FNA: Rerzo

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(( First time I read it I got it... but now I didn't anymore... So I need to buy empty fuel cells for $1500 then I sell them filled up for $1500, but wouldn't that mean Ive made nothing? Coz I need to sell the cells, thus doesn't that mean Ill need to buy 15 new cells till next time?

First though that Id need 15 filled fuelcells to get the thing started up and running, then I could start reffiling and cell, and after the first 15 ive sold ive made up for it. But that wouldn't make sense now when ive read it again. Though neither ways makes sense to me.

Maybe if say I had to pay like $30 each empty or something, then I sell the filled up one for $100 and make a $70 profit. And to keep it all up Id have to buy more empty fuell cells, or refill those that the buyer had. Though this doesn't make sense totaly either. But would make the most sense I guess. As its something that gets it started as you stated, either brahmin or slave or so.))



1) Zerto calls the men to hide behind the shantys, knowing the attackers are way to close. And when(/if) they comes closer, into shoting range my men will show them self, ready armed and fire away against the attacking humanoids (thats how I think its actualy spelled :P)
 
(...The buyers will return with their cells, so you don't have to purchase new ones everytime. Their rare, and a turbine is even more rare. So they'll return them or maybe you can transport them back and fourth and add a taxi fee. I dunno.)

1. The group of men get bought 200 yards away from the outpost, when Excolyps hears one of them. A loud, raspy voice shouting "Hello?...Anybody here? We're from the town of Blackdust. Hello?".
 
(( Aye, I think I gotcha on this one now. It got its flaws, but I get your point now =) Coz what if they went on and stole the fuel cells, then id go lose here, but well, I got ya point, though, maybe make em pay like $2000 first time, then $1500 each refill, just like a $500 to make sure I don't lose it all if I lose the cells... like pledge... (not sure the word is the correct to use, had to use the dictionary I have to admit :P) ))

(( Btw, its Zerto who is home, Exoclyps seems to have gone lost on his way to Blackdust :P And I think Ill rp him some, just to have him have something to do whille it takes its whille :P ))

1) Zerto tells everyone to be fully alert with their weapons, ready to shot if the aproucing humanoids are to agressive. "Yes!" Zerto yells, "Who are you guys? Why did you shoot at us?" He yells even louder now.

Meanwhille, somewere south from Rerzo. The wind is about to calm down after a heavy storm wich slowed down the caravan Exoclyps are in. "Sheri, I think the wind has finaly calmed down, lets go outside, and Ill learn you some more of what I know." Exoclyps says with a calm voice of fate. "Fred, will you guard the caravan whille I take Sheri out on a lil trip to the east, we won't be long" And Exoclyps and Sheri goes outside the caravan. "Sure thing mate", he answers. Exoclyps and Sheri starts to walk away to the east. After about 10 minutes they reach some bushes, wich seems to contain some kind of berries. They goes up to them and Exoclyps takes one of the red ones and press the juice out of it then smells it. Then he hands it to Sheri and says. "Smell it, but don't taste it, coz this berry is extremly poisonous, you can smell it in the little sour and itching feeling that comes in your nose. Good to know is, that about all berries thats itching in your nose are no good." After that he takes the leftovers of the berry and dries it of on the sand. And after that he takes one of the blue berries and presses the juice out of that one and smells. "Mmm, great. Sheri, smell it. You can feel the body getting warm by just smelling it, imagen eating it. I can't belive Ive found any berries like this one." Exoclyps states with a voice clearly showing sattisfitasion "Could you run back to Fred and get the basket for us to get all of the blue berries?" Sheri runs of to the caravan at once and about twelve to fourteen minutes later she is back with a pretty large basket. "Sheri, help here, takes these blue." Exoclyps says with a fatherlike voice, and they both starts to take all the blue berries into the basket. "Hmm, could... could.. I taste some?", a shy Sheri asks. She hasn't isn't that sure of a girl yet, though she have learned a lot and are a very tallent girl with a bright future as Exoclyps have noticed. "Sure thing Sheri", Exoclyps replies with a voice of warm feeling. "But make sure you don't take any of the red ones by mistake". Sheri nods and takes some of the blue berries and eats them. At first you can't tell any different buy after a couple of seconds you sees that she brigts up and she smiles. "Yummy berries Exoclyps, I fell all warm and cosy inside. But though a weak feeling of it" Sheri says in a lil shy tone, though not as shy as before. "Ofcourse, you only had a few, and I belive it won't last for long either. But its time to head back now, as I belive we got all the berries, and I have no doupts Fred wants to move on." Sheri nods again and they takes of to the caravan. Ones there they takes of pretty fast and are now onces again on their way towards Blackdust.
 
