u> it is as good as I say. It is now 175 pages. When I started it was about 100 pages with subject/ date/ name junk removed. IT IS NOW SUPER AWESOME! I hope you can help me with the last part of this fabulous story. The least I need to end it myself is the end of this car chase, the long talk with Neo’s grandfather, why his sister is with Santa Anna, and how Santa Anna dies (maybe Neo does a sacrifice that drives Santa Anna off the edge.

Thanks Fang (and anyone else that is reading)... you made this possible
 
RE: Thanks Fang

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON May-09-01 AT 08:36PM (GMT)[p]Ok while you've been gone, I've been working on the story and have a bunch of good ideas. I'm gonna write the ideas (ten paper pages) onto the computer. I'll post tonight or tommorow afternoon.
 
RE: Thanks Fang

OOC:
By the way...how many ppl are still here? Just want to know}>}>}>
 
OOC: Ever since when the first shot of “The Battle” was fired, I have been semi-confused. Let’s just say that Aleho, Will, Fang, and Insane were in the police car, chasing Santa Anna’s buggy. (Sorry if I left anyone out. I don’t know who is still role-playing) Pretend they had destroyed all the vehicles guarding Santa Anna’s buggy. In my story Fang’s armor has become obliterated, so pretend that Fang’s power armor is damaged, but still provides minimal protection. Will is in the driver’s seat, Aleho is the passenger’s seat and Fang and Insane are in the back.

IC: All in same pre-war police car, Aleho, Will, Fang and Insane had just driven out La Paz’s ruins (the prewar city “Alamo” was built on), to see Santa Anna only 300 yards away. Knowing they were so close to catching up, Will pressed down the gas pedal, pushing the pre-war police car past it’s red line and to the limits. At the police car’s quickening pace, they were nearing Santa Anna’s buggy. The group have no idea where Santa Anna was heading to, but his buggy seemed not to be meandering on it’s path. The only thing seen on the horizon was some cliffs leading to the ocean, nothing unusual… until Insane pointed out a small arrangement of pre-war buildings and short pre-war roads.

This small complex of buildings was far from the ruins, past the outskirts of town. There were several roads adjacent the complex that started and stopped in the middle of no where, averaging only a mile in length. Seeing so many of those odd roads, they had no idea what this place was. Getting closer and closer to the arrangement of buildings and roads, they passed a sign in Spanish. Knowing very little but some Spanish, Insane guessed it said something about La Paz, air, and “Terminal A and B”. The sign also had an arrow pointing straight towards the arrangement of buildings.

Reaching the buildings, Santa Anna’s buggy started driving on one of the short roads that started and stopped in the middle of nowhere. Getting closer to Santa Anna, they started driving on the road he was on. Their police car passed another sign, “Runway 2”, indicating to the road they were on. They had no idea what a “runway” was, but to them it just seemed like a wide road.

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Kicking up a huge cloud of dust behind them, they joined Santa Anna’s vehicle on the “runway”, still chasing him and getting closer. They were now only fifty yards away from him. They momentary lost sight of Santa Ann’s vehicle as he turned the corner of the “Hanger” building. The “Hanger” looked like some sort of storage building for the whole place. Going over 60 mph, the car screeched as it turned the corner of the “Hanger”… revealing a huge plane rumbling out of the hanger. The whole group gaped as a gigantic cargo airplane rumbled out the hanger. “HOLY CRAP!!! A FREAKING PLANE!!!“ The two-story behemoth of a vehicle scared the crap out of them. This was an incredible site. (After seeing this site, Aleho would need a new pair of pants.)

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Combat Designation: Commercial cargo aircraft transport
Cover of Vehicle: Full
Body Strength: Incredibly High
Mounted Weapons:
· Numerous weapon ports allowing the occupants to fire out of the vehicle, through small windows
Engine: Aircraft Brake and Drive system (Jet turbine engines gone)
Maneuverability: Low
Maximum Speed: 80 mph (But very slow acceleration)
Cargo Capacity: Has been converted to living space

With seventy years of disrepair, there are no wings or a jet engine. Do not let that trick you, it is powerful. Evident from the huge back wheels, the scrap metal armor and the gun ports distributed around the plane, this vehicle had been tinkered with… and transformed into a mobile fortress.

