Excellent article, and, in general, I very much agree with the points you're making.
However, there's one thing that stuck out at me involving your quotes from various places. It involves the quotes from GGL:
And, thankfully, the horrid level scaling of Oblivion has been more or less phased out. - GGL on Fallout 3 (ref)
For all the excellence within this game, there are some flaws. Firstly there is the annoying and unpredictable issue of crashing. Both of my test machines experienced random crashes to desktop. (...) The other issue is more understandable and can be largely forgiven. The NPC interaction suffers from some rather illogical and disjointed verbal exchanges. - GGL on Oblivion (ref)
Not only do
both quotes seem to be negative statements about Oblivion (although they do seem to be trying hard to gloss over the issues in what I assume to be their review of Oblivion), but they're talking about completely different issues. I suppose if you were just going for a general negative/positive contrast I understand it, but most the other quotes involved them directly contradicting themselves on the same issues. I dunno, I just thought that part was a little bit weaker than the rest.