Fallout Comic

Nice comic Twelvemotion, rehashes the Fallout story without being boring, dialogue that isn't overdone, and a unique blend of style.

Good work, keep on making them. We'll <3 you for it :D
 
School has been hitting me hard the last week or so. I haven't forgotten about it, and all the great positive feedback will keep me going for sure. It might be a few days for another update though.
 
Alright, finally got some school crap out of the way and tacked on two more panels. The scorpion cave really sucks because it's so dark... I hope the stuff isn't to hard to see.

The Water Chip
 
Twelve Motion said:
Alright, finally got some school crap out of the way and tacked on two more panels. The scorpion cave really sucks because it's so dark... I hope the stuff isn't to hard to see.

The Water Chip
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I think you forgot to upload the page with the new images again. I only see the Vault 15 one as the last panel =\

Edit: Well, holy shit. I posted and refreshed and you updated that second. AMAZING timing. Time to go read it.

Edit Edit: NICE! Keep making them. This comic is addictive! :)
 
I like how the explosives didnt work after they decided to destroy the cave entrance rather than fight all the radscorpions. Gave it an element of surprise and made the characters thinking ones instead of just being lifted from the game directly. Just as importantly they dont appear perfect with a mistake like that happening...and that makes it believable.

Sincerely,
The Vault Dweller
 
Thanks vault dweller, insightful comment. Thanks to everyone to enjoys. I will try to get some more of it down asap.
 
The last page is a bit dark, but it's still okay thanks to the red line around Ian (and it is pretty dark in that cave, of course). Anyway: great stuff. Keep up the good work! :ok:
 
Yeah I don't know if you can even tell, but on that last frame the background is green, a night vision vibe. But yeah sadly I need to do at least 2 more frames in the cave before we see daylight again.
 
Uhm, excellent screencapture timing?

And uhm, just a small suggestion, but maybe it's a nice idea to start splitting the comic up in different pages... just a thought ;)
 
The red glow around ian in the last fram is an effect i added totally outside the game.

Morp, are you talking like... so you don't have to scroll all the way down?
 
Twelve Motion said:
Morp, are you talking like... so you don't have to scroll all the way down?
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Look at the man's avatar: if he's too lazy to remove that Santa Claus hat, then yes, he's probably too lazy to scroll all the way down.
 
If it was split into pages, nicely ordered and updating even as much as semi-regularly, I would love to make a newspost about it.

Splitting them into pages of 1-3 or "storylines" (like the Caves, Vault 13, Radscorpions, all seperate storylines) is a must, though, this format just bothers people.
 
Twelve Motion said:
Morp, are you talking like... so you don't have to scroll all the way down?
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Yeah, like that...

alec said:
Look at the man's avatar: if he's too lazy to remove that Santa Claus hat, then yes, he's probably too lazy to scroll all the way down.
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Just for your information, I kinda like the Santa Hat... and no, I'm not too lazy to scroll all the way down... how would I know there is an "all the way down" if I didn't scroll all the way down...
 
Ok guys, I split it up into chapters and changes the layout so now the pages go in side by side pairs. Looks much better now. Also the link has changes again so here is the new one, tell me if the layout is satisfactory.

The Water Chip

Edit: I added a new panel.
 
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