Serving as the hangout and the living quarters of the super mutants, this bird can cruise at breakneck speeds. Is extremely well armored. Part of the nose of the plane alternately serves as a ramp, used to easily bring cargo in.

As the C330 “Big mouth” Industrial Cargo Jumbo Transport plane rumbled out of the garage, shaking everyone in the police car, they read the pre message of “Continental Airlines… we fly to serve you” on it. A ramp opening from the nose of the plane (originally used to easily bring cargo in) opened to “swallow” Santa Anna’s vehicle as the group read the words on the side. Their jaws dropped even more as it headed their way.
The tables had turned, Will, Aleho, Insane, and Fang were now the ones running for their lives.

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Gunning the engine, Will sped the pre-war, rusted police car down the runway they had been driving on. The aircraft’s numerous weapon ports fired into the police car, mostly missing because of the distance in between the two speeding vehicles. The distance was shortening though, the plane was slowly accelerating. They hoped something as big as that couldn’t out run something like their speedy vehicle and guessed the plane’s steady acceleration would stop sometime soon. Heck, this was the fastest Will had ever driven in his life. Hoping a weakness could be found on the plane, Aleho stuck his head out window and looked at the plane… which he pulled his head right back in. A bullet had just whizzed past his ear, smashing into the side mirror. Using the rear view mirror, he looked back to see Fang and Insane shooting out the back window. A mesh/glass barrier was separating him from back seats, disabling Aleho from shooting back. Aleho could only shoot out the door window, but the plane wasn’t to the side of them. He felt helpless in the situation. Fang’s and Insane’s bullets (and lasers) were bouncing off the huge plane’s armor. The group didn’t have heavy enough hardware. The plane was chasing them and was catching up… and Aleho saw no weakness.

Over the bullets being fired, Will yelled to the back, “THE BIGGER THEY ARE, THE BIGGER THEY FALL!” Immediately after finishing his sentence, Will swerved the car off the runway and onto the rough terrain of the hard-baked wasteland. Little did Will realize, huge all-terrain wheels had been installed on this beast of a vehicle. (see picture) If the wheels had not been replaced, the plane would fall on it’s side going 20 mph or faster while turning. With the huge wheel modifications, the aircraft easily did the sharp turn and changed terrains with ease, from smooth road to bumpy desert.
Seeing this Aleho yelled for Will to drive straight for the ocean, hoping the massive plane would not be able to take vertical Cliffs

Author’s note: Sadly they would never make it to the ocean.

OOC: I’m trying to control the other characters so you guys have total flexibility with yours. Please don’t defeat the plane, I already have a really good plan. Other stuff can happen thought, or they could try a plan that works horribly and puts them in an ever more vulnerable position. That would be cool.
 
[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON May-12-01 AT 07:23PM (GMT)[p]I don't know Insane. Has anyone even heard of Will being around? I know reptile is, I think.
Anyway I have plenty more story that I just need to transfer from paper to computer. The only thing for the end that i don't have is why Neo's sister is bad.
 
OOC:I added in Neo's sister cause in those early posts Neo mentioned that his sister is lost when he escapes from Santa Anna...Here's something that I've thought of why she's bad:

Soon after that Neo successfully escape from Santa Anna his sis has been caught (Neo's sis didn't know that he made it) , Neo's sister has been caught. Finding a charred and mutilated cropse in Neo's house, Santa Anna declares that Neo is dead. Hearing the news, Neo's sister became a "mindless" person (I mean the kind of ppl which had experienced a heavy mental impact, e.g. death of all family members at once, etc. This kind of "mindless" person, if being "inserted" memories, can be easily controlled and is perfect for being a soldier. At pre-war, there is actually such projects of training such soldiers. Not missing this chance, Santa Anna trained her into his right-hand man. Unless given another greater "positive" mental impact, this kind of people is almost hopeless to return to their own selfs.

p.s The C330 makes me think of Metal Slug's 1st boss...

