OOC Chapter 3 Lone Wanderers

Dude, as I've said before (but you are like youre characther in temperment and havent read it seems) I'm transitioning my characther. He llost the Power armour, and will lose all but his training around the end of the chapter.
 
"Oh, yeah, you don't like what I do, I'll have my character loose everything in about 25 posts...."

That's basically what you are saying, Psycho, instead of handling it NOW and HERE, all you're doing is postponing your fall from superhumanity, and instead of leaving it at what you had(500 rounds with a p90, man from the past, and marine training(All of which are incredibly improbable)), you actually ADDED things. Yeah, way to go to show your good will.
Please, PsychoSniper, could you PLEASE just let this character go? He has NO depth and NO place in this cooperative novel, so there is no problem with "losing" some character you worked ages on to perfect(And if you did, I have to say the result is pitiful), you can whip up a decent character for Lone Wanderers, but NO GODDAMN SUPERMAN. In case you hadn't noticed, you have no RIGHT to post in the thread, you are posting there because the mods and admins allow you to post. So please, be thankful, and TRY to keep in mind what this is. Or go somewhere else.
 
Ok I haven't said much yet and I don't really wish too. I'm not in the best position to talk but I was just wondering about something...

PyschoSniper, you talked about your character being in Bio med, I presume you mean at the Sierra Army depot (Correct me if im wrong of course). Now you talk about going on a quest to reverse whatever problem your character has. Just where do you plan on going? Were not exactly close to the Fallout 2 location if infact that’s where you plan on going...

If you don't plan on going there then where? As far as I can tell, there aint too many pre war military bases around here, which are abandoned and still full of supplies. How would you come across this information if you’re from the east anyway?

I think a fair few of the problems (Not all by no means) here are caused by the fact that your trying to incorporate a character from a fan fic taking place in the Fallout 2 setting and locations with a background adapted to Fallout 2 into an RP that has beep kept as far away from the original Fallout's as possible.

If your going to stay with us here, I think the first thing you should do is create a character that has nothing to do with your Fan fic and more to do with Lone Wanderers...
 
Okay then, now that I have just read your latest post, PsychoSniper, I'm even more amazed:

1. Your super-character just freed himself of his bonds.
2. Your super-character then proceeded to heal himself, grab his gun, and detect the enemy, WHILE PIP AND TALON WERE STILL IN THE ROOM.
3.And you also forgot the fact that your character must've been in quite a lot of pain, and that he must've cared, since he screamed. A cooperative novel means that you cannot ignore what everyone does. If you didn't agree with what I did to your character, then say so, but do NOT ignore it.
4. YOu obviously haven't tried to listen to us, since you just ignored everything we said, and even improved your character.
5. YOu INSIST on tying in your fan fic character. Great, I like the idea of fan fiction characters in any roleplay, because they tend to have much more background. BUT IT STILL NEEDS TO FIT. And this doesn't. So, please, I beg of you, drop it. Don't say that you'll fix it later on. Just, drop it.

What I'm going to do, is ignore your post completely. I feel it has no place here, and that it completely fucks up the story. So, too bad, but I'm ignoring it.

Welsh, Gunslinger, anyone else: If you feel that I shouldn't, please say so, but I honestly think that that was just too much.
 
And the very next comment: How the $%^&* does a lowly grunt know that that thing is an aircraft homing device? Nevermind the fact that he should still be writhin pain.
 
I was drunk at the time, I removed that post.
And for the Bio Med part, I'll have him start to have problems that cause him to seek out a base he heard about. Remember the solder removed from bio med in serria ? Well my guy's the next ecperiment, same problem, but takes longet to kill. He knew that cause the docs told him, and now he's wanting to get to the medical facility that did the main research on Bow Med gel since they had allegidly found a solution and were going to use it on him before removing him from the bio med gel, but he went in just days before the bombs fell.
 
I got the hangover to prove it.
If you dont like my writing style, sorry this is my first RP to do in years.
 
Ok, this is your first RP, then as a new comer, take the advice that the more experienced writers here are giving you because up to now you haven't. Its the only way your going to get through this and improve.

One other thing i forgot to mention in my earlier post. You really need to add some reaslim to your contributions because up to now its really and i mean really lacking in that area...

He got up and slung his P90 on his back and hefted his Gauss minigun. As the aircraft rained fire, he made them pay for the destruction, 1 blew up midair, and several more had to break off the attack with damage. He paid for his heoric defense. Missiles hit around him, fracturing his armor and destroying has minigun. All around him was destruction. "I have become death, detsroyer od worlds" he mutterd to himself before wandering off in the direction of the caravan that had left earlier.

This is a perfect example and in my opinion one of the worst.

Remember...realism!
 
Seems to me as if the board has spoken in consensus.

