Looks GREAT!!!
I assume they'll have the spelling and grammar errors fixed in the final product. But here are those I noticed in that video.
3:59 - 'vegetarians wet dream' should be 'vegetarian's wet dream'
4:39 - 'an enraged
a supafly' (I know this is because of their combat parser and all so possibly they can't do anything about this except for change the flavor text for this line to something like 'Enraged,
a supafly'? *shrug*)
4:40 - 'one flitting
a supafly' (same as above. Perhaps 'In a blur of wings,
a supafly flits into view'? *shrug* )
9:00 - Full text field should read:
"These vegetables don
't look like theyr
'e slowing their growth rate
. They
're slowly crushing the Agricultrual Center like a grape, although the veggies wouldn
't appreciate the fruity metaphor. (changes in bold)
10:15 - "werent" should be "weren't".
11:04 - It should be 'well-fed'.
11:46 - 'anymore' should be 'any more'.
13:31 - Don't need the commas after 'Snake', 'as in' or 'Mean as a'.
13:42 - 'rangers' should be capitalized I think.
But yeah, like I said, I'm sure most of this will be fixed in the final product. I'm just OCD for this stuff. :p
Everything else looks great. Love the way combat looks, loved the UI, the art and animation looks great too. I cannot wait for this. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3