South of the Border

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ooc-I don't mind the IR scanner being taken out. Good thing with the IR goggles, though. The palm implant, well, I hate to say it, but it doesn't feel Falloutish. I think we should go ahead and get to the farm, but I don't have enough time to write about it ic right now, so one of you all do it.
 
Insane says," Man... you really saved our asses with that device. Can I check it out." Neo, not being the brightest, said, "Sure". Insane put the goggles on. Neo remembered that the goggles were still on full detail. "Crap" he thinks. “Oh my god!” Insane yells. Neo knows he’s doomed for embarrassment about the goggles being a porn device, since it can see through clothes.

Instead of what Neo thinks he will say, Insane says, ”Cool! Even on the ground, where the Hummer just drove, is still a little hot from the friction of the wheels.” Insane wasn't looking at anybody, just the horizon. Neo quickly starts to grab for the goggles, but Insane spins back to look at Fang. Neo thinks, "Dam" again but luckily Fang’s armor is thick enough for heat not to penetrate. Insane did not see and want to see what was behind the armor. Neo snatches the goggles of Insane’s head and throws it the in his pack. “Hey!” Insane cries. Loudly, Will declares, “Well, off we go to the farm. I can see it from here. Back in the vehicles people.”

After 30 seconds of driving, they arrive at the farm. There were fields and fields of almost dead crops around a farm and a small house. The woman says “Home…” slowly, in a soft, relaxed voice. As the line of vehicles drive up to the barn, they see an elderly man and women come out of the farmhouse. "This is gonna be a cool place to hang out, before we have to see action again", thought Neo. She whispers, “Home…” again to herself in a thankful way...
 
OOC:The palm implant...well....maybe I think of a way and get rid of it then....gimme some idea.....or maybe i give my char some big "cons" for having that....got that palm idea from a fanfic post....forget which...says a bit about arm replacement.
BTW, when are we heading to Alamo to have "fun"?

IC:
*Later at dinner time.....
Insane: Chomp! Hey Neo.....can ya Chomp! Chomp! lemme try on those gogglez? Chomp!
Neo: No way man! And please don't speak while eating......
Will: Hey Insane, do you have anymore info on Alamo and that err....Santa what?
Insane: Ok. Santa Anna and takez control 60% of the military power in Alamo, which are mostly the Brotherhood Traitorz. As personal guardz and as town defence. Heard that the brotherhood guyz was found in a military base and got brainwashed.
Fang: What!? Which base!? Tell me!
Insane: Calm down! I'm also not too sure! And 35%, which are mercz, slaverz, radiers goez to Santa Claus, his bro, as offensive use. And the other 5% are rebelz, which may help us werck havoc from the South side.
Reptile: South side?? What do you mean?
Insane: Diu! I forget you guyz are not localz. Fang, lend me ya pip for a minute please.
* He then draws a rough map of Alamo on the pip.
OOC: Refer to the map in the earlier post.
Reptile: Ok....I know what ya mean now.
Insane: But the info I've got is 2 years old....so....dun trust too much of it.
 
OOC: I’m sorry, I’m sorry... Alamo up next

IC: The nice women, now known as Rachael, had been a real help in their trip. She had allowed them to rest in her house for a few days, but Will insisted to only an afternoon. (Fang, Sargent Squigee, Insane, Reptile, Neo, Will, Greven, Max, and Squigee’s 9 troops (3 had died) where all seating at the farmer’s table. Everyone had been introduced.)

Neo had not such a good meal in years. The men at the table were having a blast and were constantly talking about a variety of topics. Neo had learned so much about the upcoming town from the other family members of the house. He also knew his squad so much better. He felt as if he was part of something that looked out and cared for each other. Interrupting his thoughts, the elderly women yelled over the ongoing conversations, “Anymore potatoes”. Several people yelled, “Yea!” The plate was bare in a few seconds. The elderly couple, Jack and Melissa, had never feed so many people! They were amazed at hungry some people could be. After the brief interruption, Neo continued talking to Aleho about which was better, the “Desert Eagle” or the “Berrata”.

Will stood up and dinged his empty glass with a broken 2-pronged fork. Everyone slowly quieted down. Will said, “I would like to thank our hosts, Melissa and Jack, for their work to feed us.” The rowdy group clapped really loud. After a pause, Will said, “Sadly, we have to head out in an a hour… but if we win this dam war against Santa Anna…” (he pointed to the elderly couple) You, Mr. and Mrs. Krost, will get a share of the spoils of war (money). Will sat down and the group continued to eat The Last Supper before some would die fighting for Mexico’s freedom.

OOC: Now you guys can write.

