Wooz said:
Lol, Thanks! I hoped "tickatickaticka" sounded like a rad-roach!
Surf Solar said:
The artwork really blew me away! Really really good. I am a bit concerned of your mention of "PA lesbians" though.
Thanks,I'm glad you like the artwork! Why does the mention of "PA" lesbians concern you though? (For the record, another poster said that. I was merely responding. And I said if they were going to be lesbians, they would have to grow up.)
Brother None said:
Art is definitely improving. But there certainly is something rather amusing about the way you draw butts.
Lol, for sure! Yeah, I didn't mean for her butt to be
so prominent in that one panel, but hey, I'm still learning and improving! Thanks for the comments.
DevilTakeMe said:
Everytime I see any kind of advertisement that says "A Taste of Things to Come" - I can't help but think of the joke from GTA: San Andreas (where a car knocks out 'Things to').
I didn't play GTA:San Andreas so I'll take your word for it. In the comic,I was going for foreshadowing or whatever. After all, if you played FO3, you
know what's to come. Thanks for reading and commenting.
verevoof said:
Looks good. You mentioned before it takes you a long time to do this. How long does it take you to complete one page?
It depends. Anywhere from 1 week if I'm really manic to 2 months if there's other stuff going on in life. On average I'd say 2 weeks to fully complete one page, thumbnail to last cross hatch.
TorontRayne said:
I need more of this. You should do a New Vegas one!
Lol, thanks TorontRayne! It's nice to hear someone likes what I'm doing and wants more of it. It will take me awhile to finish this FO3 story so I don't know if I'll get to NV or not.
Aguirre said:
Excellent!
Keep it coming
Thanks friend! 30 pages in all,more after that as fast as I can make them!
WorstUsernameEver said:
Character add looks a bit odd and inconsistent to me, but I like the background and the way the mood is set with black and white a lot. Haven't really started really reading it, so I can't comment on the writing, but keep at it.
Maybe this is a typo but I don't know what you mean by "character add". I agree my drawing isn't consistent, especially in these early pages. This might be more information than you wanted but I found that the more I drew the characters, the more I figured out their personalities, the more consistent the drawing got. Try reading it, I'd love for more feedback!
00z said:
1. 30+ pages into it
2. You keep the audience hanging
Those are your strongest points. (I don't even like FO3, and you've got me interested)
Tighten up you art and you'll go far. I can only imagine great things in your future once that happens. (in colour no less)
Looking forward to the rest of it.
Thank you for the encouragement! I'm always looking to improve my comics, whether it's the drawing or writing or whatever so I really appreciate the feedback. Curious, have you read all 30 pages on DA?
EnigmaGrey said:
And you've already surpassed Fallout 3's writing.
Excellent.
That's a really flattering compliment, thank you.
WillisPDunlevey said:
If you dont have a wacom pad, you should think about getting one.
Scan your art and clean up/shade with corel etc. it will save you time etc.
It's interesting you say that, 'cause I just bought a Bamboo fun tablet. It's a daunting prospect for me to use this technology, I'm so used to the old school way but if it saves time and my aching back, I 'm all about it! Would it be all right if I pm'd you at some point if I needed some help? You seem to know how to use the tablet and I know I'm gonna get stuck.
EnigmaGrey said:
[Opportunistic] I want to sell a lightly used Intuos 4 medium, as it would happen . . . A bit too small for my liking (visually impaired, I use large monitors).
Sorry friend, I just bought a Bamboo Fun. But maybe in the future, if you still have it?And/or I need it?
Now the comics!
And I didn't mean that I wasn't interested in reading it, I just didn't really had the time to give anything more than a quick look. I'm slowly catching up, and so far I don't really have much to comment about the writing, you seem to have a decent understanding of the pacing and don't bog it down by repeating Fallout 3's beginning scene by scene and a couple of lines are cool, but I haven't read too far so, again, I don't have much to say. Will definitely try to keep following and give feedback tho'. Keep up the good work!
