Darkness Falls OOC

Oh and Grec and Mattias's group is called "The Son's Fist". They were originally the courier's personal guard, but he passed away so the Courier's Son inheritated them. Basically, they are good people doing bad things because of a code of honor
 
I'm back, and erm that was quite unexpected. I was waiting for Yas and james to come out the shop first. I'll post something when I feel a bit better, I'm really depressed right now :(
 
Your post was overly controlling. You made decisions for everybody elses character a hijacked chameleons rp. What makes you think our characters would have followed you at all? Unless he'd given some indicator that he could help, Yasmin wouldn't have gone. And if she had, the first guy who pulled a gun on her would have got a bullet between the eyes, she wouldn't have laid down on the floor just cayse she was outnumbered. But that's just her.

It's up to chameleon really, but I think you should edit your post. A lot. And let us decide for ourselves what we do.
 
I didn't exactly hijack it, it was more of the lines of doing something unexpected, ya know, an interesting twist. Chameleon is cool with it, and the only reason why your character followed Grec was because Krill, being the leader of the group and the naive man he was, followed Grec. I even said your character thought mine was suspicious. If you think your character should fight back then go ahead and make a new post saying that she cut the ties off her hands, broke herself free and ran away or something. Besides, wouldn't a crafty thing to do when people are pointing guns (and need I remind you that several people are pointing their guns at her, and hers isn't even drawn) at you would be to attack after they stop pointing them at you?

I didn't really take control of everybody's characters, I just set up a predicament using the leaders traits to break up the monotomy of "go around Freeside and find cool doods to kill this guy". The scenario has been laid and you can use your character's abilities to break out of the situation or comply or do whatever.

Or maybe I should just rewrite the first part, make it so that Grec's skills of deception are so great that Yas can't tell he isn't up to good. That way, Grec would convince all of them to follow him without a shadow of a doubt, but the ambush would still happen to set up a predicament for your characters to get out of. Is that more acceptable?
 
Alright, feeling better. Okay Grec, I have to make this fair for everyone, and I hadn't implied that Yas and James had gone out of the shops so here's the deal: as Yas and James would have been less persuaded and convinced to follow a druggy, then they wouldn't have gone anyways. One: they don't trust Krill as much and they would leave him to his own fate but he is the only way to get at the guy in white. Two: depending on their behaviour, they might have or not have saved Krill anyway and wouldn't allow themselves to be secluded anyway. So here's what I'm going to do, I would suggest you edit your post a bit as to only Krill gets captured while Yas and James are still in the shop. Krill is considerably more stupid than his counterpart and even more dumb than the dog, then the dog could tell Yas and James about the problem then story heads off from there. Oh and I won't always put the dog in our story as to not add too many oddballs or it could make the story a bit more crazed I reckon. So I think this plot sounds more fair I reckon, and should add to everyone's taste. Oh and congrats on your uni Raven, and good luck with the whole semester. Heard it's quite hard. :)
 
It just seemed like way too much, way too fast, without anybody else getting any input. Players should get to decide what their characters do.

And thanks Chameleon. Third year of university with 4 different writing courses chews up most of my free time and any creativity I can get.
 
Yeah, everyone needs their say and turn, and the NCR don't control Vegas either :L

And yeah, as long as you get what you want then that's good. I'm still at a young age but hopefully make it to college in a few years and I've already got good grades in everything. So when will you be on and off?
 
Ya, I know they don't, their goal is to get rid of their presence (NCR soldiers) in the Mojave
 
Deathclaw Chameleon said:
Alright, feeling better. Okay Grec, I have to make this fair for everyone, and I hadn't implied that Yas and James had gone out of the shops so here's the deal: as Yas and James would have been less persuaded and convinced to follow a druggy, then they wouldn't have gone anyways. One: they don't trust Krill as much and they would leave him to his own fate but he is the only way to get at the guy in white. Two: depending on their behaviour, they might have or not have saved Krill anyway and wouldn't allow themselves to be secluded anyway. So here's what I'm going to do, I would suggest you edit your post a bit as to only Krill gets captured while Yas and James are still in the shop. Krill is considerably more stupid than his counterpart and even more dumb than the dog, then the dog could tell Yas and James about the problem then story heads off from there. Oh and I won't always put the dog in our story as to not add too many oddballs or it could make the story a bit more crazed I reckon. So I think this plot sounds more fair I reckon, and should add to everyone's taste. Oh and congrats on your uni Raven, and good luck with the whole semester. Heard it's quite hard. :)
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Alrighty, I'll to it when I'm done doing the daily duties
 
