lisac2k said:
Don’t worry Equilerex is more than skilled at this sort of stuff…so much of the new beautiful art at Mutants Rising was supplied by his hands.
Fan-made Fallout movie short
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Don’t worry Equilerex is more than skilled at this sort of stuff…so much of the new beautiful art at Mutants Rising was supplied by his hands.
fixed up the video so im actually happy with it now... much smoother, shorter and more refined, just waiting on the voiceover so i can reupload it ^^ (probably sometime tomorrow or so)
@bog yeah, i know the feeling but post apoc pants are hard to come by
, didnt have leather ones, the blue worker pants were too small and since my budget was $0 i just tore up old jeans, tried to rub some dirt on them but it didnt stay on for the whole hour 
luckily theire not seen much in the mess of color for most of the clip
@bog yeah, i know the feeling but post apoc pants are hard to come by
, didnt have leather ones, the blue worker pants were too small and since my budget was $0 i just tore up old jeans, tried to rub some dirt on them but it didnt stay on for the whole hour luckily theire not seen much in the mess of color for most of the clip
cunningandvalor
It Wandered In From the Wastes
equilerex said:
Sorry, I'm at work, haha. My bosses would probably think its weird if I busted into my "war, war never changes" voice. I'll definitely have the voiceover over to Equilerex tonight.
Expect good things soon.
The Vault Dweller
always looking for water.
I liked it. Impressive blood effect. I had no idea MR was working on stuff like this besides the game mod too.
Sincerely,
The Vault Dweller
Sincerely,
The Vault Dweller
patriot_41
Where'd That 6th Toe Come From?
I like the post-apoc look despite the greenery, the action scene looks pretty cool, even though you've chosen a few really strange viewpoints. Only the first shot of the explosion looked convincing, the rest weren't good enough, as others said.
I'd also like to say, that I totally disagree with the editing - the rhythm was completely off. I also had issues with the color correction - the color temp changes mid-sentence. The sound could use some more work - the sound effect of the engine stopped abruptly, there was no atmosphere to fill in the gaps and the sound effects had different volume and quality.
Before others bash me into pieces - criticism is essential if you want to evolve.
I'd also like to say, that I totally disagree with the editing - the rhythm was completely off. I also had issues with the color correction - the color temp changes mid-sentence. The sound could use some more work - the sound effect of the engine stopped abruptly, there was no atmosphere to fill in the gaps and the sound effects had different volume and quality.
Before others bash me into pieces - criticism is essential if you want to evolve.
waiting patiently ^^cunningandvalor said:
MR's not, but since one certain member was making a movie, he thought he might tie it with MR
thanks, CC is definitely useful. where did you notice the color temp change tho? havent noticed and the source footage should have the same correction throughout the clip (there might be a bit of exposure flicker though since its taken up with a mirror camera but i think that adds to the roughness) as for the rithm, agreed, sent yoou the reworked clip to see if its any better
sound's as it is, evened it out a bit on the new one but still havent put much time into it
hey, i love satire movies!Nexuiz said:
And how can you use less money then $0 ??
eh, thnanks for watcing atleast... everyone has their own taste... and ofc it wasnt perfect either since it was my first movie like this
For those interested, The Updated version is up, mostly minor edits but i think its a lot better now!
equilerex said:
Nexuiz said:
equilerex said:
Nice editing, it's become a lot better with being shorter, more compressed. The voice over ain't perfect but it's a gigantic leap forward when compared to the first voice over. And the explosion works better now, it's like only the hood is burning and that works.
GREAT STUFF, equilerex. Especially when considering your time/budget/experience.
here ya go public http://www.veoh.com/browse/videos/category/entertainment/watch/v20246885G8ZPdKgB
think il also up to youtube at some point.
well, thanks guys, glad the edit worked out
the voiceover was pretty good but i butchered it quite a bit to fit it in the way i wanted (the part with the radio got a pretty bad transition and the background sound is a bit high in places.. )
@Nexuiz hehe, the joke would have worked if you had a reputation of oh, lets say continuum
For those too lazy to look up the work thread, heres some goodies:
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think il also up to youtube at some point.
well, thanks guys, glad the edit worked out
the voiceover was pretty good but i butchered it quite a bit to fit it in the way i wanted (the part with the radio got a pretty bad transition and the background sound is a bit high in places.. )
@Nexuiz hehe, the joke would have worked if you had a reputation of oh, lets say continuum
For those too lazy to look up the work thread, heres some goodies:
Okay let's see.
Seen the previous version. The sound effects were very bad.
But now take a look at the new version.
It sounds better, goes better.
I think the voice over sometimes sounds gay and cheezy. No offence, it's an improvement.
Liked the part in the previous version, where the other dude starts sneaking on the main guy, quickly. It could have been a cool scene if done right. Here when you have the voice over while seeing what's the other sees, makes it kinda weird. Not a good direction IMO.
The viewer needs to be aware of who's talking. Here is a bit confusing.
The blood scene is awesome.
The explosion part is bad, mainly because of the sound (which is mainly non-existent).
The part where he opens the trunk would be a great one if it was done a bit differently. The sound you put there is like when opening a can of beer. Good shots but not used the way I would (which would make it a bit better IMO).
Another thing is, when he starts the green thingy in the car, it cuts a bit too quick and you can't hear what the narrator is saying (the sound is too loud).
Keep on going, you'll get there
Thanks for putting me in the end creadits. A little, bright tear came out of my eye...
Seen the previous version. The sound effects were very bad.
But now take a look at the new version.
It sounds better, goes better.
I think the voice over sometimes sounds gay and cheezy. No offence, it's an improvement.
Liked the part in the previous version, where the other dude starts sneaking on the main guy, quickly. It could have been a cool scene if done right. Here when you have the voice over while seeing what's the other sees, makes it kinda weird. Not a good direction IMO.
The viewer needs to be aware of who's talking. Here is a bit confusing.
The blood scene is awesome.
The explosion part is bad, mainly because of the sound (which is mainly non-existent).
The part where he opens the trunk would be a great one if it was done a bit differently. The sound you put there is like when opening a can of beer. Good shots but not used the way I would (which would make it a bit better IMO).
Another thing is, when he starts the green thingy in the car, it cuts a bit too quick and you can't hear what the narrator is saying (the sound is too loud).
Keep on going, you'll get there
Thanks for putting me in the end creadits. A little, bright tear came out of my eye...
thanks for the feedback... the explosion sound is a good tip, would have edited if if i had known...
sneaking i had to cut short since it was as long as the rest of the clip and didnt fit with the overall pace (and the filming sucks but thats a whole other story)
the green cut- i like it, narrator getting lost in the background- happens in many places but the source for the sound edit had all the sounds merged so couldnt do much.
as for the clunky rustbucket sound, that is actually the original noise from the camera (reality suxors )
and clad to have you there.. the track was a great fit!
what did you need veoh btw if you dont mind me asking?
sneaking i had to cut short since it was as long as the rest of the clip and didnt fit with the overall pace (and the filming sucks but thats a whole other story)
the green cut- i like it, narrator getting lost in the background- happens in many places but the source for the sound edit had all the sounds merged so couldnt do much.
as for the clunky rustbucket sound, that is actually the original noise from the camera
(reality suxors )and clad to have you there.. the track was a great fit!
what did you need veoh btw if you dont mind me asking?
