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[Public]

Hi y'all

Thought to post some of my works here, to see what you guys think about them.

Be honest please.

First, photo editings (Corel->Gimp)

My little bro and me:

A friend who can be found on these forums. Still not finished

Now some sketches of my own:

Me

Which I actually made out of this photo:

My friend

And some random characters:

And here is a short comic, which I started some months ago.
https://www.yousendit.com/download/Y1RxYnV3YTIyWGNLSkE9PQ
Wanted to continue it, but I'm not good enough to draw things like explosions, more characters' emotions/movements, with colours and detailed scenery. Still if someone would want to help, I'll be glad to share my ideas.

 

[PlanHex]

A lot of those look familiar. Avatars?


Anyway:
Maybe it's just the obvious stencilling, but I think it all looks very bland and lazy.

Here's a webcomic that does just that and still manages to be somewhat funny: http://basicinstructions.net/
Until you get there: Meh.

 

[Phil the Nuka-Cola Dude]

Your style is extremely similar to the way a lot of microsoft clip art is done.

 

[I_eat_supermutants]

It reminds me of those still shot cartoons that Adult Swim cranks out by the bucket full. Not a bad thing but does seem familiar as hell.

 

[alec]

What the others said.

And please just post the comic, I hate downloading stuff like that.

 

[Public]

Thanks a lot for your comments.

 

[Brother None]

Not downloading the comic, but is any of this particularly "fan art"-ie? This forum is supposed to focus on post-apocalyptic and Fallout fan art, some 50s-style art is als ok, it's not really a "general art" forum.

 

[alec]

Not downloading the comic, but is any of this particularly "fan art"-ie? This forum is supposed to focus on post-apocalyptic and Fallout fan art, some 50s-style art is als ok, it's not really a "general art" forum.

Yes, it is. Ask Wooz. Members are allowed to post their non-post-apoc art as well. That's what makes this part of the boards fun, actually.

 

[Verevoof]

Yeah, it does look Adult Swim-ish. Simplistic and clean. I think it's alright!

 

[Herr Mike]

I'm at work so I can't download the comic, but what you have posted would be good art for some kind of webcomic I think, stenciled or not. It may not be technically excellent (and who really cares about that?) but there is personality and identity in the pictures. That's all you need.