RyanFialcowitz
It Wandered In From the Wastes
1.) Klamath appears on the worldmap without The Elder mentioning where it is. She does have a line about its location- but it shows up without the player hearing it.
2.) Torr is missing a period in his opening line and some capitliztion in his last.
3.) Cameron doesn't actually unlock the doors in the temple. Not a bug but could be a nice feature in the expansion pack.
4.) Klamath dog needs periods in floats.
5.) Actions within dialog are inconsisent across the game. in Klamath some have capatlization and some not. They should at least be consistent within the same town. Ardin, the dog and Sajag are affected in Klamath.
6.) You can call John Sullivan bynme even if he never tells it to you.
7.) John Sullivan- "land of fairies" should have a "the" in there.
8) Maida has an oddly placed ; in her dilaog about freeing Sulik.
10.) In Sulik's dialog after being freed there was one line with about three un-needed commas.
11.) Bar Patron in Moms (The Den): "They like to be pet like a dog does." - that should be "petted".
12.) You can't get the quest to recover the locket unless you follow a specific dialog path with the ghost. However, before you get to the right node she mentions she lost something. You can then exit dialog and go talk to Mom about who mentions Joey selling jewelry- but since you don't have the quest you can't talk to Joey about it. Perhaps not a bug- but assuredly an annoyance.
13.) Get permission from Metzger for gang war- should have a "the" in there.
14.) You talk to the various Slavers about Vic despite not knowing that he is a slave.
15.) Slaver: "He broke something of my boss's." - It should be "boss'".
16.) When you're selling NPCs to Metzger the names don't have periods after them. This might also be the case in other areas where you can sell NPCs.
17.) While talking to Tyler about the party his last line needs a period.
18.) Dr. Troy: "You mentioned you were something of a doctor." -even though you've never talked to him before. The issue isn't knowing he's a doctor but that you refer to a past conversation that never took place. Perhaps: "You look like a doctor- I'm something of a doctor myself".
19.) You can hear about the Jet problem from Tubby but not inform McClure of it in Vault City.
20.) When talking to Lenny about joining your party with the Empathy perk you have three options: blue, red, green. The red and the green are mixed up.
21.) Your character knows Lumpy's name in Gecko without being told.
22.) Lumpy: "But everyone here just call me Lumpy." - should be "calls".
23.) You can ask Lumpy who is Skeeter is whithout hearing about him.
24.) When you ask Gordon who his source is: "Its figures all check out." - should be "It's".
25.) Gecko computer: "This service no longer in memory." -needs an "is" in there.
26.) The Den is listed as "Den" on the worldmap and "The Den" on the list on the right.
27.) Apparently Hakunin's visions don't have subtitles. I'm pretty sure I saw text files containing the text but I could be mistaken. Not sure what can be done about this one.
-Ryan P. Fialcowitz
2.) Torr is missing a period in his opening line and some capitliztion in his last.
3.) Cameron doesn't actually unlock the doors in the temple. Not a bug but could be a nice feature in the expansion pack.
4.) Klamath dog needs periods in floats.
5.) Actions within dialog are inconsisent across the game. in Klamath some have capatlization and some not. They should at least be consistent within the same town. Ardin, the dog and Sajag are affected in Klamath.
6.) You can call John Sullivan bynme even if he never tells it to you.
7.) John Sullivan- "land of fairies" should have a "the" in there.
8) Maida has an oddly placed ; in her dilaog about freeing Sulik.
10.) In Sulik's dialog after being freed there was one line with about three un-needed commas.
11.) Bar Patron in Moms (The Den): "They like to be pet like a dog does." - that should be "petted".
12.) You can't get the quest to recover the locket unless you follow a specific dialog path with the ghost. However, before you get to the right node she mentions she lost something. You can then exit dialog and go talk to Mom about who mentions Joey selling jewelry- but since you don't have the quest you can't talk to Joey about it. Perhaps not a bug- but assuredly an annoyance.
13.) Get permission from Metzger for gang war- should have a "the" in there.
14.) You talk to the various Slavers about Vic despite not knowing that he is a slave.
15.) Slaver: "He broke something of my boss's." - It should be "boss'".
16.) When you're selling NPCs to Metzger the names don't have periods after them. This might also be the case in other areas where you can sell NPCs.
17.) While talking to Tyler about the party his last line needs a period.
18.) Dr. Troy: "You mentioned you were something of a doctor." -even though you've never talked to him before. The issue isn't knowing he's a doctor but that you refer to a past conversation that never took place. Perhaps: "You look like a doctor- I'm something of a doctor myself".
19.) You can hear about the Jet problem from Tubby but not inform McClure of it in Vault City.
20.) When talking to Lenny about joining your party with the Empathy perk you have three options: blue, red, green. The red and the green are mixed up.
21.) Your character knows Lumpy's name in Gecko without being told.
22.) Lumpy: "But everyone here just call me Lumpy." - should be "calls".
23.) You can ask Lumpy who is Skeeter is whithout hearing about him.
24.) When you ask Gordon who his source is: "Its figures all check out." - should be "It's".
25.) Gecko computer: "This service no longer in memory." -needs an "is" in there.
26.) The Den is listed as "Den" on the worldmap and "The Den" on the list on the right.
27.) Apparently Hakunin's visions don't have subtitles. I'm pretty sure I saw text files containing the text but I could be mistaken. Not sure what can be done about this one.
-Ryan P. Fialcowitz
o as the man directs.::" like all other actions that are described in dialog.
I am more into the coding aspect and making simple textual changes gets boring to me after a while. I shall package up all my message files and post them on my sever for you the download and modify. I have corrected all your other textual mistakes and thus only the standardization of the command actions would need to be done.