The invasion of Texas pt. 4

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RE: Just another bad day

*Will tosses the emp, a flash, and silence*
Will- Yes!!! hahah i told you it would work max!
Ceaser- great, lets get outta here
*suddenly there is a hellish chuckle*
Lou- pathetic, get them!!
Max- oh SHIT!!!!
*Max takes out his grease guns and starts fireing all around him, will joins him, then reptile, greven, and ceaser*
Greven- burn in hell!!!!!
Ceaser- Look out!!!!
*there an explosion, max gets thrown and hits a wall*
Max- uhhh, my head, oh no, the detenator, greven get the detenator!!!!
*Greven jumps toward the detenator but it gets kicked by a cnd trooper*
Greven- god damit!!!
*greven tares the trooper apart with his guns*
Reptile- i got it!!!!!
*reptile goes to pick it up and gets hit in the back with a rifle butt, Ceaser blows the troopers head off*
Ceaser- you alright?
Reptile- yea im fine, get that detenator
*the room if full of smoke, flashes and bullets flying back and forth*
Max- for crine out loud ill get it!!!
*Max runs and dives for the detenator, suddenly a foot steps on his hand, max lets out of blood curdleing scream, lou picks max up by his head and begins to squize*
Max- ahhhhhhhh!!!!!
 
RE: Just another bad day

Reptile: Fuck Max will get Killed.... *he draws his gauss pistol and aims at Lous torso* FUCKER!!!!!! Blam the shot flies throug the air and hits Lou he just stands there and another he says... "uhh" and aims the minigun at reptile the dives for cover.... but at the same time max have gotten time to get free he Sticks his shawed of at lous finger (it doesnt eaven hurt him) but the blast gets max lose and he falls down....
Ceasar: GET THE FUCKING DE-TO-NA -TO-R!!!!! *aims his Minigun at Lou the bullets richoshettes agins Lous chest.....
Reptile: CANT U JUST DIE!!!!! *fires at Lous head.......
 
RE: Just another bad day

*Max is cjoking for air*
Ceaser- were is it, i cant seee crap!!!!
Reptile- i dont know, i cant see anything either!!
*lou looks down at max*
Lou- now, were where we
Max-*breathing heavly* you were about to die
*max pulls the pin and shoves it into lou, but liu grabs his hand after he let go, max starts panicing*
Max- !!! let me go!!!!!
*max takes out his .223 pistol and points it at lous face and fires, he lets go and grabs is face, max runs and takes cover right before the grenade went off*
Lou- hahaha, youll pay for that!!!!
Max- god damit!!! doesnt anything hurt him
 
RE: Just another bad day

"Hey, you mechanical bastard! over here!"

Will is toting a RPG taken of a dead trooper's body. Lou turns around to face him. Will lifts the launcher, and aims it at his stomach.

"Catch the gernade, asshole!"

With a loud Whoosh, the gernade flies out and hits Lou in the stomach, blowing him in two, messily. The upper half falls to ground, screaming in pain, entrails and wires trailing it.
Several CND troopers look at this, and decide to run away.

Max pumps his fist in the air.-"Way to go Will!"

But suddenly, with one last flicker of life left in him, Lou reawakens, and starts firing his minigun at Max, screaming "If I go down, I'm taking you with me!"With his only hand, he drags himself closer and closer to Max, even while dying.

Will-"Finish him off!!"
 
RE: The Final Act

*Max gets shot in the leg, lou is still comeing closer and max is trying to crawl away but hes not fast enough*
Lou- Ill kill you ,you bastert, youll never see the light of day agian, Ill die before I let you live
Max- Ill take you up on that!!
*Max raises his .223 pistol and fires agian and agian three times, lous head droppes to the ground, a pool of blood oozes from his head, max heres whispering from the body*
Lou- he he he he, youll never escape....
*lou presses a button on his arm, a count down beggins*
Max- Shit!!! get outta here!!!!! whats with thes guys and blowing stuff up!!!
Will- Max, let me help you!!
Max- no, dont worry about me, you guys get outta here.....
 
RE: The Final Act

Reptile: Hey max u'll have to come....
Max: (Screams) GET OUT OF HERE!!!!
Will: come on....
Reptile: *they all start running* shit!!! *some enemys gets closer.... "FUCK OFF" Reptile fires his gausspistol at the closest the enemy flis backvards... another aims his Shotgun but Smaug takes a SMg and blows him away....
 
RE: The Final Act

*the group make it outside the base*
Ceaser- Weres max!!!!
Reptile- He wasnt behind me!!! hes still in there, i got to go in and get him!!
*Will grabs him*
Will- its too late!!! we got to get father!! were to close
Reptile- NO!!!!!
*Will drags reptile away from the base, the group jump into a trench, suddenly theres an explosion*
Will- Damit!!! he....he....he didnt make it...
Ceaser- max!!!!
 
The End

[font size=1" color="#FF0000]LAST EDITED ON Oct-20-00 AT 01:59AM (GMT)[p]*two hours later*

Will finishes placing rocks around a memorial. Max's old shotgun is stuck in the ground, and a metal plate with "To Max, our friend" scratched onto it lays at the base of the gun. Will steps away, gives the salute of the Eagles and says "Max, you are a hero to the whole wasteland. Farewell."

Reptile fights back tears, and for once, Ceasar doesn't seem to have much to say. Smaug stares at the grave solemnly along with Greven. Bob just gazes a the grave with a look of regret on his eyes.

Greven steps up to the grave. "Max the people of the New Texas Republic thank you for your brave sacrifice."

Reptile chokes up, and says in a strained voice "We'll miss you buddy."

The rest of the men echo the comment,and they finish paying their respects to him. Will tosses one more thing on the grave. Max's old leather jacket, which he had left with the N.T.A. for safekeeping back before the battle of the canyon.

Will turns to face the rest of his comrades.

"I guess this is goodbye, for now."

They all say farewell to each other, and exchange handshakes. Then they head on their different paths. As Will strides off in to the wastelands, he remembers an old song he heard long ago. It seems appropriate enough, so he starts to sing it softly.

"Maybe.. you'll think of me... when you are all alone...maybe... the one who...is waiting for you...will prove untrue...then what will you do? Maybe... you'll sit and sigh...wishing that I was there...well, maybe..."

Will's voice carried on silently in the wastes.

ooc-thanks to everyone who posted on this story. It was a good one.
 
RE: The End (OOC)

OOC:
THank u yourself this was my first story i was in that did get finnished....
And that vas a butiful ending I did nearly start to cry as i read it through.....

But lastly thanks everyone it was fun and now i hope that there will be another great story with the most of u guys.....

Yours Reptile
 
RE: The End (OOC)

That was pritty cool, maybe my character some day will come back from the dead :), but until that time thanks everyone, that was a great story
 
RE: The End (OOC)

Yeah, good work everyone, and thanks for a great story.

-Smaug
 
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