Sorry, I think it is pretty poor. His left hand has been dipped in too much FEV, his hair is just... wrong. Sorry if critisiscm bothers you, but it has to be expected. If you don't want comments, don't pust your work. Also, I don't care if it was on a bus. Sub par content made under poor circumstances isn't impressive. If you manage to make a blob with mildly pip boy-ish features while on fire and blinded with no hands, don't expect to get it framed.