(I didn't say nothing about shottin' nobody. Where'd ya get that from?)

"We were sent from Zeke, our leader back at Blackdust. I come bearin' a treaty. We're friends, mate. Friends." The lead man said, followed behind two other men. Though, the leads man appreanced differed from the other two. He was in a pair of demin pants, while the two had primitive coatings.

"Come on, boys", Zerto says coming from leaning on the wall and starts walking up heavily. His men followed, lowering there weapons and stern faces. As Zerto approached, the man shook his hand casually.

"Hello. I'm Dex, an ambassador if you will... I was sent by my town leader, Zekeiel. In this treaty, he proposes that Rerzo and Blackdust have an alliance to build the foundations to a strong force against Bandits and Cartels." Dex explained. In response to such good news, Zerto blurts out: "Hot damn... That's the best thing I've heard all week. Come in." He starts to walk back to camp.
 
(( "He pulls out a rifle and scopes onto one of your men. Boom! hits him in the shoulder. What will you do about this sudden attack." That sounds like an attack to me. And I read Blackdust just now, but my caravan hasn't reached yet? Wich it most logicaly should have done? :S Ill do me move and stuffs tommorow morning, to tired now))
 
(( But what about my caravan? Though it was to came in to Blackdust that turn, but no sign of it... and don't say it needs another turn, if you forgot to add it, just edit his post with it. He won't notice anyways as he probebly won't have seen your post yet anyways (unless he responded ofcourse) ))
 
(( Come on... just read the 2-3 last post on the previus page. then you clearly sees that Exoclyps, Sheri and Fred are on their way with the caravan to Blackdust... and they were to be there by the last post you did in Blackdust ))
 
Lol you guys reply to each other a lot.

I only check this site once a day when I get home from school and sometimes at night after I finish jogging. And I don't reply on weekends until I get home sunday night because I am gone until then from saturday morning.

There is no way in hell the hominids are from my town, I sent ONE man with a treaty. I never said a damn thing about three dudes with orders to fire at Rerzo.

As for the Reactor thing. Dude You have to buy the Empty cells for 1500 gold before you can fill em and sell em. A town would probly pay 1500 gold for them the first time. Then they belong to the town. Then tell The town that they can bring em back to get refilled for 1000 gold from then on. Thats how you work that system easily.

Ok?
 
PyroPhoenix said:
Lol you guys reply to each other a lot.

I only check this site once a day when I get home from school and sometimes at night after I finish jogging. And I don't reply on weekends until I get home sunday night because I am gone until then from saturday morning.

There is no way in hell the hominids are from my town, I sent ONE man with a treaty. I never said a damn thing about three dudes with orders to fire at Rerzo.

As for the Reactor thing. Dude You have to buy the Empty cells for 1500 gold before you can fill em and sell em. A town would probly pay 1500 gold for them the first time. Then they belong to the town. Then tell The town that they can bring em back to get refilled for 1000 gold from then on. Thats how you work that system easily.

Ok?
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That made even less sense about the cells... so Im suposed to buy them empty for $1500 then fill them up with precius energy then sell them for $1500... that makes no sense at all...
 
(( Well, now some real RP it coming up, eh ))

They walk up the camp, goes inside the house were Rerzo's leaders are living in. Its a quite nice house with paintings on the walls (the paintings are painted straight on the walls) A flower in the corner and a little small desk on the floor, wich is indeed small.

