Heh, made my way to the EPA for the first time (got stuck in game-crashing loops the last time I played the RP, a few years ago, so I never experienced every new area, so I'm having SEVERAL first-times, right now! ^^ ) and I was very confused by the directions on the VT Labs wiki. I found the posts here that explained that the area had been changed, so now I'm less confused, and enjoying my exploration, again!
But, getting down to business....
No bugs, this time, but I have noticed a couple typos here and there that should be easily fixed. One was recurring, so I was wondering if it was actually "intended", but I'm sure it's a genuine typo.
1) Bishop's dialog when first delivering Moore's package -
http://www.4shared.com/photo/WM0WqKES/F2RP_212b_Typo_1.html
You could either change it to "long enough to actually do" or "long enough actually to do", but I think the first suggestion is both grammatically more accurate, and comes more naturally when speaking.
2) Dialog from Broken Hills bar owner, when asking about work -
http://www.4shared.com/photo/nmRv3Xhg/F2RP_212b_Typo_2.html
First of a recurring typo. Could be changed to "Bill, the Outfitter" or "the Outfitter, Bill". I doubt the people of Broken Hills have genuinely come to call him "the Bill", but unless that's the case, this is a typo...
3) Dialog with Max regarding Chad (RP quest) -
http://www.4shared.com/photo/0Yjpxjg-/F2RP_212b_Typo_3.html
Missing a "'s" or "is", unless he skips it as part of slang. Should be changed to "that's supposed to" or "that is supposed to".
4) Dialog with Chad himself, regarding work -
http://www.4shared.com/photo/gMZFZxkL/F2RP_212b_Typo_4.html
Second instance of the recurring typo. Could be changed to either "with Bill -- that's the Outfitter --" or "with the Outfitter -- that's Bill --". I believe the latter suggestion is what was intended for the line. It reflects Chad's disposition toward Bill as someone he's worked closely with, while still addressing a total stranger about him.
Should be relatively simple fixes, as I imagine sifting through the code to find the dialogs themselves would be the toughest part, so I did my best to categorize them and their "directions". =)