IC:

"What!? A plane on off-road!?" shouted everybody, startled at what they saw.

Now the plane is nearing them. They continue to gun it's engine but it's of no avail. They need to think of something fast.

"Damn we're hopelezz! Wait a zec...Hey! Zomebody get me a rope and a long rod or zomething like that!"

"Here! But what the hell are you gonna do with them?" asked Will, busily driving the police car.

"You continue concentrate on what ya doin! Fang! Open the door! Help me control the rope!" commanded Insane, tiding the rope on himself at the same time.

Carrying a pre-war traffic light, Insane boost out of the police car with his hydrolic rollers (Is there something like this on the PA?). He dashed in a zig-zag path towards the plane's front wheel, trying to prevent from getting shot. He finally reached the finishing line.

"Eat thiz!!!" yelled Insane, jamming the traffic light between the wheels (I mean between the 2 "small" wheels which makes up a "big" wheel). He then boosts back to the police car.

The plane stopped.

"We've made it!"

Well they're wrong. The plane soon moves again, snapping the traffic light into two. The rear end of the light rammed into the police car's fuel tank.
 
Ya know

OOC) If anybody ever bothered to READ my last post, (heh) theyd know that a large contingent of Texan helicopters and military hummers were on route to wherer the battle was, so if POSSIBLE, (sheesh) a bit of help could appear from me)

IC) "Holy crap!!!" Screamed Greven after seeing a giant 2 story tall airplane chasing a police car in the middle of the desert. "What the hell is that... thing doing!?!??!" Greven, not completely sure what to do, decided to take his chopper in close to the cop car, with the other choppers flying behind him. As Greven neared the car, he thought he recognized someone he knew. As he was about to yell to the car, he heard a loud !kaboom! and the sound of metal impacting on the desert floor. He turned to see one of his choppers had been shot down, apparently by someone armed with a missle launcher on the plane. " This is Greven to all choppers, OPEN FIRE ON THE PLANE, I REPEAT, OPEN FIRE ON THE PLANE! WE HAVE CONFIRMED HOSTILES!" With that, Greven began an attack run on the massive plane. He fired 4 missles at the plane, but none of them seemed to do anything. Then, Greven noticed something. THere seemed to be a small fuel tank near some of the wheels. With that, he fired a single missle at the tank, and to his suprise, the tank exploded with a delayed sonic boom. The other parts of the plane were now covered in fire, but it didnt seem to do anything other than increase the amount of gunfire coming outta it at Greven.

OOC) I hope this dont screw much up, all taht happened is basically a buincha military stuff is now there, and the plane is now on fire
 
RE: Ya know

Insane, thanks for the idea of Neo's sister. Sounds great! Greven, don't worry, I've read the posts. :-) Tommorow when I post it will be a big (good)one. Almost done writing it.
 
Behold...

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON May-16-01 AT 00:45AM (GMT)[p]OOC: The bullets hitting the police car have increased as the plane has gotten way closer. Now only 50 to 30 yards away now, which very close for vehicles going 60 mph or more. Remember Will is driving, Aleho is in the passenger eat and Insane and Greven are in the back. A glass, wire mesh is separating the back from the front.

IC: Aleho looked back again to see Insane and Fang hunkered down, trying to protect themselves from the thunderstorm of bullets raining down on the pre-war police car. It seemed impossible to stop this mammoth plane.

With a burst of speed, the C330 opened its huge nose ramp to try to “swallow” their police car, like it had done with Santa Anna’s buggy. Sparks flew everywhere from the ramp, as the ramp grinded over the desert earth at seventy miles per hour. Will and the group knew that if their car was “swallowed” inside the plane, they would surely be dead.