I made the last supper in capitals because I am trying to make this seem biblical. (The last supper was the last dinner Jesus had before he was killed. I am NOT one of those weird bible fanatics.)
 
Reptile: Thanks for the meal ma'm
Old lady: You dont have to thank me i'm just happy to see that people can eat this much... You see Viviana does'nt nearly eat anything at all....
Viviana: I do...
OLd Man: brake you can continue that later.
Aleho: does u have any great tactics on what to do next...
Fang: dont know realy, does anyone of u know....
.........
 
Insane: If we could break into the high-class section, they might have some info, answers and (my favorite) weapons. They are the most wealthy group, so they are most likely for Sanat Anna though.

Neo: Hmmmm... I sure hope I can find some answers about MY past, since my greandfather left Vault 45.

<silence>

The old man broke the silence and said, "So... What was your grandfather called..."

Neo: Micheal Rabon

The old man: ... Oh my god,that who Santa Anna was before his name was changed...

Neo: ...

Fang: Don't worry, Jack is just joking.

Old man: I swear I'm not

Neo: ...

Will: Shit...

<silence>

Neo: It can't be... Goddamit! I'm not evil! You're lying! All of you ... FUCK ALL YOU!

Neo starts crying and walks off into the fields.

OOC: (Of course there could be some other unrelated secert in the Vault we don't know about that you could make up.)
 
Will looks at Neo as he runs off into the desert. Will didn't try to go after him. The kid was going to need some time to think this out on his own. He thought it strange that the BOS grunt he had rescued so long ago in Denver had turned out to be such an insane man.... and Neo's father.

Will suddenly had no more stomach for the assasination. He wasn't sure he felt up to blowing the head of of one of his friend's father. He looked over at Greven.

"This is really going to put a crimp in things.."

Greven looked just as unhappy as he did. He scratched his head nervously, not sure what to say.

"Will, maybe we ought to give this a few days to blow over."

The old man shook his head.

"Tommorrow will be your best chance to take him out. He's making a big announcement in the high class section of town tommorrow at about 5 o'clock. If you want to do this, it's your best hope."

Will was suddenly jolted back to the reason of why this mission was so important. That "Important announcement" was that Santa Anna was going to ally himself with the super mutants. He could scarecely imagine the havoc they could wreck if they did this. He groaned and looked at the rest of his men.

"Like it or not, this is gonna end tommorow, one way or the other."

He got up, and went to adjust the sight on his rifle scope. The next shot that he fired would be the most important shot he'd ever made.
 
Off to Alamo

Neo sits alone in the fields for several hours. He ponders till the sun sets.

Looking out onto the brilliant sunset, Will yells in a gruff voice, “Boys… we gotta head out. Prepare to leave.” He then whispers to reptile, “ Tell Neo that we are leaving. Tryyyy to be as non-confrontation as possible.

Reptile walks out the fields. The corns wavers in the wind as crickets chirp away. It is quite peaceful. Reptile walks up behind the sad Neo and quietly says," You don't need to say anything but… we're leaving. Neo keeps staring out at the sunset.

After waiting for answer from Neo, Reptile starts to walk off. Neo keeps staring straight out but says, "I told you that my father was killed by Santa Anna... I now know why… It was for me not rise up for the resistance… I don’t know if my grandfather has a reason for the innocent killings that will be caused in the future (if the group don’t stop him) but… dam it, I will not turn evil like my father. I don’t know what to do, but continue without me." Reptile walks back and tells Will the news.
 
RE: Off to Alamo

After reptile told the news.....

Will: ok thats hes decision it's hes father after all.
Reptile: i can imagine how it feels for him.

Fang: we better get going then or...
Greven: hmmm yes we better do.

Reptile: *walks to Viviana* Here u are take is at a thank from me *he hands over a small bag with money*
Viviana: no you shouldnt
Reptile: Shh just take them. I will be gone then.

*the group start walking towards the cars, the family they just had lived around were standing next to the door looking at them.*
 
RE: Off to Alamo

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Dec-09-00 AT 08:48PM (GMT)[p]OOC: Fang asked about how much I was gonna edit the story. I did not explain much, so I'm saying it now. Basically the story is just more extended and more descriptive.

Some examples

Making the helicopter not on the hero's side
The fight with Jay and Thompson longer
Different backstory for Greven and Will.
New entrance for Greven
another fight in the factory (exciting because a whole gang against two heros)
Super relistic dyhrdration part for Aleho (when he enters)
Dark snipering Fang more realistic and gorey
The scraped idea of Neo's holodisk is here
A resistance letter
A written on map (by Dellapenyas) of Mexico
(there are more but I'm getting bored)

AND...
grammer and spell checking(I did a ton more then press spellcheck)
Lots more description
maybe a random encounter between Mexicalla and Santa Rosilita
over 40 kick ass pictures
info sheet through out story of all main charectors
a prologue

The cool this that that is not counting anything after they left Santa Rosilita. 75 pages so far.