Sorry, I've not been on in so long I've been busy with school so it's hard to keep up with this site. I'll post once I'm caught up.
 
That;s okay, school's up for me next week. Wanted to ask you two what you think of the story so far, is it getting too much? A bit too weird, or is it okay?
 
1.) My next post will be in the past while I was still in Mick and Ralph's

2.) James will be very unhappy about the Son's Fist's plans because he has established a network of caravans that operates out of Black Mountain (vacant after the courier repaired Rhonda and Tabitha and the Super Mutants left) and that travels through that outpost and back to a city (It has become a thriving trade city since the events of Blood Ties and is no longer a village) that is in the NCR. The city actually considers itself as independent and separate from the NCR and is protected by a group called the Crimson Horde, but that is a story for another time.

As for the story, it is a little odd and it needs some polish to make sense but with a little rewriting this would still be an excellent story. The problem is a bunch of different people with different writing styles working together to tell a story it's bound to be a little funky.


(the following info is me trying to summarize the events and get the story straight. Skit it if you don't want to read it all I just want to make sure I understand what has happened.)
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Ok, so let me get this straight. We (we being Yas and James) were in Mick and Ralph's, while Krill was outside talking with the cyber?wolf (Lance), then a guy walked up (Grec) and told Krill he could provide us room and board. Grec lead Krill to a warehouse to confer with a friend/comrade (Mattias) of his (Grec's) where we would be staying, but it was a trap set up by a group called the The Son's Fist to use some waster to set a bomb at the Mohave Outpost way far away in the Southwest. They planned to stop the influx of NCR citizens and troops.

Richard Veil is the courier's son and now controls New Vegas and most of the Mohave with an iron fist with his gang/tribe/henchmen The Crown. Richard Veil also has his personal guard The Son's Fist on a mission to blow up the Mohave Outpost effectively ending any influx of NCR that could give the Mohave a chance to fight back against Richard Veil's tyranny.

Our group has been unknowing drafted in a manner of speaking in to the White Falcon Rebellion, a group that fights against Richard Veil and his Crown gang. We now have to contend with a new faction that is part of the Crown the Son's Fist.

I'm assuming our group will probably become an actual part of the White Falcon Rebellion when we confront the man in white (not to be confused with Mr. White) and learn about the man pulling the strings, Mr. White. We will join Mr. White and his White Falcon Rebellion to fight against Richard Veil and the Crowns.
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My lord alot happened when I wasn't paying attention!

Also Chameleon you need to change your character sheet at the beginning of the roleplay it says your wolf's name is Fang not Lance. Is fang just a very strangely smart wolf or is he a cyberwolf? I know the collar is separate and allows him to talk but he seems to smart to be a normal wolf.
 
Dang sorry about the wolf, I forgot his name was Fang. I'll have to edit it, and thus who says animals can't be smart? It's another background story that might be explained at a later time. Such as why he's smart, how the collar was created, and his origins. He ain't a cyber-wolf, though he's a test subject (not explained yet). I know I will have to change a bit of stuff, just checking to make sure that the different personalities of Krldraav won't overwhelm things a bit, and if anyone is confused. And The White Falcon Rebellion are fighting the Crown, but there are some special plans in store. Otherwise, I will improve
 
Don't wait for me guys, I'm full on with uni and Blood Ties. Not sure if I still have time to RP here too, but for now just assume Yas is helping James shoot people in the face.
 
Ok that's it. You can't just have set up C4 in the mormon fort in the span of five or ten minutes, I call shenanigans on that.
 
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