I liked it. Better than nearly all post-apoc amateur stuff out there, since the setting is decently worked out, props are decent and the atmosphere is good.
Obviously both acting and writing can be improved, and the props should be more worn (like the shotgun was too nice), but that's ok.
Watching movies like "A boy and his dog" would be greatly beneficial to the people involved if they haven't seen it already. Your main char doesn't need to be a hero to be worth following around. Don Johnson's character was a fucking rapist for fucks sake...
After finding the woman dead after being slashed up:
Vic: We coulda used her three more times!
Blood: Ah, war is hell.
But back to the vid: I liked the fact it wasn't a happy hollywood ending, but if you have the girls being ungrateful bitches, you could've let them shoot the guy. It's his own fault for leaving the shotgun lying around after killing the pimp.
verevoof said:
And, going back to the couple getting shot, why does the main character all of the sudden have morals, I mean, he just bought time with hookers, what did he expect indeed. The story is just not very believable, not all that great.
Why not? He bought time with hookers, not with slaves...
Just because you've got a pimp doesn't mean you're enslaved.
If you're however chained to the wall... Well... Maybe that's a step too far for the main character.
I wouldn't say that's unrealistic. I've got no issue with pimps or whores, but slavers are not on my "ok" list. Slavers would be people I wouldn't mind killing and looting their possessions tbfh.
