OCC- Kilrick Salvage - Chapter 2 (on the road to New York)

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I am not saying that I'm not curious or would help out, I am just suggesting that you take the lead on this plot twist.

So what do you have in mind?
 
Oh, with permission of Welsh, I'd like to add just three more people, merely puppets I'll control. Two are are ex-Rangers, Reno and Dawn the one eyed sniper... The third would be Rama's brother, thought long dead, but having been enhanced and saved by the machines was augmented....

And don't forget we have to meet with Talon's father Jorus Cardias on Manhattan Isle.

Anyhow, I have armed the group. Tell me what needs revising and I'll fix it.
 
Ok, Rama, but tell us what you have planned for these two characters, and where they will drop in.

Had not forgotten Jorus, but forgot his name.

We still need to think about what Manhattan will look like. Some civilized sections, some areas of no-man's land..

Darkcorp, finish up. Kilrick will probably set a trap for those that currently are in your company, and if Eric (which for all Kilrick knows has gone bad) would be killed as well. YOu need to resolve that immediately. Either have a fight and Eric gets away, or find some way to peacefully get the exchange done.

That this group is willing to go through all this pain to bring one guy to Kilrick makes little sense to me. More, Kilrick wouldn't trust Eric if it were true- who is to say the man is not a spy.

Do it quickly so we can move the story forward.
 
Thread has been very quiet. Who is still in? I plan to start posting this weekend. SOrry have been busy with school stuff.
 
i'm here

waiting for someone to signal they are read with the tasks described by Kilrick in previous posts. (was ordered to lay low until i got the all clear)
 
I have also been very bbusy at work and my brainpower has been constantly drained (not to mention WoW has done its fair share).

If you feel the need to then go ahead and control Eric for a bit either using him for fire support or some other such activity. I plan to start posting a bit more on my days off.
 
SInce everyone seems busy it might be best to end the chapter here for now and restart in a month or two when we are less distracted.

Alternatively, I can add a problem for the entrance to NY through the PATH line. That's how we are getting in, but now how we are getting out.

So what do you think? End here and then start again in January or Feb, or continue till we actually get into NY?

Next chapter is New York and involves - resolving the side quest to find the missing father, finding the secret of the quest, resolving Logan's story, resolving most of the unknown issues and probably getting out.

IS cool?
 
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