"Come in, come in" Zerto says with a big smile on his face. They all walks in and sits down. "Sorry for the mess, the shantys aren't the biggest, but they are cozy, ain't they?" He cleans away some stuffs from the floor. Then he starts again. "Yeah, so you have a treaty of a deffensive alliance. It sure does sound like a neat thing. Lets see" And Zerto brings out a map from the desk and looks at it. "Lets see", he starts again, taking his fingers from Rerzo over to Blackdust. "Looks good, if we can cover this part" and he shows the part on the mapp "... we gonna be avaible so strenghten hard" Zerto looks satisfied. He smiles up and says "Yes, yes, lets do it. Though its a long distanse to cover, so I dunno how high the possibility is... Ill talk with Exoclyps when he comes back to the village, and we will send a man out to you and we will see what can be done." And after that he stands up, walks away and gathers some men in the city.

(( I removed that little speech (well, partly alter it ya could say), couldn't find any decent way to finish the thing up :P And my car, please add it to the info page =) )) (( And about my shotguns, I found 3 in the caravan ya remember, and 1 sold if I read right, so thats 2 left, so 2+2 I should have, right?) )) (( LoL, 3rd thing, what kind of fuel does the car use? is it going on energy cells so I can refill it by my own, or is it something else? ))

"Its about to get things rooling around here", Zerto starts with and points over the village. "We should gather what we know and put it togheter and make our self strong." He walks along the streets and looks around, eventualy facing the people again. "William, what did you learn from the ghoal that were in our town for a whille?", Zerto asks. After that he figures its about time to get some propper deffenses and orders the 6 remaning mens to work on a good and strong trenchline facing south, southeast and east. After he gave them some work to do he heads back to William to take a look at what he learned. (( hmm, not sure here. If I go around and state what he learned I could go unballanced, so I guess its best you say what he learn so you can go and keep it ballanced ))
 
At dawn, Exoclyps, Sheri and Fred find themselves on the outskirts of Rerzo. A cold and briskful morning, signaling the begining of fall. But not much changed in Fall, only the climate. No leaves to change red, yellow and other deep,warm colors.

As they returned inside of the outpost, Rerzo, Exoclyps put the remaining shotgun aside in one of the shantys. He put the $400 inside Rerzo's treasury, a chest with a stainless-steel lock. Unpenetrable unless you got some high-tech shit.

(OCC-This is kinda about Darkwood. I think that the whole Xzo thing is phoney and unrealistic.)
 
(( Yeah... well, it didn't really turn out exactly as I first planned... First I wanted to introduce a doctor with a bit more of a personality, like you are going into all of your mens now. And after that I wanted him to be a lil more then a doctor, using old medicine studies and such, herbs and that. Though It went a bit wrong I guess, to mystical and magical about him, wich isn't realistic in this world. If you desire I can go back and rewritte him a bit. Though then Ill rewritte the last part I did. And the blue berries would never existed then, coz those are a bit overhand to I guess. But he shall be avaible to make painreliveing stuffs as well as concentrateboosting shit and all that, but at a more controlled bases. (somewhat like the "shaman" in Arroy) If it won't work out Ill just replace him smothly. ))
 
(No, no you can keep the berries and all that stuff. Just for future reference, I'd prefer if he wasn't so "weird" and just another dude. Maybe he's going to die in a few years/months and wants his knowledge carried out. That's a good lead.)
 
(( K, Ill keep the berries around... but I still changed the last move there... as I see it, its kinda wierd he can go around and clean out the wholle city from the disease who was just to effect animals (and to little time for it to mutate I think it was, though with the current timespawn with the radiationa nd such), anyways, I redid it ))
 
Ugh. About the batteries. Yea I know it doesn't make sense to resell em for the same price you bought em. But that isn't where the money comes from. Lets say that Town A uses Town B to supply it with energy. Now town B sold them batteries and powered the town for a week or so. Town A sends the batteries back to be recharged by town B, and town B takes a small fee for this procedure.

That is where the money comes from. The recharge not the first sale.
 
(( About the batteries again. Well, why would it then stop them from buying the empty sells for $1500 then go fill it at me for $1000? I know that wouldn't happend, but selling em for same price ya bought doesn't make sense in my head... it would make some sense if say the cells costed me $1000 to buy when empty (I don't regain all, but it makes the energy actualy show a value here. I hope ya get me) ))

(( And... my new $400 wasn't added... neither was the car... and what energy did the car use? ))

(( Just lets clear all these stuffs out so we can keep playing :) ))
 
(The truck uses micro energy cells, the same things you will produce. Hopefully you can raise enough $ for 'em.)
 
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