As Aleho was slouched down in the seat, trying to avoid bullets, he heard Will scream in pain as a bullet had struck him in the back. The police car started to swerve left until Aleho quickly grabbed the wheel. Another cry could be heard as another round pierced the roof and hit Insane. Insane kept screaming as he saw the blood gushing out his leg at an alarming rate. Fang, trying not to panic, drew a stimpack out, about to inject it in Rick. As Fang was about to inject the stimpack, several high-caliber bullets pierced Fang’s already damaged armor, throwing Fang forward from the force. Being thrown forward from the surpassing pain, the stimpack’s needle was jammed deep into Insane’s hand, digging into bone. Insane sweared as loud as he could. Another round hit Fang and he could hear his kneecap shatter. A rocket hit the ground two feet away from the car, throwing metal shrapnel into everyone in the car.

Everyone was dying... it was a brutal massacre. It seemed Santa Anna had won. They knew they were doomed. Another of the relentless machine gun bursts ripped through the roof, hitting everyone. Will slumped down in his own blood as a bullet had struck him again. Aleho, who was numb and cold, fished around in his pocket for his life-giving objects (stimpacks)… but the unthinkable had happened… Aleho had run out of stimpacks. Feeling immense pain, he stumbled to hold on the wheel straight. Aleho let out a prayer as he saw a bright light.

As the car slowed, the plane rumbled forward with its ramp open, going for the kill.


A few seconds earlier, from inside the cockpit…

Neo couldn’t stand the screams of pain clearly heard in the cockpit of Santa Anna’s plane. His former allies were slowly dying. Now Neo was questioning why he had originally joined his grandfather. Santa Anna’s visions of power and glory (while describing his military campaign) had taken advantage of the amount intense emotions Neo had felt during Santa Anna’s questioning. Santa Anna had broken him down emotionally, then reshaped Neo to become one like Santa Anna. Realizing his long lost grandfather was Santa Anna… that had been mind-boggling. No wonder he had had such an emotional breakdown talking to him. Now, Neo couldn’t believe he had agreed with Santa Ann in the vault.

Every wasted second thinking about this dilemma was hurting them even more… one more shot of pain for them, one more loss of an eye for them, one more moment of being in pure suffering and torment. Neo couldn’t stand it. He couldn’t let Santa Anna kill the same people that had saved his life. He had to stop the plane. Neo saw the wide, evil smile on Santa Anna’s face as Santa Anna heard the group in the police car scream again.

Neo took a look around, trying to figure out a way to stop the plane. The whole plane was really just one huge two-story room. The cockpit was above the ramp entrance, accessible by a shanty ladder. From the small cockpit, you can see inside the whole rusted plane. Several mutants were shooting out the gun ports, a few were working the plane inside the cockpit and a bunch were inside a huge 2-ton military truck, waiting to fire into the police car about to be swallowed. Santa Anna and (unknown to Neo) his sister in power armor was next to Neo, in the cockpit. Nobody really knew what this vehicle monstrosity was originally used, but they wouldn’t believe it if they had learned that they were in a vehicle that had soared 39,000 feet above the ground. Felt so much power inside the massive plane.

Throwing Neo back into the brink of realities, he heard the blood-curdling cries of his former party member being slaughtered, again. Neo scanned the cockpit for anything that would stop the plane. There were a least a million knobs, switches, and indicator lights, almost all he had never heard of their function. Half of their labels for the buttons had worn off. He didn’t know a thing about this vehicle’s controls. Looking out the cockpit window, he saw the rapidly approaching vertical cliff, From the police car’s sight they probably couldn’t see it. Neo’s eyes lit up as he finally found something that could take the plane to a complete stop… the “Retract Landing Gear” lever.

Neo quickly reached out to the cockpit controls. The mutant co-pilot yelled out, “What the hell ya doing, that’s gonna—“ The mutant would never be able to finish his sentence, Neo had already raised the plane’s wheels. The whole aircraft dropped several feet and the plane fuselage gave way to contact with the asphalt. With the 80-mph momentum of the plane completely stopping and its wheels suddenly gone, it gave a violent stop. Huge, bright sparks flew everywhere as the plane was instantly billowed in smoke. Metal shavings were flying everywhere. The metal contact screeched earsplitting loud as the plane hastily stopped, only taking ten seconds for the multi-ton plane to completely halt.

