falloutboy360
Banned
no he didnt he came and shared a betterer story then you could write and you insult him for it your a troll...
FALLOUT WARS
- Thread starter Dragonborn
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no he didnt he came and shared a betterer story then you could write and you insult him for it your a troll...
TheChosen1
Moving Target
Totally not a sock
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falloutboy360
Banned
and your totaly not a troll
TheChosen1
Moving Target
Oh no, I've been contributing to this community for 3 years on, but secretly I was just trolling.
Dr Fallout
Centurion
It's obvious you're Dragonborn. Same shit spelling and grammar.
And it is very bad. Call that a fanfic?
RetroAmerica
It Wandered In From the Wastes
Dragon Born, you are probably the most untalented writer I have ever seen. You have no concept on how to compose a story, and your rantings and ravings are tired and boring. Also, your atrocious spelling gives you away!
TheChosen1
Moving Target
What are you talking about, this guy is the next Tolstoi!
Dr Fallout
Centurion
Yeah he writes the best shit.
He should get award, 'shittiest grama and spelz' coupled with 'Worst story'.
We wouldn't be so harsh if you didn't think it was the greatest thing on earth and you weren't rude to people.
He should get award, 'shittiest grama and spelz' coupled with 'Worst story'.
We wouldn't be so harsh if you didn't think it was the greatest thing on earth and you weren't rude to people.
Giax
It Wandered In From the Wastes
Dragonborn next writer hired by Beth.
LordAshur
Banned
I demand a sequel!
10/10, best fanfic I ever read.
Truer words were never spoken. That's also a good idea for a sequel, a War and Peace crossover with Fallout, where Napoleon comes to the Fallout universe to steal power armor technology which would allow his armies to conquer Russia. Who is the only person who can stop him... who other than -explosive artillery interrupts so you cant here him- ?
10/10, best fanfic I ever read.
Truer words were never spoken. That's also a good idea for a sequel, a War and Peace crossover with Fallout, where Napoleon comes to the Fallout universe to steal power armor technology which would allow his armies to conquer Russia. Who is the only person who can stop him... who other than -explosive artillery interrupts so you cant here him- ?
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RetroAmerica
It Wandered In From the Wastes
However, not even the power armored might of Napoleon's Old Guard, can stand up to Sharpe's Baker Rifle and his impressive two rounds a minute!
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TheChosen1
Moving Target
Something something, nuclear winter.
Big No
Watch as I open and close this door
The story was full of contrivances, lore errors, nonsensical things such as a working Corvega in the middle of a tundra warzone or using a Vertibird (also a lore error) to fly from Alaska to China in one trip, and the Enclave weren't in the PreWar world, let alone with Elite units.
0/10.
0/10.
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LordAshur
Banned
Dude, there's such a thing as artistic licence. And unless I'm mistaken, the Enclave did start out before the nukes fell.
He still writes a much better story than Bethesda, you have to admit.
He still writes a much better story than Bethesda, you have to admit.
Big No
Watch as I open and close this door
1: The way he describes the Enclave makes it sound as if it were the "power armor wearing genociders from F2 & F3. If the Enclave even did exist Prewar, it'd be more like a bunch of government officials rather than soldiers.
Edit: It seems I'm partially right, according to Tagz from Reddit:
"What existed was a loosely-structured cabal of the wealthy, powerful, and influential - politicians, soldiers, industrialists, the like. They were basically the Illuminati, except less hilariously impotent and more dangerously selfish.
The Enclave only formed after the Great War, in isolation from the United States. They can claim they are the government, but their claims have zero merit."
"What existed was a loosely-structured cabal of the wealthy, powerful, and influential - politicians, soldiers, industrialists, the like. They were basically the Illuminati, except less hilariously impotent and more dangerously selfish.
The Enclave only formed after the Great War, in isolation from the United States. They can claim they are the government, but their claims have zero merit."
2: No, his story is worse than F3's. F3's story has potential, everything in it is just poorly explained and not enough worldbuilding. This "fanfic" however is just horrendous with it's logic with such gems as:
"the chinese are going to be making a counter attack on alaska soon and aliens are attacking the moon and we need reinforcments and both places wich place do you want to go to??" a) the moons b) alaska c) none"
The dialogue in F3 may have alot of problems, but it's not nearly to the level of this fanfic's badness. Atleast the Mothership Zeta DLC was more of a Big Lipped Alligator Moment that you could ignore easily rather than an alien invasion becoming a main part in the Prewar backstory.
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I like how he fast-travelled to the moon.
I must admit, though, I only skimmed portions.
I must admit, though, I only skimmed portions.
Jogre
So Old I'm Losing Radiation Signs
Jesus Christ, I just came across this beauty. This is by far the best thing ever written.
We miss you Dragonborn, please come back to us.
EDIT:
Found the best part:
A. Let him kill you for betraying the codes
B. Shoot and kill him, but hes a good general so you'll probably lose the war without him.
C. beg for money.
I'm amazed that with options like that, he doesn't work for Bethesda.
We miss you Dragonborn, please come back to us.
EDIT:
Found the best part:
A. Let him kill you for betraying the codes
B. Shoot and kill him, but hes a good general so you'll probably lose the war without him.
C. beg for money.
I'm amazed that with options like that, he doesn't work for Bethesda.
TheChosen1
Moving Target
Hey, these are better options than Y: Yes B: No (Yes) A: Yes X: Yes?
Juza The Cloud
Nanto Goshasei
X) Sarcastic
Jogre
So Old I'm Losing Radiation Signs
Fallout 4 gives you more complex choices than that.
For example it lets you choose a faction based on a pseudo-philosophical debate with nowhere near enough information to make a judgement, and then lets you know that the choice you made has no impact on the game world, and that it reuses the same clip for 3/4 endings.