Vault 12 comic - The Forum Thread

Yay for another page! This is getting better and better by every update. I like your drawing too, very nice. Quality stuff.
 
Nice. Things are going a little slow for my taste but I guess that it's due to the "one page at the time" thingy. Nice, still !
 
Nice :D . I love how you show the tragedy and the anguish of the vault dwellers :) .
 
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Thanks for the comment, Sorrow.

Okay, I'm taking a little break now, so no comic in brief two weeks. However, I think I'll post some artworks or other things not exactly related to the comic in substitute. Stay tuned for some Wasteland stuff next week, then!

And still bon appetit on todays comic. Bon appetit!
 
xulm said:
Okay, I'm taking a little break now, so no comic in brief two weeks.
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:( :cry:

xulm said:
However, I think I'll post some artworks or other things not exactly related to the comic in substitute. Stay tuned for some Wasteland stuff next week, then!
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:D :clap:

I'm a little confused with this one though. When the officer says "Don't - you rest" is it meant to be something like "don't delay" or is he addressing the rest of the crowd and stops mid-sentence?
 
Maybe it's addressed to the rest of the crowd that they shouldn't do anything stupid (unless they already scattered)...
 
Well, the officers speech was addressed to the protagonist only.

I believe that the "rest" word is the one confusing - it's a verb here, not a noun. What's more, it's all a citation - it might be clear when spoken, but it looks it makes whole page unclear when written down. My bad.
I'll definitely have to work on the dialogue here, maybe even before finishing the whole season.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, guys!
 
I can't wait to see another page, situation is getting so complicated...
Great page like always, keep it up.
 
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