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Discussion in 'NMA News and Information' started by The Dutch Ghost, Dec 4, 2021.
Credit goes to you for writing it up though.
First, thanks for your writing. Awesome job.
Second, I wasn't bothered much by accent, for instance. Actually, the only part of the storyline I had issues with is the dialogue with the general. It's basically "you can't kill her! okay, you can kill her if you shoot hard enough. My 200 men couldn't do it but you'll be fine". Other than that, nothing much, except some typos.
As for the motivation, the desire to find out what's on that laptop you lost, and what are the mutants up to is pretty much enough to go on.
But anyways, you know better.
Heh not trying to take claim for all that is positive and lay blame for the bad parts on Vostyok, but I actually barely did anything of the dialogue, though being the writer and having the time I should have done so.
It partly has to do with my state of mind, but also that I find writing dialogue hard sometimes.
Broad descriptions are often easier for me.
Add: so all the good dialogue lines should be credited to him.
But I have to agree. I myself would also have preferred to come up with a better explanation why the general and his men could not put a dent in the psychic mutant's defenses and yet the player is able to do so.
I always found this a ridiculous type of trope.
Ashes got 10th place on Moddb!
Fuck those other mods.
There's no force stronger than the Polish Gothic TC.