It's gonna kick ass.
 
RE: Off to Alamo

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Dec-10-00 AT 04:37AM (GMT)[p]ooc-Whadayya mean,a different backstory for Will? Do you want more information about him? I can tell you anything you need to know, like his full name (William J. Dotson), if you want to ask.
 
RE: Off to Alamo

OOC: I mean a new backstory so everyone doesn't have to read "Invasion of Texas".

In short, I added that the eagles were an anti-slaver group. Because of your talent your were on a special mission. When you came back from your mission, the Eagle's base was eradicated. Your remaining comrades from your special mission had a large argument. The others wanted to go to New Reno since the Bishops were proslavery and knew that you were ruining your business. You hadn't seen anything in California capable of taking out the Eagles. (Except for the mutants, but they had just wiped out) You were the best of the best. You knew another evil must had done it. There were rumors of life below California. All the scouts going down there hadn't come back. You venture out and enter the town of Mexcalla. That is reason for the whole story taking place.

(This is all subject to change though)
 
Yeah if u is the king then u are.....
And this is only pt1....
Check out invasion of texas in atleast 4 pts that must be even bigger
 
Under cover of darkness, Will's convoy approaches the outskirts of the town, near the upper class section. After a short arguement, they decide to park the cars in an old, abandoned underground parking lot until they can decide what to do with them.

Once they hide the vehicles, Will takes Greven, Reptile, Fang, and Aleho to the fence seperating the lower class part of town from the upper class part of town. The fence is guarded at certain points by guard towers. Will finds a part in the fence not well covered by the guards. He thinks about climbing over the fence, but that would have to be a last resort, because it was tipped with razor sharp wiring, and he didn't want to risk mutilating his hands.

"Anyone got an idea?" he asks.

Fang nods. "Here, I got some wirecutters. Let me handle this."

Will stands back, and lets Fang work. A moment later, the fence has a small hole in it they can fit through. Aleho agrees to stay behind and guard the hole, while Will and the rest go ahead.

Greven points at a 3-story mansion a block away. "Look. It's got a flat roof. We can check out the area from there, and plan what we want to do.

Will nods. "Sounds like a good start."

They stealthily approach the building. Once there, they find a trellis that goes all the way up to the roof. Although Fang has trouble climbing up in the bulky power armor, everyone manages to get to the top. Once up there, Will spots the area where Santa Anna will probably give the speech, a courtyard with some rickety bleachers set up. Will takes out a crumpled sheet of paper, and starts drawing a map so they can plan the assualt.

ooc-If you want, it's more than fine by me if you do the map, squigee_goober
 
At that same time.....
*Bull Eye's Bar, South Side, Alamo, 0500hrs*
Insane: Barkeep! Get me a zhot of D.S.A!
Barkeep: Storeroom! $10.99!
Insane the walks into the storereoom. After locking up the door, he starts to move some boxes, revealing a trapdoor. He then enters.
Insane: Where'z my zhot of D.S.A? $10.99 rite?
???: Coming! Oh bloody hell! You're Insane!? How could it be!? I thought you were dead.....
Insane: Diu! Of course it'z me! Hey Butcher! How'z the plan?
Butcher: We're going to rush Santa Anna when the speech starts, which is at 1300hrs. Santa Anna will be burst into meat sauce!!
Insane: You and ya guyz will be the one turning into meat zauce with ya Kamizake plan! I joined zome guyz a few dayz ago, havin the zame objective as us. I'm bring them to here an hour later to plan for the azzult! Prepare the armory for us!
Butcher: Yes sir!

OOC: I hope you guys don't mind me bringing in some cannon fodders~~~
 
OOC:None what so ever, Insane

I have been studying for finals all these week so that's why I haven't been posting. It will all be over next Wedsday.
 
IC:
It was dark till Neo finally got off of the rock and went inside. Jack and Melissa said nothing as they saw him pass in the house. He plopped down on a bed and fell asleep.

The next day he awoke with the pretty face of Valerie looking at him from the doorframe. He groggily smiled. Blushing she said, "Good morning". She quickly left.