Everyone else’s 80-mph momentum kept going through.

The military truck full of mutants soared out the plane at its 80 mph momentum. It collided with the ground, flipping over several times, smashing in the roof. With the spinning, wipeout crash slowing down the truck a great deal, the truck reentered the plane by use of the ramp. Hitting the ramp at an angle, the truck flew upwards into the fuselage, puncturing the roof. The truck exploded as a large rocket warhead had been deeply jarred by the roof, exploding under the intense pressure. This explosion ignited the plane’s fuel supply, killing everyone… and everything in the plane fuselage.

Neo, Santa Anna, and the others in the cockpit were thrown out the cockpit’s window at least a hundred feet, shattering the window. Some were thrown to the side of the plane, while a few were thrown forward… to be instantly killed as the plane ran over.

For a ¼ of a mile, a trail of metal wreckage littered the desert. After a long while, the last object finally came to a stop. Smoke still covered the plane and scattered fires lay about.

Everyone’s vision had faded to black.


OOC: When anybody from the group regains unconscious, they will find almost everyone dead except the group in the police car, Greven’s helicopter (the helicopter might be damaged, up to Greven), and two figures near the plan. Those two figures are Neo and Santa Anna pointing pistols at each other’s heads, point blank. Please don’t kill off Santa Anna or Neo. They need to have a talk.

Oh yea... today I wrote a lot. Hope it all makes sense.
 
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OOC: The "speeches" below are all "spoken" in Insane's mind.

IC: "Wahhhahaaa!"

"Ahhhhhh!!Noooooo!!"

"Diu...where'z everyone!? Why iz everyone lying around? Are...are...are they all dead? Zomeone tell me please! Hey anzwer me! What the hell happened...arrgggghhhh!!!"

It seemed only that everything had happened in a second. The chase, the escape, the crash, everything. Now it's total chaos inside the mind of Insane, chilling screams and sinister laughthers kept repeating inside him. He is going berserk. The only thing that he is clear now is that to kill Santa Anna.

Insane now sees Santa Anna standing right infront of him, about 300 metres away. He also sees a humanoid figure standing next to Santa Anna, pointing their guns to each other's head. Insane knew that it's a great chance to screw Santa Anna, properly one which will not happen again. He immidately grabs for his RPK, which is usually holstered on his back, vertically in a gun rack. But he didn't find what he wanted, it's empty.

"Ahh fuck you! Gimme my gun you Santa Anna banztard! Let me kill you! Urrrgggghh! Ztop that fucking laugh!"

Insane frantically looks for his gun but found nothing. Actually his gun is just 1.5 arm length in front of him. He can't caught hold of it because first, he is berserk and his eyes focus towards Santa Anna. Secondly, his legs are under the the BIG MOUTH (TM) ramp. After a few seconds (To Insane, he thought that 5 mintues had passed), Insane finally stops. He then heard Santa Anna having a talk to that humanoid figure.

OOC: Ok so now Santa Anna is 100% vernuable against Insane, provided that Insane got back his gun. So in case, if it's needed, you guys can make Insane gun Santa Anna, but not a fatal shot, maybe only to better our stituations.

And I've just thought of a crazy idea: A word-based RPG of South of The Border. I'm thinking of using VB (and must....:() to write it, so do you guys agree on it?

If anyone here is an expert in VB, please can you provide me some scripts for writing games, best if it can even be explained by a VB newbie. I'm actually planning either to write a shooter or a word-based RPG for my project...
 
RE: Behold...

OOC: If you do that wait till I post the finallized version. It has a ton of extra scenes, 100% spell-checked and grammer-checked, makes more sense and over all a lot better. If you do it, go ahead sounds like a great idea. I know nothing about Visual basic though.

I will post some more story soon.
 
RE: Behold...

Don't worry, I'm still writing and have plenty of stuff. It's just that I have finals and I have been studying big-time. That is all.
 
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