OCC- Kilrick Salvage - Chapter 2 (on the road to New York)

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a little notice here:

i'll be gone from 30th (around noon) till the 5th (going to a rock festival)

so obviously i wont be posting

but when i come back i do intend to become fully active again, so please don't kill off my character (please please please :p )
 
With Kilrick wounded, I would like to see you folks take the game forward for a bit.

Chances are the group will move off and find a place to give first aid to the wounded.
 
Great post Welsh, loved the references to The Good, the Bad and the Ugly.

The story has been kind of slow; I’ll try and post more often to see if the story moves onward.
 
Guys I appreciate you taking the initiative and don't mean to ruin it for you. The three guys I mentioned before- black, bald and curly, are the three stooges after Suaside. They are not quite human.

I'll let Suaside tell that part of the story.

As for the group, someone can disarm the rocket from Jasmin.

Gluttonville is the next big destination, but there can be side operations. So please, take the story where you want. I'll bring us back on track sooner or later.
 
Sorry, I have been a bit busy. Will post. I am assuming you are doing what ever you plan to do with Eric.
 
nobody wanna fight the dire?

if not i'll go ahead and write up something about gluttonville...

i'll hang back for a while and if nothing happens i'll write about it (unless welsh does of course)
 
Ok, Gluttonville. Gluttonville is just a big warehouse , a kind of regional distribution house for priceclubs around the area. It's big and full of stock.

The gluttons suffer an incurable genetic disease, originally given during the war and since mutated. Basically the disease wastes people away, consuming calories. The only way to delay the illness is to eat, a lot. THus they are pretty fat.

Happily the disease is no longer contagious- we think.

There are about a dozen to 20 gluttons, mostly men. Their numbers are declining. Part of the reason might be old age, or the disease, the dire, or something else.

THe gluttons have stayed because there is a steady food source, but also to leave means getting past the Dire and the Dire would make quick work of any glutton that tried to get out on foot. Also the gluttons lack a vehicle like the rig that might get them through.

Supplies- clothes, weapons, electronics, household goods, groceries, videos, film, you name it, you can probably find it in the warehouse.

But you will probably notice that the shelves were most of the food is kept have begun to empty.

ANother things, Gluttons don't have much sex. Part of it is because they are so damn ugly that they don't want to have sex with each other. Pro-creation is often done out of necessity or with women sold to the gluttons.

SO the women should be careful. Despite their fat, the gluttons can be very strong.

The Gluttons are possessive and own much of the warehouse as a group, trading amongst each other for fun. They will trade with the group, but nothing will be given for free.

Theft is a capital offense.

Kilrick and Marshall will make the deal for the generator and a few people will have to put the generator together. This will take a couple of days as the others repair the rig.

It would be wise if the Gluttons were not told about the Greys or about the three amigos.
 
Hi there.

Many of you don't know me. I am a prodigal child here, returning to site. I watched Kilrick start and it was damn fun. Reading some of the recent stuff, I can see you are all having a great time with it, which is brilliant. I like the style I'm seeing and I hope I can live up to what has been done her in my absence.

One reason I'm posting her is I wanted to sound people out about a character idea.

I'm thinking of a criminal/psycho type (I know Rama and Eden have that sort of covered but I was going for a subtler approach).

I'm a big Pitch Black fan and I quite enjoyed Chronicles of Riddick although it could not live up to Pitch Black in the "Making Riddick Cool" department, but still, Riddick himself is too obvious and I've already created a character with similar abilities in another RP (Lone Wanderers if anyone is interested in reading it - Welsh has writing some fantastic stuff throughout it), but the basic premise of a badass criminal on the run appeals to me. Of course the ide awill be fleshed out and actually given some character - no point just writing a concept.

What do you think? Ideas, constructive criticism and just plain honest criticism is welcome.

Thank you for your time.
 
sounds good. Post up on the character thread. Don't forget you still have Reik.

Other plot developments. A lot of this part is for Prudence. She has been abducted by the Gluttons. While most of us have yet to realize it, the Gluttons have ulterior motives.

She will be tied up and potentially tortured but what the Gluttons are up to shoudl be discovered soon.

Does anyone have any doubts what the Gluttons are about?
 
Hey Welsh, no problem with easing off. I was just testing the old muscles. Reik is a hard stubborn guy sho doesn't like seeing people getting pushed around. I wasn't after a fight - He was just trying to piss them off (getting into a pissing contest). Just wanted to show the other writers more Reik's character.

as to the Glutton question, I'm thinking Cannabalism has become their solution to their dwindling food supply problem.
 
wb Reaper

good to see an oldtimer coming back ;)


edit: ow yeah, the cannibalism thingy? maybe with the kid (or they simply stole his organs), but probably not immediatly with the ladies i'm afraid...
 
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