Psycho, if you want to develop your character do it on Fan Fic. Here, drop the character. If you want to continue in Lone Wanderers, create a new character.

Gunslinger and everyone else, regrets but I have a lot of work on the plate today and will not be able to do the necessary fixes. Gunslinger, as mod, you have my ok to do whatever you think is necessary.

In the meantime, I suggest that PS's contributions be ignored.

Reaper- Nice to have you back. We have missed ya.
 
Ok, make my first characther a spy and he gets killed in interrogation.

I'll wait til the end of the chapter to rejoin, or I could meet up with Caleb before he rejoins ?

My favorite kind of characther is a vault dweller who doesnt know S**t bout the waste's, so if possible, I'd like to have my chara be a vault dweller from vault 76 with a 9mm pistol with 20-30 rounds a few stims and a geiger counter.

I'll leave it to the mods for how he joins, please post in OCC when my guy is about to be added.
 
Ok, I made a suggestion on Story Assistance but this might work as well.

Gunslinger do you want to do the editing on this?
 
Dont do any editing, have my first guy die durring interrogation and wind up having been a spy.


anyway, also have my vault dweller be a guy that was kicked for wanting to see the outside world.

Bring him in whenever it fits, just PM me so I'll know to look.
 
Ok, folks, I think here's the situation.

PS is going to create a new character and we will figure how to incorporate him into the game. For now, the character he has provided will be a spy so far will be a spy. Sander you can interrogate the hell out of him if you want.

I have asked Gunslinger to edit as he wishes. If gunslinger doesn't I will probably edit tomorrow or Saturday.

Ok, now lets not get too nasty here. Remember this is a cooperative board not a hostile one. And lets get back to posting.

Again, its nice to have almost everyone back.
 
The character of Marine is just so out of place that I'm tempted to delete PsychoSniper's posts completely and start of with a clean slate. However, he's interacted and is mentioned in some of the other's posts.

Therefore, I'm going back to clean up his work (something that could have easily been avoided) and have Marine eventually get killed.

Let this be a lesson for any newcomers: try to read the entire RPG to get a feel for it. If your unwilling to do that, just post on the characters thread and simply ask for advice.

For now, everyone please ignore all of PsychoSniper's last posts. And PsychoSniper, please wait until this chapter is over to introduce your character. I've got enough work on my hands as it is to edit your last posts.

Hope this pleases all.
 
Actually, instead of having to delete Psycho's post, I think we can make a story out of this.

Thus far, the four Slayers (if they indeed are Slayers) are after a prize, an obscure one at that. Welsh, you've either intended it as the PipBoys on Gabriel or Pipboy (the character). But why can't it be Marine?

Let's get this clear: Giles sticks out like a sore thumb. His background story seems fake. He enters the group out of the blue. The other characters don't know what he's done, only that he is most likely insane.

What I'm proposing is that the Slayers are actually after Giles, who is a renegade Slayer himself. It would be a good idea for the marine to come to a bad end in the encounter with the Slayers. Looking over the old posts, I can see that I can't just simply delete PsychoSniper's posts. His character has already interacted with Talon and Pipboy and the rest of the caravan is aware of him. The only feasible thing I see is that he gets killed.

I'll have to make changes to the character of Marine. Okay, so Giles (or marine, or whatever the fuck his name is; frankly, it won't matter soon since he's going to take a dirtnap) fails a mental evaluation in the ranks of the Slayers. He's either delusional or completely insane. The Slayers are about to put him out of his misery but he's able to escape the compound. He begins thinking himself to be a marine from the past (the events with gunning down helicopters is just in his own head). The Slayers know that Giles has lost his mind but they can't risk having him compromise their position or situation. Giles still thinks he's a marine when he comes into our caravan. So they're gunning for him before Giles can inadvertently (in his dellusional state) give away any information.

Does this work with everyone? Can you guys go with it? If not, it's okay. I hate to let Psycho's problem fall onto the others to correct but its the only feasible way.

Post any other ideas or if you're willing to have a go with it, guys.
 
Works fer me. I was content to have him get killed in interrogation.

Why not have him be the secondary objective? And have him explain he beacon to pip, so the beacon is used in a trap.
 
Gah, so much activity happening in the boards today (being a moderator is tough).

Okay, Syphon, you wanted to know if you're character can fall in love with a NPC? I'm okay with that, since a love interest is just NPC interaction. NPC's are always a good choice to fall back on if your character is getting too stale for your tastes. And there's no law against a love interest, since Gabriel and Rogue have something going between them.

Syphon, you really should have posted your request in the OOC board. Please do not respond to PsychoSniper's reply in the IC post, he's just trying to incite chaos. Maverick, please post your ideas on the suggestoin in the OOC topic (but you're new here, you didn't really know).
 
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