That could be good.
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"It was the onset of evening by the time the doctor finally caught up to the group. Judging by the motley crew that lay ahead these were definitely the people he was looking for. But that didn't mean he was going to abandon caution, he kept his hand on his laser rifle just in case."
" H, Hello." he called to the assembled group, stuttering as he usually did when he was nervous.
"I'm looking for a person/man -
(I don't know. You just said we where meeting a client White Knight, did we get a holotape or something? I'm not sure if I'd know who or what gender Mr. Stone was.)
- hiring mercenaries in the area for some kind of job. W, Would that happen to be you?..."
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What do ya think? good or not?
Edit:
Also in my RP post I assumed since we are in Texas there would be plenty of arid badlands and desert region and that we would be in it. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong White Knight. Also, what season is it? Because in Texas it gets hotter than blazes in summer and cold as the lowest circle of hell in the Winter, so Season can make a pretty big difference. I know this because I live in Oklahoma and have family in Texas, I see it often.