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It was one of the best sleeps he'd had. He hated to get out from under the sheets. But Neo dragged himself out of bed and made the bed. He sighed and went out to the kitchen to eat. At the doorframe he saw the table the whole group had eaten at last night. It brought back the memories of the night before. Melissa walked into his view and smiled as she went off to do the daily chores. At the table, was bacon, eggs, pancakes, and all the good stuff. He became excited about the food. The few times in his life that he had eaten a pancake, it hadn't tasted good, but he knew he would not be let down this time. Valerie was the table also eating. She was also in deep thought. He sat across from her and started eating. He mind was screaming for more pancakes. His senses had never been treated so well before. The pancake was bursting with flavor. He made a metal note to thank Jack and Melissa a bunch! He coughed loudly to catch Valerie’s attention. She looked up and Neo took his MP7 player out of his backpack. Neo was sure a country girl had never heard music. Since the women spoke little English, Neo motioned for her to put the headphones on her head. Neo waited for her expression. Her eyes bulged and she gaped. She threw off the headphones and ran to the nearest parent. She said something in rapid Spanish to Jack and put the headphones on his head. She had done this so quickly that the headphones had unplugged out of the MP7 player. Valerie’s dad, Jack, looked puzzled since he did not hear anything. Neo plugged it back in. The dad was equally surprised at the music. (Imagine how you would feel if you had never heard music in your life.) He was in TOTAL AWE. The girl looked at Neo for a second, hesitantly paused, then gave Neo a big hug. It was kind of akward. Melissa, Jack, and Valerie listened to the player for two straight hours minute until the battery was out of juice. When it died, Neo had been on the bed just looking straight up at the ceiling. He had finally come to terms about his grandfather… he would avenge his father’s death. He took out the prewar map of Mexico that he had looted from Dellapenyas and looked over it several times until Valerie distracted him.

Valerie said in a Spanish accent, “More?” (Emphasizing the m) She looked at him very gingerly hoping for a yes. Neo nodded head for a yes. Neo felt good when he saw her eager smile. He had not had many women in his harsh childhood. Before this trip, he had mostly been a lone wolf, taking care of himself, not having women friends. Neo unzipped his backpack and took out his green ammo box that he kept all his books in. Knowing that with the family’s low English ability, the other books would be too complicated. Neo took out the 200-page 5th grader’s reference book about (pre-war) animals and biomes. Neo slowly said, “Pre-War.” to Valerie. She saw it and opened it up. It puzzled her how much life there could be before the war. She smiled and hugged him again. Neo lied down on the bed as she read at the foot of the bed. She found the jungle animals very interesting. After intently looking at the pictures in the book, she lied down beside him and watched him work on his MP7 player with a multi tool. He turned his head and she smiled. For the rest of the day they talked… and talked. There was so much for Neo to talk about with his adventures and all. Neo did all of the talking and Valerie just listened. Everything was so interesting to her because so little happened on the farm. (During the conversation, Neo realized she had plopped down on her bed.)

At dinner, Neo was eating and talking. A long explination about how rifles work, Neo abruptly stops and turned to Valerie, who was sitting next to him. He curiously said, ”If your whole life has been on the farm, why were you at the city?” Jack and Melissa then put on an odd expression on their faces. Everyone was silent for a second. Neo then knew that the answer was not pleasant. Valerie said in bad English, “Well… my husband and me were selling the year's worth of crops. Some Santa Anna’s “police” came up to him demanding a so-called “Trade” tax. They asked him how much he had. He answered 1000 dollars. They declared the “trade” tax was 1000 dollars. My husband was furious and refused to pay all of it. Not saying a word, one of them shot him in the leg. Three others surrounded him and beat the pulp out of him. As they were punching him, him screamed for me to run. And boy!... did I run. Our transportation, the horses, was left where the soliders surrounded my husband. I couldn't go back. I ducked and ran for an hour till I saw you. It was a miracle that I wasn’t raped or mugged in the town, being all by myself and being in the bad section of town. I saw your vehicles and went with you. You knew everything after that.”

Nobody said anything till Neo said, “Oh…”

Valerie replied, “I’m not sure if he’s alive” She left the table and came back with a photo of him. “His name is Rick.”

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The rest of the evening was normal until it was night. The only illumination in Valerie’s room was a candle. (Neo was going to sleep in the other bed in the Valerie's room) Neo took out the pretty pink flower he picked right before the group left for Santa Roslita. As Valerie was sewing a shirt, Neo sneaked up behind her and put the pink flower in her hair very delicately. She turned around and the two became face to face. Remembering the day, they both looked in each other’s eyes. Neo stroked her hair and after qa pause, they both kissed slowly.

OOC: I really like this post because even in the most depressing and horrify situations (fallout), people persevere and do have a good time.

I am only fourteen and have never anything real serious with a girl (a stable long-term relationship). Do think this is accurate?
 
OOC: dont know if that could happen in real life but it fits the story =)...... u are more lucky then Reptile whos woman died b4 the story......
 
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