Not a bad Vault Dweller/Chosen One/whoever, but picture is too wide and should center more on the protagonist himself, not the needless background stuff. Cropping and increasing size a bit will do it wonders.
I can't really remember where I got it from, probably found it online, thought it was cool and it got lost in one of my folders.
6/10 because it's a watch +1 because its a Rolex.
8/10 I like that comic style. Almost reminds me of the old Japanese Otaku comics from the 1990's. Sad to see Otaku's dying here in the US, and even in Japan a little.